Maneet ss:Predicament(last part:Page 52)

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SS:Predicament

Part 1

Shilpa was in the kitchen.When she heard some noise from Meera and geet's room.She entered in the room which looked like fighting place.

Meera:Mujhe black wale file chahiye.

Dev:Main woh file geet ka liye laya hoon.Iss file per geet ka naam bhi likha hai.

Geet:Kuch nahi hota,Meera tum yeh file rakh lo main red wale le lete hoon.

Shilpa:Yahan kya ho raha hai?

Dev:Dekhein na maa main aaj apne dost jo printing press main kaam karta hai iss ke pas gaya tha.Wahan se maine meera aur geet ka liye jo files lein thi in per in ka naam paste karwa diya hain.Red wale meera ka liye aur black wale geet ka liye.Per as usual meera ma'am ko geet ke file pasand aa gaye hai aur woh isse lene chahte hain.

Shilpa:Meera bhai itne pyar se laya hai.Rakh lo red wale file.

Meera(Tried to tease dev):Theek hai maa kha rahe hai tu rakh lete hoon per per kabhi kisse cheez per geet ka naam mat paste karna ......

Dev(Irritately):Haan jee miss ko cheez chenne main problem hoge.

He went close to geet.

Dev:Apne fiance ko sambhal kar rakhna kahan miss meera ko woh pasand na aa jaye.

Meera(Teasingly):Tu kya hua agar mujhe woh pasand aa gaya.Aik hi ghar mein jana hai.Dulha exchange kar lein ge.Tu koi farak nahi pare ga.Kyu geet?

Shilpa(Angrily):Shoro ho gaye iss ke bakwas!

Shilpa was about to hit her from the file when meera ran towards the stairs.Pinky was coming down stairs.She lightly hit meera on the head.

Pinky:Main tu aap ko kha rahe hoon maa ka yash aur maan ko bhula lete hain yahan dono mil lein ge inhe.Inho ne tu inke shakal bhi nahi dekhein hai.Aap ne inko picture dekhane se mana kiya hua hai.

Shilpa:Nahi beta tumhi pata hi hai na meera ka jo dil main aata hai bol dete hai.Waise bhi dono ko aik hi ghar main jana hai koi problem na ho jaye.

Geet hugged shilpa.

Geet:Maa meera tu mazak kar rahe thi.Aap itne serious mat hoon.Kuch nahi hoga aap ne jin ka saath hamara rishta tahai kiya hai hum inse hi shadi karein ge.

Shilpa kissed her head.

Shilpa:Mujhe pata hai meera tu jo dil main aata hai bigar soche samijhe bol dete hai.Per tum jo hona tum sab sambhal lo ge.

Precap:Maneet meeting!

Note:I know that this part is boring and kind of stupid.But in this part i just want to show that meera likes to take geet's things.But in next part.Maneet will meet how will they meet?You will find out in the next part till then keep guessing where will they meet.Lets see who will guess the right place.BTW I have added readers in the pm list who want to get pms.Please check page 1 for ur ID.Please leave ur comments.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Thank you sooooooo much for taking time and commenting on character sketch!Sorry for not replying individually b/c i'm busy nowadays!I hope u guys like the part.