|Impossible Love S2| Note:Pg70 - Page 14

Originally posted by: elizaa

gosh.. pia went back to her frst life.. and she was metz then.. loved the way u put it up and got metz too here like our original show.. the idea was reallly nice and well executed too...👏

Ty Liz! 🤗

lmao.. kabeer mish.. i didnt do nething to ur toothbrush😆 poori arav ashi... hai na?😆

lol... and she calls him her good for nothing womanizer brother😆 seriously?😆

Haha, Aarav-Ashi, so true! Me loved that part. 😆

''Oh, don't worry, T! My not-so-fashionable germs will fight against your bimbotic germs, and ultimately, they will lose, considering how big of a bimbo you are!'' She passed her a sarcastic smile and stomped off. 🤣🤣🤣

mad or wht? dialogs kahaan se aate hai?🤣

Pata nahi ...haath khud hi chalte chalte likh deta hai. :P

miyaa!!😳 i still knw tht miya wnt happen, but then u got my miya flavour back to me😳 well written.

Shaurya's brown eyes.. and what coloured eyes did Raj have? Brown? Blue? Grey? Oh, maybe it was black. Who cares? She folded the note and put it in her pocket.🤣

shit, this girl;s got some hots for raj too.. am so sure🤣

She's supposed to be attracted to Raj ..That's how it goes. Thanks again. 🤗

i so love the bro-sis jodi.. must say uve got to the depth ofthem

Originally posted by: Rozy77

Hi sweety😊

I've been reading ur ff from the beginnin, but i didnt got the chance to comment since im busy studyin, and i have to say its pretty awesome👍🏼

obviously i want more abhiya, but i really like rhea n raaj and mish ofcourse is superb as usual.

i seriously loved the maithili flashback, gosh, that was amazing, i think i read it like 5/6 times.she was offerin him her blood but he refused, awww, i cud feel the emotion.

this is super stuff dear,plz pm whenever u update, i'd really appreciate that😳

Originally posted by: 00123trisha

not so fashionable germs fight against bimbotic germs🤣🤣

oh...misha & shaw😳.......shaw's smile😍

misha thinking about shaw & raj's eyes😆

awsome update sweety👏........cont soon

Originally posted by: Paradisekiss053

It was nice the part where Maithili let him drink her blood and he refused was really well written.

A little bit of a improvement needs tp be done with the punctuations and proper quotes. People might have problems understanding which are thoughts and which are third person narrations. And Shaurya and Raj comparison was a bit absurd. It came out of the blue. You got to work on the part where you have to blend her thoughts. It was very absurd! Take care. The plot is great and keep posting.

I am happy Abhay will come in front of Pia. It will be a sizzling moment... very tense!

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

Aww, exams going on? Sucks. Thanks for commenting. 🤗 Yeah, you'll get AbhIya..but I needed to build up the story to a level before that happens. Like the first post of this thread, and that adds you to the PM list. 😊