~Pyaar~ ( Geet and Maan) - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
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geet angry
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
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great update

pls cont soonnnnnn thanks pm
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oops yeh kya ho gaya nashe mein................

well b4 sasha comes something has to be done...................
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh my god !!now the fight gonna start
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PART 23
Geet was in her cabin doing work and noticed that Maan was looking at her through the window. Geet got up and closed the curtain. Maan was astonished.
Maan- Ab vo thore din gusse mein rehgi. Lekin koi baat nahi, vo zaroor bulaogi.
Maan calls Geet.
Maan- Geet,mere cabin mein aao.
Geet- Nahi.
Maan- Geet! It's business associated.
Geet- Ok.
Geet goes in Maan's cabin without knocking. Maan smiles.
Geet- Kya chahiye.
Maan- Aaj meeting hain clients ke saath. Tum presentation deogi. It's a design for a house, a newly wedded couple, es liye romantic hona chahiye.
Geet- To kya ghar ka shape heart ki tarah karlo aur saath mein red color?
Maan- Geet, no time for your attitude. Chalo, yeh hain unki details aur yeh hain jo vo chahte hain. Yeh abhi tum written presentation karogi, baad mein blueprints aur designs, they just want to know your ideas.
Geet nods. There was a long silence.
Maan- Vaise to mujhe sorry kehna nahi chahiye kyun ki maine kuch galat nahi kiya, lekin main fir vi tumhe Sorry keh raha hoon.
Geet puts her down.
Geet- Aapko maaf karne mujhe waqt lagega.
Maan- Geet, mujhe samajhne ki koshish karo! I'm desperate.
Geet- Main apne aap ko samajh nahi pa rahi hoon, aapko kaise samjhogi?
Geet had tears in her eyes and left the room. Maan followed her.
Maan comes into Geet's cabin and sits down and holds her hand.
Maan- Geet, yeh tum kya bol rahi ho?
Geet- Meri jindagi to sirf aur sirf khushiyan lagti hain, lekin mere jindagi mein dukh aur dard bhi bahut hain.
Maan- Kaunsa dukh aur dard?
Geet- I don't want to talk about it, jab sahi waqt aayega, tab bataongi.
Maan- Geet, you are my GF, mujhse kyun chupa rahi ho?
Geet was serious. Geet- Aapne bhi to chupaya tha. Mujhe to bataya nahi tha ke aapke jindagi mein kya hua tha.
Maan- Geet, mere kahani bahut complicated hain.
Geet- AUR meri bhi.
Geet gets a phone call from a client.
Geet- Hello. Khurana Constructions.
Geet continues her conversation and puts the caller on hold. Geet looks at Maan.
Geet- Ab aap jayenge ya aise ghoor ghoor kar dekhenge.
Maan lifts his eyebrows.
Geet waves her hand and says "Bye"
Maan leaves the cabin and smiles- She's back:)
Geet and Maan went to the meeting and while Geet was giving the presentation, Maan winked at her.
Geet opens her mouth wide open.
Geet- Hawwwww!!! Yeh aap kya kar rahe ho?
The clients were very confused.
Maan- Geet, maine kya kiya?
Geet- Haye Rabba! Hun mere to puchde aa main ki kita? Tuhanu pata aa ke tusi ki kita!
The clients were confused about Geet talking in Punjabi.
Client- Excuse me? Yeh koi professional company hain ya fir koi Punjabi Dhaba?
Geet smiles.
Geet- Oh..vo kya haina, mujhe Punjabi bolne ki aadat bahut hain. Anyways, hum presentation continue karte hain.
The clients nod as Geet continues the presentation and Maan made kissing faces.
Geet opens her mouth wide open.
Geet- Haww! DEKHA DEKHA! Main galat nahi thi! Dekho yeh kya kar rahe hain! Arey dekho na! Kidda puppy mar rahe hain.
Maan- Puppy? Geet, maine tumpar Kutte ka baccha kab maara!
Geet- Haaww! Aap to mera matlab samajh rahe ho!!!!!
The clients started laughing.
Client- Arey, ab aise lartey rahogi kya? Ab log to aaram se shaadi kar lo!
Maan and Geet- Abhi nahi!
The clients laugh again. Geet and Maan eye lock then Geet suddenly draws her attention towards the meeting.
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Precap- Maan's amazing effort to make Geet happy!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
thnx for d PM
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
awww so cute
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wowww too good yaar.
Kute ka bacha kab mara 🤣 🤣 🤣
Bechari geet and the clients are too good shaadi karlo lol

Loved your update. Oh punjabi touch hor vi vadya hogaya ssi ;)

Do update soon please 😃
Edited by sonu4ever - 14 years ago
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love the meeting scene super amazing pls cont soonnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update................but wats their past abt..................thanks for the pm

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