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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MeenaJ

awesome!!!!! i like it....


Originally posted by: ozzy88

its very nice Akansha.

Loved it.


Thanks Meena and Ozzy! 🤗

Originally posted by: Gals1110

Great part Dear.. I liked d Past Revealing part n Misha star-watching thing dat too in d Middle of Jungle., showing Raj Milky Way n Galaxy was amazing.. Wanna C more Abhay-Piya.. When is their luv story gonna start..?? Waiting for d next part.. Thanx for d pm.. lolz..


Thank you. 🤗 Abhay and Pia's love story will start soon .. I need to get done with the flashbacks first, and I am taking it a bit slow so that I can give ya all time to digest it completely, like, for example, I am not doing the wolf attack and the Maithali thing together, so that you don't get confused. 😊 Misha star watching in the middle of the jungle, trust me, that was my favourite bit. 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: elizaa

really long update today.. nice..


Kya ho gaya hai tumhein? Tabiyat toh theek hai na? Itne lambe lambe replies kaise likh rahe ho !?

abhay and pia wer nice.. whts with rhea.. am still confused
she is yuvi's sis.. wolfie..

She isn't REALLY Raj's sister .. Look, Raj is a vampire, she is a werewolf .. they can't be siblings, but, yeah, they do share a bond. 😊

pia becoming metz during the hypnosis was nice
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written really nicely.. and again, am enjoying this pia.. can so very well connect with her
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You can connect with her .. Tum bhi notes likhti ho !? 😆

whos shankar? a vampire? wht has he to do with raj?
whts with the family honor and name.. blah..

Shankar doesn't have a really significant role in the story, don't worry. Yes, he is a vampire, and as for how he knows Raj .. I'll tell you on YM, or I'll just unravel 'em all with time. 😃

misharaj😆

He looked at her. ''Starwatching?''

''Ofcourse. ''

''In the middle of the jungle?''

''Why, I thought I will have a better view.'' She snapped.

''No telescope.'' He snorted.

''I didn't bring a telescope tonight.'' She picked up the flashlight lying a few steps away. ''You can watch a plenty with these.'🤣


so we have our mish back.. god in all this drama all tht can make me feel better is her.. she and her one liners. her taunts.. and u keep up to the flavour.

and tht beautiful mr moment... lol, the dimwit wants to teach him bout the galaxies who knows them in and out probably. 😆

That happened in the book. 😆 And I honestly wanted to put a scene like that here. The only difference is, Mary did have a lot of interest in astronomy. :P

I'm not scared to do it, I'm not scared, I'm not scared, of course I'm scared.😆

lmao.. mish and her dialogues😆

lets come back- ur updates r late and i keep forgetting.. raj killed ruhi rite? Nope, he didn't.

and raj is a vampie who is rheas brother? Raj is a vampire and he is related to Rhea but they ain't siblings.

and rhea is working for abhay who is the lord of the supernaturals? the vampires maybe? Yep, she is working for Abhay.

raj and abhay know each other? Nope. He has heard of Abhay as he is one of the lords, but personally, no.

what is shanky? vampire? wht is he here for? he thinks rhea mite disclose their supernatural secret? Shanks is a vampire and Rhea is a runaway. He doesn't trust her to keep their secret safe.

. ''I just don't think you'd be a good impression on them, that's all.'' whos them? That's supposed to be her, my bad.

kabir is misha's brother and is in love with rhea? Yepp.

wen did he meet rhea? wer? is she from the college to? That will be cleared out in the next chap. 😊


look all these questions coz u dnt update on time.. and then i forget the track.. plz plz plz for heavensake answer my questions, warna phir ill be lost while i read the next update..


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 00123trisha

AWwwwwww

awwww
awww
awwwsome update akhi
i've no words 4 u yaar
update soon


No words? Aww, Trish, write something. I leave LOOONG comments in your fanfiction. :P

Originally posted by: BUBLAI

Finally managed to read all the four parts 😛... Really really sorry for taking so long to complete it ... 😭 the mysteries here are getting more and more engrossing and your writing is getting awesome and awesome day by day 👏 all the suspenses are written superbly and that's undoubtedly the best part of this FF ... all the four parts increased my level of curiosity --- so many suspenses to be revealed -- once I get started with this FF , I keep hoping that it goes on and on ...
eagerly waiting for your next update ... gussa mat karna if I reply late ... I will surely read it ... bas kabhi kabhi zyada time lag jaata hai ... I am hooked to your writings 😛😛


Aww, thanks Appy. 🤗 I don't mind the late reply, as long as you did keep it in mind to get back to me, thanks a lot! 😊 I'll try to update soon..It depends on my mood swings, however. 😆
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Thx 4 the pm n it was great
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ill catch up!🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_wacko

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ill catch up!🤣


Agle janam mein mujhe Debs na kijiyo!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter 9

Maithali turned and hurried up the riverbank. The woman screaming was her mother's sister, and the girl stumbling behind her was Rita.

She was a pretty ten year old, but right now her neck and the front of her shirt was smeared with blood.

''What happened?'' Maithali gasped.

''She was out looking for flowers, and then I found her on the ground. She looked dead.'' Her mother sobbed. ''Look at this, this on her neck.''

On Rita's neck, Maithali could make out two pale marks, they looked like an animal's sharp teeth, but only two marks.

''It had to be an animal.'' A girl sighed. ''But what animal leaves only two marks?''

Maithali's heart felt tight at once.

''It wasn't an animal! It was a boy, she says he threw her down, and bit her, and drank her blood.'' She began to sob, clutching Rita to her. ''Oh please, somebody help me, my daughter's been hurt.''

''A boy ..'' Maithali said faintly, and looked towards the river.

The men were cornering the stranger. He was snarling angrily, but when he saw Rita, his expression changed. It seemed as if he couldn't really stand to look at her, and yet, he couldn't look away. His eyes were fixed on her throat.

And then he turned away, his head falling into his hands.

Maithali looked in horror from the girl with blood in her neck to the stranger with blood on his mouth. It was pretty obvious who did it.

But why? She thought. Why would anyone want to drink a girl's blood?

He must be a demon after all.

The leader of the hunters moved forward, and cupped Rita's chin in his hand. He made her look at the stranger. ''Was he the one that attacked you?''

She started screaming, hands flying up to cover her eyes. Her mother started rocking her comfortably, and the men started shouting at the stranger.

Maithali stood there, rooted to the spot. She looked at the stranger, his eyes shut.

The hunter yelled. ''I think we know what to do with him. This is no longer a matter for the Shamans.''

Maithali looked back, she couldn't speak. This guy almost killed her cousin, she shouldn't care about him. But, she did care.

Maybe he didn't mean it, the thought popped up in her mind. Maybe he didn't want to, but something drove him to. And now he's sorry, he's ashamed.

''You can't just kill him. You gotta take her to Mother.'' She yelled back.

''It's none of her business.''

''It is her business if he is a demon. You take care of the hunting, she takes care of the spiritual things.''

''Fine then.'' He said angrily. ''We will take him to Mother.''

The men drove the stranger into the cave. There was a huge crowd gathering them.

Mother was the oldest woman in the clan - the greatest grandmother of Maithali. Her face was covered in wrinkles and her body was like a dead stick. But her eyes were full of wisdom.

She listened to the story peacefully, while Maithali crept next to her.

''They want to kill him.'' Maithali whispered. ''But look at his eyes, he's sorry. Maybe he didn't mean to hurt Rita. Can you talk to him?''

She shook her head.

''Demons don't speak human languages.'' The hunter snorted.

''He's not a demon.'' Mother looked at him. But she added slowly. ''But he is not a man, either. The goddess never told me about creatures like these.''

''Then the goddess isn't interested.'' He shrugged. ''Let the hunters take care of him.''

''One thing I do know is that he is capable of great harm.'' She looked at the hunter. ''Shut him up somewhere, and we will think about what to do with him in the morning.''

Maithali knew better. In the morning, he would die. Unpleasantly. She heard the angry mutters of the crowd.

It was probably what he deserved. Anyhow, it wasn't her business. But that night, she couldn't sleep. It was as if someone was poking her with a stick and telling her that things ain't quiet what they seem here. Something had to be done, and she had to do it.

She remembered the look of anguish in his eyes. She felt pity for the guy, and she knew that she couldn't let him die.

She got up. Very quietly, she went to the back of the cave. There was a fence, and a man was sleeping next to it with his mouth open.

Maithali edged past him. Her heart was pounding so quickly, maybe he could hear it.

Slowly, she pulled one side of the fence open.

From inside, two eyes gleamed back at her, reflecting the fire away from himself.

It was only then that she realized how dangerous it was. What was stopping him to rush past her and kill everyone in the village?

But he did no such thing, he didn't even move. He just looked at her.

She realized that he was shaking his head. He didn't want to come, he wanted to let the clan kill him. She frowned and reached for him.

That scared him, he shrank back, alarmed. He was afraid, afraid that he might hurt her.

She pulled him outside the cave, through the shadows. They moved slowly, and no one caught them.

She put some food in his hands. ''Go far away, very very far away.''

The moon was so bright that she could see every feature of his face. His eyes were terribly human, he had long eyelashes, and he was handsome.

I shouldn't have brought him here. What was I thinking?

There was a long pause while those two just stared at each other. He looked at the food, threw it on the ground and sighed.

What was he doing? Did he think that she was trying to poison him? ''You need to eat food.''

He shook his head. His eyes rested at her neck, and she dimly realized what it meant. He didn't need food. He needed.. blood.

We are out here alone, he could have attacked me anytime, she thought. He could attack me now, he looks very strong. But, at the same time, he looks hungry. He looks like he is starving. It hurt Rita, but it didn't kill Rita. She was up and fine tonight.

If it didn't kill her, it wouldn't kill me.

Maithali swallowed. She looked at the guy, he wasn't taking a step forward even though he couldn't move his gaze from her neck, and it seemed to be sending shivers throughout his body.

What good does it do to send him off starving? There is no other clan here, he will come back. There is nobody else to help him.

Very slowly, she lifted some hair from her neck, leaning back slightly.

Hunger sparked through his eyes, and then it was replaced by shock. What was she doing? He looked at her face.

She touched her neck, and then her mouth. ''Eat, and go away.''

''Hurry up, before I change my mind.'' She closed her eyes, she was crying now. She clenched her fists.

When he touched her for the first time, it was to take her hand. She opened her eyes. He was looking at her with eyes that spoke a volume of emotions. He leaned down and kissed her palm gently.

It sent a feeling through Maithali. Like shivers, but warm. A sense of awe and wonder. It made her knees go week.

She could see that he felt the same way. He shook off her hand, and looked away. He was afraid that this would bound the two of them together.

He turned to go.

Maithali watched him, her throat was lump. He was going to die without blood.

Although she was standing still, with her head high, there were tears running down her cheeks. It hurt her terribly. It felt like she was losing something extremely precious. The future seemed grey now, she was alone ..

''Pia! Pia! Wake up!''

Someone was shouting, calling out her name.

''Pia! Wake up! Open your eyes, please!''

And then there was another voice, a quieter voice inside her mind. ''Pia, wake up, you don't have to relive all this. Come back, now.''

She opened her eyes.
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--

Misha bit her lip as she looked at Kabir leaning back on the sofa, a smile curved over his lips and headphones stuck into his ears.

''Kabir .'' She called out.

He looked up. ''Yeah, Mish?''

''I need to talk to you.''

''Look, if this is about your toothbrush, I didn't do anything!''

''Huh? It's about something we have to do tonight..'' She stopped abruptly. ''What about my toothbrush?''

''Uh, nothing. Nothing at all.''

She rolled her eyes. ''Listen, I need you to help me out. Last night, I saw something ... ''

''Speaking of last night, have you seen Tracker anywhere? I didn't see her in the college today. Last I saw her was yesterday.''

''I .. '' She shook her head. ''What does Rhea look like?''

''What?'' He frowned. ''Black hair upto her waist, green eyes, why?''

''Shit.'' She cursed. ''Look, Kabir, I .. '' She paused. ''I saw her burying Ruhi's body yesterday.''

He blinked. ''Misha, you really are crazy if you think I'd fall for that.''

''It doesn't matter. I'm still going over there tonight.''

''To do what?''

''To check things out, keep an eye on her, see if she really killed Ruhi or not...''

''You don't really think she killed her.''

Misha looked away. ''I don't know what to believe in, anymore.''

''You know, it's creeping me out. Stop it, okay?''

Misha didn't know how to answer that. Kabir was in a happy world, a different world. ''Kabir, listen to me. I'm your sister. I have no reason to play tricks with you, to lie to you, or put down someone you like. And I don't jump to conclusions, I don't imagine things. But I'm telling you, absolutely seriously, there is something weird going on with this girl.''

Kabir opened his mouth, but she went on. ''So, now, there are only two things you can believe, and one is that I'm completely out of my mind, and the other is that it is true. Do you really think I'm crazy?''

Kabir said faintly. ''You're not crazy.''

''Thank you.''

''But I don't know what to think. Rhea won't kill anybody, I just know that. And since I met her in the college-'' He paused. ''Mish, it's like now I know why I'm alive. She's so different from any other girl I've ever known. She is so brave, and so funny, and so .. herself.''

She was moved and surprised by the change in Kabir - but mostly, she was frightened. Her good-for-nothing womaniser brother had fallen in love, and the girl might be a psychopathic killer on the loose.

''Misha, can't we just forget about this?'' He appealed. There was desperation in his voice, in the way he said it. She felt sicker.

''Fine.'' She couldn't take it anymore. ''Yes, you are right. She doesn't look like a person that will hurt anybody. I'll just let it drop.''

An hour later, she was in the college. She walked up to T. ''Hey T, I don't suppose you have seen Rhea around?''

She looked at her, and raised an eyebrow. ''Excuse me? Do I look like a directions map to you, or is it lost and found? No, I haven't seen her today. Now, get out of my sight before I catch your not-so-fashionable germs.''

''Oh, don't worry, T! My not-so-fashionable germs will fight against your bimbotic germs, and ultimately, they will lose, considering how big of a bimbo you are!'' She passed her a sarcastic smile and stomped off.

She ended up asking everyone, but no one seemed to know where she is, or her address, phone number, anything. Finally, she walked up to the only person she knew who could help her.

''Looking for someone?'' A voice behind her asked.

She turned around. ''Hey, Shaurya.''

He smiled, his smile mostly showed in his eyes, which were deep brown.

If I were going to fall for a guy, it would be him, not some jerk who could decide her sister's friends.

''I am looking for someone. Rhea. Do you know her?''

Something sparked in his eyes - it was gone before she could see it. ''Yep. I know her. Any problem?''

''No, I just wanted to know where she lives, that's all.''

His parents had died when he was a kid, and he'd been living alone ever since. Now, when she watched his face curved in a straight line, she couldn't help but smile. She felt a sort of relationship with him, she felt like he understood her.

''Here.'' He wrote down her address on a paper. ''Anything else?''

''No, thank you Shaurya!'' She grinned at him, and he smiled. ''Why did you need her address?''

''I just wanted to talk to her.'' She answered.

''Misha, I know, you think this is none of my business..but you should stay away from Rhea. If you really want to go, let me come with you.''

She felt heat creep up her cheeks. ''That's very nice of you, but I wanna go alone.''

''Okay, but if you do find her, be careful.''

''I know.''

''I mean it.'' He took her hand and kept his another hand over it.

That moment of physical contact surprised her. She looked at his thin brown fingers, at his strong but delicate grip on his hand. She was even more surprised when she looked in his eyes. They were full of concern. Suddenly she had this urge to tell him everything, but she couldn't.

''Thanks, Shaurya.'' She conjured up a weak smile. ''Take care.'' She pulled away her hand, and turned around. She stared at the address. Okay, now what? She had wasted most of the day in the college, and now she thought if it was a stupid idea to land up at her house at all.

Shaurya's brown eyes.. and what coloured eyes did Raj have? Brown? Blue? Grey? Oh, maybe it was black. Who cares? She folded the note and put it in her pocket. Time for some action.

-PRECAP-

Misha's heart was racing. ''Stay here, Kabir. I'm going to follow her.''

''I'm going with you.''

This wasn't time to argue, and Misha was glad to have Kabir's strength with her.

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''Wait, please, wait.'' A male voice said from the darkness. ''I won't hurt you, I promise.''

''Run.'' The voice in Pia's mind told her to run, but she held completely still.

She watched the dark figure coming out of the shadows. She didn't try to get away.

When he stepped in the light, she saw his face. ''Oh god ..'' Her knees were giving out.
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PMs tomorrow. Gotta rush now.
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