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part 46
nice part..................the VM was so funny..................cont soon............
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Originally posted by: t_areeb

nice update, why this 'qurban' thing in ur name of FF

cos the ff is about sacrificing your love aswell.lookat pg.1
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey wow awesomeeeeeee ff n updatesssssss
nw waiting for d nxt update
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loved it n dare u call it boring
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Part 47

Ok,This is a super long Update.It is 6 pages long on Microsoft Word.Hope you like it.Please Do Click the LIKE BUTTON and Comment.I love reading your comments.

The day was finally over.It felt like it had lasted forever but in a good way.I'd truly enjoyed it,something that surprised even me.But when i was with Maan,I enjoyed everything.Finally,we were home and i was really excited to be able to change into my tracks and top.I ran upstairs as soon as we stepped inside whilst everyone stared at me confused.No point in explaining to them,they wouldn't understand,Just make fun of me.I changed in a rush so i could go and talk to Maan but as i passed i caught sight of my hair in the mirror.Urggghh!!! What a mess!!! Now that the straightness was beginning to go,My curls were re-appearing but intensified with the heat.I yanked the brush through my hair.Afterall,i couldn't let Maan see me like this could i? But it wasn't working,it was just getting worser with every stroke of the brush.What could i do? I'll wash it!!! I grabbed my towel and ran into the bathroom and began wetting my hair.As the hot water dripped down me,It relaxed my muscles and i was at peace.For some time,I could dwell on the days events calmly.I was finished and walked out with just my towel on and my hair piled on top of my head.And what i saw when i went outside made my head spin and the heat rush to my cheeks.Maan was sat there.Oh God!!!!

How beautiful Geet looked like this.I could just stare at her all day.But i knew she was uncomfortable and i would wait.I would wait until she was ready for this and i knew she wasn't ready yet.With compulsion,I turned my head way from her.It felt like the hardest thing i'd ever done.

I was still in shock.I couldn't believe he was there.And in my shock,I let go of the towel and it fell to the floor,exposing me.I saw his eyes widen and then,He instantly shut them and began to walk out.On the way,He banged into the table and hurt his foot.That made me laugh.He still tried to carry on walking with his eyes shut even though tears were rolling out of his eyes just for me and that touched my heart.If he carried on walking,he'd hurt something else and that i couldn't bear.It looked like some of my clumsiness had passed on to him.

Geet:Maan,Stop!!

Maan:No,Geet.Im fine,Dont worry!!!

Geet:Oh shut up,No youre not.Stop trying to be brave.Just Stand there and wait for a minute.

I grabbed my gown off the chair and wrapped it around me.When i was fully covered,Well asmuch as a gown could cover,I ran up to him.

Geet:Come on,Come and sit down.

Maan:But Geet...

I dragged him to the bed and he kept his eyes tightly shut.I stroked his cheek.

Geet:Open your eyes

Maan:No,I don't want to embarra....

Geet:Im Dressed, idiot.Well not fully dressed but it'll do.

He opened his eyes and i could still see apprehension in them.He looked at me in shock.

Maan:Geet,Are you sure about this?I could go out and you get dressed.

Geet:Yeah and hurt the rest of your body.No thanks its ok.And anyway,Its not like youre never going to see me in that state is it?

I blushed and looked down.How could i say that?What was happening to me? Where was the shy,Never say Boo to a goose Geet?

Maan:Geet,are you ok? I mean,youve never said anything like this.Dont get me wrong,im happy but...

Geet:Im fine now shut up and let me look at your foot.

I pressed down on it as gently as i could but it still hurt him and he moaned in pain.

Geet:Sorry,I'll be more gentle.You are the biggest idiot ever,you know!!! Couldnt you just open your eyes and walk? And why did you even have to come here in the first place? What if its broken? Imagine you standing at the front waiting for me on a crutch on our wedding!!! It'll be so funny.

I couldn't control myself and burst out laughing.I became conscious of Maan staring at me and looked at him,Puzzled.Tears formed in my eyes.Because What i saw in his eyes,I'd never seen before.Love.His eyes clearly told me how much he loved me.And even though he was in pain,He was Happy.Because i was happy and laughing.Tears of pain had changed into tears of happiness,Just because i was happy.How he did it,I didn't know.Because i never could.And that proved how better he was than me and how lucky i was to have got him.He was every girls dream but he was my reality.Every girl loved him but he only loved 1 person,Me.I'd always known that but today,The intensity of it dawned on me. Tears rolled down my cheeks.

Why was she crying? What had i done? And why was she looking at me like that? With awe in her eyes?

Maan:Geet,Whats wrong?Geet,Geet!! Hello!!

I carried on staring at him,i knew he was confused but this moment was too special to ruin with any words.

Ok,i was seriously confused,What was wrong with her? Why wasn't she speaking?

Maan:Geet,Talk!!! Ok,im going to call auntie and uncle,Youre seriously freaking me out!!

How thick was he? What would they think seeing us together like this,With me in my gown? I pulled him down and tightened my grip around him.

Geet:Ssshhh!!!

Maan:Whats wrong?

Geet:You love me.

Was that why shed been looking at me like that? Had she only just realised?

Maan:Yes and?

Geet:You were in pain.Crying.But still you tried to leave,for me.So i wouldn't be embarrassed.You didn't think once about yourself.How can you be so self sacrificing? What have i done to deserve someone like you?

Maan: Geet,i knew you were feeling embarrassed.Your eyes were telling me that.And i didn't want you to feel uncomfortable.I would never want that.All i want is your happiness.

Geet:See,That just proves it even more.What have i done to deserve you?

Maan:You changed me.Forever.You left a mark on my heart that can never be removed.

I rested my head on his shoulder and wrapped my arms around him.I don't know how long we sat there like that.

Geet:Come on,Lets go down.Everyone will be looking for us.

Maan:Do we have to?

Geet:Yes.

I pushed him out of the door and sat on the floor smiling.He loved me so much.I changed into my tracks again and went downstairs.Maan was smiling at me.I blushed remembering everything that had happened upstairs.

Meera:Why did it take you so long?

Geet:My hair was a mess so i had to wash it,Thanks to your straighteners.

I left out everything else that had happened,They didn't need to know.Maan looked at me with his eyebrows raised and smirked at me.I glared at him to say quiet.He burst out laughing.

Uncle:Whats wrong,Why are you laughing?

Maan:I was just coughing.Ahem,Ahem.

Geet:So,all the rituals are over now,Right? Now,i just have to wait for the wedding in 2 days.

Auntie:No,theres another ritual yet.Mehndi.There should have been 2,Mehndi and Haldi but your skins already beautiful and white so you don't need that.

For some reason,I was happy.I was beginning to like these rituals.But if i told Meera,Id never hear the end of it so i had to keep up the act.

Geet:But whats the point of the Mehndi if im having a court marriage? Its pointless.

Meera:Oh shut up,Stop moaning!!! It'll be fun

Auntie:Yes,It increases the love between the husband and wife.Dont you want to know how much Maan loves you?

Meera:Or if he even does?

Geet:No,theres no need.I already know.I don't need any proof.

Meera:Ohhh!!!

Auntie:Meera,Quiet!! Ok,don't you want to have his name written on your hand? And then he'll find it on your first night?

I blushed and my cheeks flushed red.I did want that.

Geet:Ok,If you insist then....After all,You have to listen your elders.

Meera:Yeah,Right!! I knew you'd say yes after the last point about your First night.Youre so eager.

Geet:Meera,Shut up!!! No,im not!!!

I got up and ran upstairs.She was so annoying,Seriously!!!! Why would you say that infront of everyone? She had such a big mouth!!!! I lied in bed and pulled the covers up.It was so cold.But outside,It was hot.I was cold because of the nervousness i felt.I knew what would happen after our marriage,I knew what would be expected of me.But i didn't know if i was ready.Ready to surrender myself to him completely,I loved him but this was something big.Something i had to think about.I knew every girl went through this but for me it was different.I'd already been through it but forcefully.And when I did it again by my own will,It would be alot different.Because i wouldn't be scared.But what if the past came before me again in that moment? What would i do then?I knew Maan would understand but i didn't want him to have to give a sacrifice for my past.I closed my eyes and tears rolled down.Geet,What are you thinking? Why are you remembering that time now?I closed my eyes and tried to forget about it.But all i could feel was nervousness.I lay there in the dark terrified and crying.Sometime during that period,I drifted off into an uncomfortable,Uneasy sleep.

NEXT MORNING.DAY BEFORE THE WEDDING.

I woke early,At 6am.The night had been restless and i was glad it was finally over.I got up and went to the kitchen and made myself a cup of coffee.Even a simple Coffee had memories of Maan in it.I took it onto the balcony and stood there looking outside.The sun was rising.I'd never seen New York so quiet,It was refreshing and gave me peace.I had to get rid of my fears,They were meaningless.The quiet atmosphere and amazing sights gave me the peace i'd been looking for.Finally,I relaxed and breathed a sigh of relief.

Uncle:Geet?

I turned around,Shocked that someone else was awake at this time.

Geet:Uncle? Youre awake this early?

Uncle:I always wake at this time.

Geet:Oh,I never knew.

Uncle:Probably because for you the sun rises at midday.

I laughed,It was true.

Uncle:Is there any problem? You don't normally come out here.

As much as i longed to share my worries with someone,I couldn't tell them to Uncle.It just wasn't something you'd discuss with a guy.

Geet:No,I just felt like it today.

Uncle:Geet,Are you happy?

I looked at him,Shocked at how he could read my mind so truely.

Geet:Y..yes,Of course.Why?

Uncle:You've just been a bit down recently.

Geet:No,Everythings ok.

Uncle:Enjoy the view,Geet.Its the last time you'll look at it as Geet Handa as tomorrow you'llbe so busy,you wont have to come out here.And then you'll turn into Geet Khurana,A married woman,Someone who has responsibilities.And then,You'll go back to india and start a new life.And i know,you'll fulfil your responsibilities perfectly.And Maan will keep you very happy.

Tears pricked my eyes,I hadn't thought of it that way.

Geet:I know he will,I trust him and have complete faith in him.

The only thing i didn't have faith in was myself.Could i fulfill my responsibilities perfectly? Would i be able to do that? Geet Handa could,But will Geet Khurana be able to do it?

END

Precap:

Maan:Let me find my name on your hand.

Geet:No,not now.

Maan:When then?

Geet:On our...Our Suhaag Raat.

SHE BLUSHES AND RUNS AWAY.

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Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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part 47
nice part.................Geet still fears whether she can do it..................Maan will make ease up.............cont soon..................
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh wowwwwwwwwww
it kind of cute n sweet n mixture with full of teasing
tht wt i like in ur ff
it soooooo coooolllllllll n fastttttttt
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thanks for a long update i was wonddering when you'll update
and it was worth the wait
i loved it ...................
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Posted: 14 years ago
Jus superb update...i read all the parts in one go...👍🏼...it was jus superb..evything is so well...luv ur FF...n the precap luks quite interesting continue soon..!!

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such an adorable update, love the way you have given wats on their mind

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