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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank u. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

hilarious update annie...

the doctor is too funny 🤣
and mayank...how could he say "tumhari mujh pe gandi nazar hai"🤣
do cont soon...

🤣 Shukria *Bows* 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow
aussum update
this is my fav ff...
will read other parts soon
thnx for the pm
love ya...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hazraluvarjun

wow

aussum update

this is my fav ff...

will read other parts soon

thnx for the pm

love ya...


Thank you. (:
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaluvmayur

... main jab behosh tha toh Nupur ke sar pe kuch baja tha kya?🤣
Tum meri wife? kab? kaise? cheee! Mujhe pehle hi lagta tha ke tumhari mujh par gandi nazar hai..🤣
omggg!!!! annie ur awesome
what a humurous dialogues u usešŸ˜†
tumhe to writer banna chahiye
love u anniešŸ‘

VERY VERY AMAZING UPDATE
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shafyyy

VERY VERY AMAZING UPDATE

Why do u always quote comments? šŸ˜•
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Posted: 14 years ago
hilarious update Annz darling. i laughed till my stitches ached.šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shubhsArti

hilarious update Annz darling. i laughed till my stitches ached.šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

Awwwhhh!! Thankies Shubhzie, Get Well Really Sooon!! <33
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Posted: 14 years ago

They both were now leaving for Mumbai. The last two days had been miserable for both of them, specially for Nupur. She never knew she would rob her own certificates in her OWN house. Sitting in the bus, she felt like killing Mayank for making her do that but then she remembered how Mayank fought and got bag back. She was deeply impressed. After sometime she started feeling sleepy and finally she fell asleep.

Mayank, meanwhile was enjoying the view of the valleys. But in few minutes, Nupur's head while sleeping fell on Mayank's shoulder. Mayank noticed her, his eyes were mesmerized. The beauty on her face was getting unbearable and uncontrollable that he lost himself somewhere in the beauty. A few untied hair of her were disturbing her face, she constantly was moving due to them, Mayank slowly removed those small hair and moved them behind her ears.

Suddenly, his hand which had stitches touched the seat and which gave him a sudden pain.
Mayank: Ouch!!
Nupur quickly woke up with the voice and noticed Mayank was in pain.
Nupur: Kya hua?
Mayank: Mera haath!! Urgh.
Nupur: Main pain killer doon?
Mayank: No I dont need that.
Nupur: Agar painkiller nahi chahiye toh tumhara dard kaise theek hoga?
Mayank: Tum ho na.
He smiled.
Nupur: Tum paghal ho gaye ho Mayank?
She was totally shocked.
Mayank just noticed what he just said and now was all ready to correct himself.
Mayank: Mera matlab tha... ke lohe ko loha kat'ta hai. So issi tarah haath ki pain ko tum khatam karo gi... Kyunke tum khud bhi aik pain ho...
Nupur: Tumne mujhe Pain bulaya?
Mayank: Aur nahi toh kya sheila bulaoon?
Nupur: Huh... U'll never change.
Mayank: 178.
Nupur puts her fingers in her ears,
Mayank: Wow. Yeh first time kiya hai tumne.

Nupur pretends as if she didn't listen.
Mayank giggled and started enjoying the valleys.
2 hours passed and Nupur felt sleepy again.
She slept and again and her head again fell on Mayank's shoulder. This time he didn't want to disturb her, so he did put his head on Nupur's and slept.

After an hour,
Nupur woke up and noticed Mayank's head on her's.

She didn't want to disturb him she smiled and closed her eyes.

After sometime the bus stopped and they were finally in Mumbai, their land of dreams.
They took a taxi to the hotel.

It was night so they went in their rooms directly.
It was midnight, Mayank couldn't control himself, he was constantly thinking of Nupur.

Constantly, the same face was clicking his mind whom he saw sleeping. The same beauty was mesmerizing his mind. This was a new feeling. Until yesterday, she was only the person he hated, who used to always question him on everything.

He finally decided to call Nupur. Though it was midnight, but still his heart wanted to talk to Nupur. He picked his phone up and started dialing her number. Nupur attended the call in one ring. Mayank was quite shocked.

Mayank: Hello.
Nupur: Oh hi Mayank.
Mayank: Tum ab tak soi nahi?
Nupur: Tum bhi toh nahi soye na.
Mayank: Han bas... neend nahi aa rahi hai.
Nupur:Phir toh tum zarur kuch soch rahe hoge na.
Mayank: Han woh... Tumhare baare mein hi soch raha tha.
Nupur: Mere baare mein kya soch rahe the?
Mayank got confused now, he didnot know what to tell.
Mayank: Acha Nupur.. mujhe neend aa rahi hai, main chalta hoon.
He said and disconnected the phone.
Nupur muttered: Paghal hai Mayank.

Nupur wasn't able to sleep for the whole night, she kept on thinking about why was Mayank thinking about her?

And Mayank was constantly talking to himself,
Mayank: Main baar baar Nupur ke baare mein kyun soch raha hoon. *Pause* Am I in love with Nupur? *Pause* Oh my God. Nupur? Shucks!! I am in love with Nupur? *Pause* NOOO!! *Pause* Eeks!! Never... I mean Nupur and me?? Never!! *Pause* Mayank, I guess tu so ja, aur dekhna, subah uthe ga toh phir se Nupur se nafrat karne lage ga.
He said and fell back on his bed.

--End--
I am so sorry for updating it late and small people,
Thanks for reading,
Love,
-Annie
Edited by -Annie- - 14 years ago

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