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Meeko

@Meeko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

so finally i got the most awaited update.. weeve been talking bout this since ages.. and then u thot of new stuff and edited ur last part..

nt tht i read it, but all cool now... and whts up with tht old poetry look of ur update? bored of it?😆

once again, do i need to praise ur writing skills again?

no rite.. every detail was minutely written.. the bunny and the road and raj and mish and his desire to look at humans tadpofying.. he likes scaring ppl to death, am sure he doesnt need to use his fangs, heel just have to show it to his prey.. he did sound a bit scary to me... didnt u just want tht?

mish and her oneliners, cant get over with thm, the newpaper dialogue fitted in so perfectly..

pehli nazar mein pyaar.. thts hw our soulmates r

:D they dnt take time..and i like tht.. was surprised tht raj didnt attack her.. blue eyes? those wnt suit him..

oh btw, wen r u making it yuvraj??

Edited by elizaa - 14 years ago

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: elizaa
so finally i got the most awaited update.. weeve been talking bout this since ages.. and then u thot of new stuff and edited ur last part..
nt tht i read it, but all cool now... and whts up with tht old poetry look of ur update? bored of it?😆
once again, do i need to praise ur writing skills again?
no rite.. every detail was minutely written.. the bunny and the road and raj and mish and his desire to look at humans tadpofying.. he likes scaring ppl to death, am sure he doesnt need to use his fangs, heel just have to show it to his prey.. he did sound a bit scary to me... didnt u just want tht?
mish and her oneliners, cant get over with thm, the newpaper dialogue fitted in so perfectly..
pehli nazar mein pyaar.. thts hw our soulmates r
:D they dnt take time..and i like tht.. was surprised tht raj didnt attack her.. blue eyes? those wnt suit him..
oh btw, wen r u making it yuvraj??
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Lol .. I couldn't get over Ash and Mary, Liz. They are just TOO good. 😃

Just so you know, about half of it is NOT my writing style. I wrote the guy's POV, and half of Misha's POV .. but about 1/4th of it was copied from the book. I changed a sentence or two. 😳

Yep, that's what I wanted. Ash-ish. Scary. Dangerous. But human somewhere deep inside. 😃

Lol ...I lurve blue eyes. Deal with it. 😆

I will, I will. Eventually. :P

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Meeko

@Meeko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

Lol .. I couldn't get over Ash and Mary, Liz. They are just TOO good. 😃

Just so you know, about half of it is NOT my writing style. I wrote the guy's POV, and half of Misha's POV .. but about 1/4th of it was copied from the book. I changed a sentence or two. 😳

Yep, that's what I wanted. Ash-ish. Scary. Dangerous. But human somewhere deep inside. 😃

Lol ...I lurve blue eyes. Deal with it. 😆

I will, I will. Eventually. :P

THIS IS UR WRITING STYLE.. u deal with it...

ive been reading YOUfor a good 200 days... like eavery day and hour mite be... so yeah... i made my point.

the human somwer deep inside raj is visibe.. he didnt hurt mish😳

u love blue eye...hmm. so the only option am left with is..... prepare my mind to get the color brown wen i read blue... if tht makes sense

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Meeko

@Meeko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

and your written update, which is your chapter or your part looks like a piece of rangoli!!😉

i had to get tht somewer😆

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: elizaa

THIS IS UR WRITING STYLE.. u deal with it...
ive been reading YOUfor a good 200 days... like eavery day and hour mite be... so yeah... i made my point.
the human somwer deep inside raj is visibe.. he didnt hurt mish😳
u love blue eye...hmm. so the only option am left with is..... prepare my mind to get the color brown wen i read blue... if tht makes sense

Fine fine .. This is MY writing style. Happy? :P

He won't hurt Mish .. He can't hurt her. 😳 You know why. 😃

Lmao, all the best. 😆

Originally posted by: elizaa
and your written update, which is your chapter or your part looks like a piece of rangoli!!😉
i had to get tht somewer😆
:P

Thank you .. I'll take that as a compliment! 😆

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: -monica-
awesome update!

I edited and added the Pia part. Do check it out. 😊

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Meeko

@Meeko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

omfg!! the sec edited part was as awesome as i expected it to be....

finally we get to see a brave pia... the heroic one.. the non annoying one!!!

i so love u for giving me this pia,,

and u wer quite fast with the second part tooo..

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Meeko

@Meeko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

compliment??😕 fu!
it was just a... a... plain plain... a...plain.. comment!😆

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: elizaa
omfg!! the sec edited part was as awesome as i expected it to be....
finally we get to see a brave pia... the heroic one.. the non annoying one!!!
i so love u for giving me this pia,,
and u wer quite fast with the second part tooo..
:D

Aha, thank you! 🤗 LOL .. I know, right? I'm liking Hannah/Pia so far from what I've read! 😃 I gave you this Pia? YOU. GAVE. ME. THIS. PIA. :P

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 14 years ago

#60

hei,
tat was nice..there r things to unfold..pia getting dreams n writing weird things..give us details soon..no abhay today..too bad of u..mish n raj having some connection?oh..u didnt let mish go to coll for the 1st day?ok as pia took off let mish too can go the next day..but atleast let her know the correct route to coll next time..els she'll never attend coll..all d days she'll sit on the rock..😊😊😊😊
update soon...
luv,
ramani