~Pyaar~ ( Geet and Maan)

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

nice update.................patha nahin yeh sasha kya karne wali hain

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

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+ 12

Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Awesom update dear
Love it
Can't wait for the next

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iluvblue0812

@iluvblue0812

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#83

PART 20
Geet and Maan make food and they come to the table and have lunch. Geet serves the food and accidentally spills some Shahi Paneer on Maan.
Geet- Oh! I'm so sorry! Arey, main saaf karlongi.
Maan- Nahi Geet, main karlonga.
Geet- Nahi Nahi! Main karlongi!
Geet and Maan were busy in their fighting and Dadimaa continued eating while staring at them. Geet elbow hit the bowl of Shahi Paneer and it ALL fell on Maan.
Geet opens her mouth wide open.
Geet- OH!! Maan! I'm SO sorry!
Maan stares at Geet.
Maan- Rs.5,000 ka shirt tha.
Geet- Fir maine thori na kaha tha itni expensive shirt mere ghar ko dalkar aao! Aaye upar chaliye, mere paas kitne saare boys shirts hain.
Maan- Kya? Boys shirt tumhare ghar mein kya kar rahe hain?
Geet- Mujhe boys shirt acche lagte hain. Kitne comfortable hote hain!
Maan stares at Geet and Dadimaa smiles at Geet's childish behaviour. Dadimaa gets a phone call from Nakul.
Nakul- Madam ji, ghar mein Mrs.Chadda aayi hain.
Dadimaa- Oh Ho! Main to bhul gayi thi, main abhi aati hoon.
Dadimaa looks at Maan.
Dadimaa- Maan bete, mujhe jana hain, ghar mein Mrs. Chadda aayi hain.
Maan- Arey Dadimaa, mujhe nahi jana, Mrs. Chadda mere cheeks ko patdi rehti hain.
Dadimaa smiles and stares at Geet. Geet smiles.
Dadimaa- Theek hain bete, lekin apni limits mat cross karna.
Geet- Matlab?
Dadimaa raises her eyebrows and leaves.
Geet- Ewww...tumhari Dadimaa sochti hain ke main aisi vaisi larki hoon, main aisa kabhi nahi karongi.
Geet goes upstairs and Maan follows her and pins her against the wall.
Maan- Han, lekin main to aisa vaisa larka hoon.
Geet- Very funny, ab chodiye, you smell like Shahi Paneer.
Geet goes to her room and gets out a shirt for Maan.
Geet- Yeh lijeye.
Maan looks at the shirt and puts it on in front of Geet. Geet stares at his 6 packs. Geet moves closer and Maan grins.
Geet- Six packs eh?
Maan smiles.
Maan- Han.
Geet moves closer to Maan and touches his six packs.
Geet- Impressive.
Geet realizes she's crossing her limits and moves back and Maan pulls her closer.
Maan- Kahan ja rahi ho?
Geet- Neeche.
Maan- Kyun?
Geet- Ab aise ghoor ghoor kar dekhi chalo aapko?
Maan- Dekhlo, mujhe to koi aitraaz nahi hain.
Geet- Ha Ha! Aap mazaak bahut karte ho haina?
Maan- Han Han.
Geet gets a phone call from Sasha.

Sasha- Geet, mujhe tumse milna hain, akele vo bhi...

Geet- Kya baat hain?

Sasha- Geet, please, it is very urgent. Mujhe tumse bahut zaroori baat karni hain jo main kise ke sahmne nahi kar sakti.

Geet- Bolo kahan milna hain?

Sasha- McDonalds.

Geet- Ok.

Geet looks at Maan.

Geet- Maan, I know that I sound rude, lekin mujhe kahin jana hain, apni friend ke saath, akele mein. It's urgent. I swear, I'll make it up for you tonight!

Maan- Okay.

Geet- Arey, aap kaise jayenge, Dadimaa to driver ke saath chale gayi...Main aapko gadi mein chod deti hoon.

Maan- Geet! Main Maan Singh Khurana hoon, mera driver 2 minutes mein aa jayega.

Geet- Ok.

Geet gets ready and Maan leaves. Geet goes to McDonalds and Sasha is there. Sasha hugs Geet.

Sasha- I'm sorry Geet! I'm really sorry!

Geet- Tum sorry kyun bol rahi ho?

Sasha- Geet, I'm a really mean bitch, maine tumhare saath bahut bura kiya. Mujhe tumhare saath aisa nahi karna chahiye tha! You were right, I have no sense at all!

Geet smiles.

Sasha- Main tumhare saath ek nayi shuruat karna chahti hoon.

Geet- Let's start as friends.

Sasha- Good idea. I really want to be your friend. Main ab ek acchi aurat banna chahti hoon, I want to be nice.

Geet- I'm glad that you learned your mistake.

Sasha- Geet! Trust me I did! I learned my mistake! I just want to be your friend.

Geet- Me too.

Sasha gets a phone call.

Sasha- Geet, mujhe kaam ke liye jana hain, I'll meet you tomorrow at work, Bye!

Geet- Bye!

Sasha leaves McDonalds and goes in her car and smirks.

Sasha- Step 1 complete, Ms. Geet Handa.

Geet is happy that Sasha and her aren't fighting anymore.

Geet- Well, atleast we are finally friends.

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Precap- Sasha's plan continues

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#84

arey yaar geet itna jagda kar rahi thi aur ab sirf ek sorry aur hug se she is ok with sasha..............cant believe it.....................these vamp always get at they want

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iluvblue0812

@iluvblue0812

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: preethia
arey yaar geet itna jagda kar rahi thi aur ab sirf ek sorry aur hug se she is ok with sasha..............cant believe it.....................these vamp always get at they want

hahahaha it was the only way for the story to move forward!!! but trust me, after this sasha plan, there WILL be some cute scenes between maan and geet:))

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Smart move sasha. But no one can fool our sherni :D
Hehe geet men shirts pehenti hai. Lol

Awesome update.

Do continue soon hun.

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iluvblue0812

@iluvblue0812

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#87

So I decided to do a different kind of part, you know, more energetic and funny and showing the wild side of Geet and Maan!! So I hope you guys like it!!!

PART 21
Geet comes back home and cleans up. By the time she's done, she calls Maan around 8:00. Maan- Arey vaah. Mujhe to laga ke tum toh mujhe bhul hi gayi. Geet- Aapko main kaise bhul sakti hoon? Maan- So true. Geet- Accha, I said that I will make it up for you for leaving our get together in between right? Maan- Han. Geet- Chaliye, tyaar ho jaye...hum disco jayenge. Maan- Disco? Geet! Yeh koi jagah hain jane vali? Geet- Han Maan! Aap thak nahi gaye? I mean, itna saara kam office mein aur fir upar se mera college! Don't you wanna fly like a free bird? Or dance to loud music and get away from the peace and quiet? Maan- You know, most people want to get away from the loud noise and you want to get away from the peace and quiet? Geet- Yeah! Yeh hi to life away! Get away from all that boring stuff and just have fun and SCREAM! Maan laughs. Maan- Accha Geet tum tyaar ho jo, I'll be there in 40 minutes. Geet- Ok. Bye. Geet gets ready and wears a short blue club dress and has curly hair. She looked very sexy and different than before. Maan gets ready in black pants and a midnight blue shirt.
Geet was waiting in front of her house and Maan comes and opens the door for her.

Maan- Hi! You look really hot.

Maan looks at Geet from head to toe.

Geet- Thanks!

Geet and Maan arrive at the disco.

Geet- It's so cool here!

Maan- Is this your first time?

Geet- No! Me and my friends would go clubbing in Chandigarh! We would tell our parents that we are going to study and then instead, we'd go to Chandigarh! It was so much fun!

Maan smiles. Geet and Maan go to the bar area and Maan says that he will order.

Maan- 2 mocktails.

Geet looks at Maan.

Geet- Ew Maan! No way! Your so boring!

Geet looks at the waiter.

Geet- Dekhiye, hum yeh nahi lenge. Give us 4 tequilas. Extra Anejo.

Maan stares at Geet.

Maan- 4 tequilas? Lekin hum dono ne to peena hain. Aur main itna nahi peetha.

Geet- To theek hain, main 3 shots peelongi aur aap ek shot.

Maan- Geet tum pagal to nahi ho gayi?

Geet- Abhi to nahi.

Geet drinks one shot. Maan stares at her in amazement.

Geet has one more shot.

Geet- AHHH!!!

Geet takes her last shot.

Geet AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOO!!!! I'M READY TO PARTY!!!!!!!!

Maan takes his shot and was about to order one more.

Maan- Nahi, gadi to maine chalani hain.

Geet- Maan itna tension kyun? Peelo!!!!

Maan sighs and takes two more tequila.

Geet- THAT'S THE SPIRIT!!!!!!!!!!! WOAHHHHH!!!!!! LET's PARTYYYYY!!!!!!!

Geet and Maan danced to alot of songs and danced crazy.

Geet was acting sexy on the dancefloor and everyone stared at her and she was the center of attention.

Geet- WOAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Geet and Maan party hard at the disco and Geet orders one more drink.

Geet- Tequila, Vodka and RUMMMMMMMMMMM ko misk kardoooooooooo........hehheheheheehehehe ( when Geet said Misk she meant Mix)......

Geet goes to a table next to a stranger.

Geet- yeh jo hain, yeh...yeh...yeh mera LASTTTTTTT shot hain!!!! he he he hehehehehehe mujhe BAHUUUUUTTTTTT accha lagta hain!!! it's soooooo colorful like a rainbow and butterflies.....

The stranger stares at Geet.

Maan comes next to Geet. Maan was drunk like Geet as well LOL

Maan- AREEEEEEYYYYY...tumne..tumne fir se pee lee...

Geet- NO!!

Geet puts her finger on Maan's lip.

Geet- No! Pee lee nahi!!!!!!! PEENE VALI HOON!!!!

Maan- Ah!!!!!! To fir...to fir tumhe manners nahi hain?

Geet- K..K..Kaunse Manners baby????

Maan- SHARE KARNE KI?????!!!!!!

Geet- OHHH!!!! VO?? AREY PEELO NAAA....

Maan drinks Geet's drink.

Maan- Yuck!!! Yeh kitna bura hain? Kya hain yeh???

Geet- Pata nahi??? Maine...maine jo vo rang barangi dekhe haina...

Maan- HAANNNNNN

Geet- Maine vo DASHOOOOOMMMMMMMM esmein daldiye....kitna sundar lagta tha!!!! Itna colourful......mera rainbow jaisa tha!!!

Geet and Maan drank and then they left. They didn't take their car, they were too drunk to remember that they even had a car:p

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Precap- WILD SIDE!!!!!!!!!!!!