~Pyaar~ ( Geet and Maan)

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CHARACTERS
Geet Handa- An 18 year old modern/ traditonal girl from Punjab studying in Delhi. Fun loving, bubbly, Beautiful, smart.

Maan Singh Khurana- 25 year old business tycoon from Delhi. HOT, charming yet angry.

Savitri Devi- Maan's Dadimaa. Very kind and wants the best for her grandson.

Dev- 22 years old. Maan's younger brother. Kind, handsome and loving.

Rano- Geet's Mother.

Kuldip- Geet's Father.
Aditya- Geet's friend who is attractive but Geet doesn't really like him that much
PART 4
Geet went to Riddhima's house to get ready.
Geet- Yaar, main kya pehnogi! Mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha!!
Riddhima- Geet! Relax! Mere paas bahut sarees hain, vahan drawer mein dekho, vahan 5-6 sarees hain, usmein se dehklo.
Geet looked at the sarees. There was one black saree.
Geet- Ewww....
Then a light pink saree.
Geet- Blahhhhh
Then a yellow saree.
Geet- Chi Chi! Yellow Yellow Dirty Fellow!
Riddhima laughs.
Then a blue saree.
Geet- Ughhhhh
Then a green saree with yellow designs on it.
Geet- Digusting! Riddhima you have such bad taste!
Riddhima glares at her.
Riddhima-GEET! Agar accha nahi lagta to mat pehno.
Then, Geet saw a red saree.
Geet smiles.
Geet- It's beautiful.
Riddhima- Geet! Yeh pehnlo! It's so hot!
Geet- Riddhu!! Main koi bride thori na hoon! Vaise mera favorite color...uhmm try kar leti hoon.
Geet comes out after five minutes in the red saree.
Riddhima- WOW! Geet!!!!! You look GORGEOUS!!!! Tum yeh hi pehanogi!!
Geet smiles and looks at herself in the mirror.
Geet- Okay.
AT THE PARTY
Armaan- Chief Guest aa gaya hain!
Everyone stands in nicely as the Chief Guest arrives. He made a dashing entry in a Black Tuxedo with a black shirt and a red tie. He looked amazing. It was MAAN SINGH KHURANA! He was the Chief Guest of Riddhima's party.
( I know it sounds odd to have a chief guest at this kind of party, but yeah...its called IMAGINATION..lol)
Geet and Riddhima leave for the party. Geet and Riddhima arrive at the party, as they're about to enter Geet stops.
Geet- Riddhu! Mera purse car mein reh gaya, main lekar aati hoon, tum jao.
Riddhima nods. Geet goes in the car and gets her purse.
Geet makes a grand entry in her red saree. She looked different from all. Her hair was down straight, she had heavy earrings and a nice big ring on. She looked gorgeous. Everyone looked at her as if she was an angel. And one person that was mesmerized was Maan Singh Khurana. He looked at her non-stop. As Geet walked towards everyone, she passed by Maan, not noticing him and he held her saree. Geet stopped. Geet looked back and saw Maan. She smiled.
Geet- Arey! Aap yahan? Kya baat hain, aap to bare parties mein aate hain.
Maan- Main yahan ka Chief Guest hoon.
Geet- Chief Guest? Vah yaar. Tum to bare famous nikle.
Maan smiles.
Geet- Accha main chalti hoon.
Maan didn't notice that he was still holding her saree. Geet turns around to leave only to notice that Maan was still holding her saree. Geet turns around.
Geet- Ab to bula liya maine aapko! Ab to meri saree chod do!
Maan looks at his hand.
Maan- Oh!! Sorry.
Geet smiles and goes towards Riddhima and Armaan.
Armaan- Arey Vah! Tum kitni sundar lag rahi ho! Beautiful!
Riddhima punches his arm.
Riddhima- Mujhe to compliment nahi diya!
Armaan- Riddhima, tum bhi bahut sundar lag rahi ho!
Riddhima smiles.
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Precap- Surprise Surprise and ANOTHER surprise!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AWESOME
LOVING THIS FF
PLZ ADD ME TO UR PM LIST
CON SOON
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing part yaar. Humara maan to latoo hogaya.

Mast party throw ki hai armaan ne maan chief guest hai very good.

Cant wait for the next part.

Do update soon pleaze :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 4
Maan completely gone fida over Geet's look..........he held her sari??????????? arey wah............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

part 4
Maan completely gone fida over Geet's look..........he held her sari??????????? arey wah............

yeah he held her saree!!! kitna scenty hain!!!

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