~Pyaar~ ( Geet and Maan) - Page 16

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely updates dear......
is geet gng to be pregnant??
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...........
chachi😡.............geet ko rulaya............
y geet is feeling dizzy............
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow... Loved the update...both r so perfect for each other... Oh this massi... I hate her...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yeh massi bhi na pura mazza kharb kardiya
Still loved ur update ;)

Geet feeling dizzy :o. I hope massi wont believe that shes pregnant because of maan :o.

Do update soon dear :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
fabulous part
OMG Hate that massi ughh
awh maaneet are so cutr
omg is geet preggy? haila..
cant wait
update soon
thank ya

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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 29 Geet and Maan dance alot to songs like Sadi Gali, Gal Mithi Mithi Bol etc. And they even slow danced to Teri Ore. All of a sudden, Geet got dizzy while dancing. She started closing her eyes and Maan thought that she was just enjoying but she ended up fainting. Maan was shoced. Maan- GEET! GEET! Everyone started staring at Geet and Maan. Some people got water for Geet but she didn't wake up. Maan picked her up and took her to his house. Dadimaa saw her in Maan's arms. Dadimaa- Maan yeh sab kaise hua??!!
Maan took Geet into his room.
Dadimaa- Beta! Batiye ise kya hua?
Maan- Dadimaa, yeh nachti nachti behosh ho gayi.
Maan doubted Geet being pregnant.
Dadimaa- Beta, hum abhi doctor ko bulate hain.
Maan- NAHI DADI!
Dadimaa- Beta yeh kaise baat hain! Yeh behosh hain!
Maan- Han Dadi, lekin yeh apne aap utt jayegi.
Dadimaa- Nahi Beta.
Maan- Dadimaa, doctor ke paas koi medicine thori na hain, jise Geet ko Hosh aa jayega. Aap rehne dijeye.
Dadimaa nods. After 30 minutes, Geet gained conciousness.
Maan- Geet! Tum..tum theek to ho?
Geet- Han..ahh..Main...main theek hoon. Bas jara sa chakar aa gaya tha.
Maan thought- Kahin Geet pregnant to nahi hain? Us raat ko 5 din ho gaye...aur signs to shuru ho gaye. Us din Geet ke mood swings bhi hoye aur aaj behosh ho gayi.
Geet- Maan, kya hua?
Maan- Kuch nahi. Geet tumhe zara sa idea nahi hain ke tum behosh kaise hua?
Geet- Han, mujhe lagta ke main tired ho gayi thi, shaadi mein bahut ghume aur naache.
Maan nods. Dadimaa enters the room.
Dadimaa- Geet beti, aap kaisi ho?
Geet- Main theek hoon Dadi.
Dadimaa- Beta kya ho gaya tha tumhe?
Geet- Bas chakar aa gaye the.
Dadimaa- Beta agar aap chahe, main Doctor ko bula leti hoon.
Geet- Nahi Dadi. Actually, main ghar chalti hoon.
Dadimaa- Nahi Nahi beta! Akhir tum Maan ki girlfriend ho, tumhe to hak hain yahan rehne ka, tum aaj raat yahan rehogi.
Geet- Lekin Dadi...
Dadimaa- Mujhe kuch nahi sunna.
Geet nods. Geet gets up.
Dadimaa- Arey, kahan jaa rahi ho?
Geet- Uhm, vaise, ghumna hain.
Dadimaa- Nahi Nahi Beta, aapko aaram ki jaroorat hain. Aap bethiye. Main khaana lekar aati hoon.
Geet lays down and Maan lays down next to her.
Maan- Tumne to mujhe dara diya tha.
Geet- Agar aap meri life mein ho, to darr to lagega.
Maan smiles.
Dadimaa comes in the room with some food.
Dadimaa- Yeh lijeye beta, Cheese Sandwich with Vegetables aur side mein fruit with juice.
Geet- Dadimaa, mera kuch meetha khaane ka dil karta hain.
Dadimaa and Maan look at Geet.
Geet- Kya? Aap to keh rahe the ke main Maan ki Girlfriend hoon, mujhe huk hain....to mujhe meetha khaane ka hak bhi hona chahiye.
Dadimaa and Maan laugh.
Dadimaa- Nahi beti, aisi koi baat nahi hain, aapki tabeeat theek nahi hain, es liye main healthy khaana lekar aayi hoon.
Maan observes Geet's eating habits.
Maan thinks- Dekha, mood swings, behosh hona aur ab seedha meetha khaane ko keh rahi hain.
Geet tries to eat the food.
Dadimaa- Beta, kya hua?
Geet- Dadi, yeh khaana kuch jiaada healthy hain.
Dadimaa- Geet, khaalo, aapki tabeeat theek ho jayegi aur fir jithni jaldi theek hogi, utni jaldi meetha khaana.
Geet quickly eats all the food and Maan just stared at her. Geet had some sauce on her face and Maan wiped it off softly. Geet and Maan have an eyelock and Dadimaa stares at them.
Dadimaa- Kamaal ki baat hain, mere sahmne pyaar kar rahe hain.
Maan hugs Geet.
Maan- Mujhe apna pyaar dikhane mein koi sharm nahi hain.
Geet also hugs Maan.
Geet- Mujhe bhi nahi.
Dadimaa- Vaah. Kya jodi hain.
Geet and Maan smile.
Dadimaa- Khush raho bete. Main chalti hoon.
Geet lays down on Maan's lap and pulls Maan by his collar closer.
Geet- Agar aapko TREAT chahiye to pehle mujhe meri TREAT do.
Maan smirks.
Maan- Kaunsa treat? Aur mujhe kya milega.
Geet- Mera treat milne se aapko vo treat milega jo aap hamesha chahte ho.
Geet touches Maan's lips with her hands.
Maan- Kya chahiye meri Jaan-e-Mann?
Geet- Jaan-e- MAAN...Mujhe...mujhe....
Maan- Han bolo.
Geet- Mujhe CHOCOLATE chahiye.
Maan- Kya Chocolate? Aur kuch nahi tha?
Geet- Nahi! Aap kya soch rahe the?
Maan- Kuch nahi...kuch nahi.
Geet- Accha, aap VO soch rahe the. Maan, aap bhi na. Main yahan kuch meethe ke liye mar rahi hoon aur aapko VO suchi hain.
Maan smiles.
Maan- Chalo, main lekar aata hoon. Fridge mein para hain.
Geet- Accha hain...chalo jaldi jaldi lekar aao.
Maan goes to the fridge and gets the chocolate.
Maan- Ab mujhe mera treat milega.
Maan goes back into the room and gives Geet the chocolate.
Maan- Ab mera treat ka kya?
Geet- Arey haan!
Geet gives Maan a piece of chocolate.
Geet- Yeh lijeye.
Maan- Yeh kya hain?
Geet- Aapka treat!
Maan- Lekin tumne to...
Geet- Maine kya?
Maan- Mere lips ko haath lagaya tha aur....
Geet- Maan! Aap chocolate mooh se khaate hain haina? Fir...
Maan puts his head down and blushes.
Geet- ACCHA!!!
Geet punches Maan's shoulder.
Geet- Maan aap to kuch AUR soch rahe the, haina?
Maan- Nahi, aise koi baat nahi hain.
Geet- Maan! Jhoot mat boliye!
Maan grabs Geet and pulls her against the bed and goes on top of her.
Maan- Mujhe to bahut umeede the. Aaj to main apni asli treat lekar aaonga.
Geet blushes.
Maan kisses Geet's forehead, neck and then he points towards her lips.
Geet puts her hands around Maan. Maan slowly touches Geet's lips with his lips. Geet and Maan kiss (MAHIIIIIIII)
Then, Maan's phone rang.
Maan- UGHHHHH!!!!!! Hamesha sahi time par bujta hain yeh kanjar.
Maan- HELLO??!!
No one talked.
Maan- HELLO????!!
Maan tried to kiss Geet agian.
Geet- Bas Maan. Aapko apna treat mil gaya.
Maan- Accha? Mujhe nahi lagta. Meri tasali nahi hui.
Geet- Baad mein tasali kar lena.
Maan smirks.
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Precap- Romantic night+ Pregnancy signs.
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovelyy update as usual
Maneet r jus awesome
cont soooooon
thnx for d PM 🤗

Edited by sonalinaik2006 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Uh-oh preggie signs...
Yay romantic Maaneet night ;)
Update soon! Xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
Woohaa!!
Lovely update...
OMG GEET PREGNANT.!!
What will they do now... Daadima will be angry... And OMG how will she continue her studies...?? Oh lets see how will they handle this situation..?
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Posted: 14 years ago

brilliant update

wow ur dadima so sweet & cute pls cont soonnnnnn the precap sounds
good thanks pm

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