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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

VERY nice start.

lovely. but i am left with lot of confusion. is mayank is her husband??? and if so , he is too harsh.or just it was the first time.?? does he force her to get married.??? or what else had happen to nupur??? i could not able to figure out anything through this first part . please do update second part..... i am waiting for it . there are lots and lots more questions roaming in my mind and just wanna ask in single ans simple sentence that when u are gonna update this untitled ff. as before only it had created very much suspense in viewers...................................

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Gul

@DhanakZ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Wao Liba its Too different

I like It

Pl cont soon and Pm me

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: -Mehak
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Will wait for ur comment... 😳

Originally posted by: DhanakZ
Wao Liba its Too different
I like It
Pl cont soon and Pm me

Yes... I wanted to write but nothing of the same we have read time to time... Hopefully it's something different... I'm glad u like it... 😳...sorry don't know ur name...

I will veryy soon just waiting for something...

nd yes I'll add u to the PM list...

Originally posted by: shafyyy
VERY nice start.
lovely.but i am left with lot of confusion.is mayank is her husband???and if so , he is too harsh.or just it was the first time.??does he force her to get married.???or what else had happen to nupur???i could not able to figure out anything through this first part .please do update second part.....i am waiting for it .there are lots and lots more questions roaming in my mind and just wanna ask in single ans simple sentence thatwhen u are gonna update this untitled ff.as before only it had created very much suspense in viewers...................................

Thank you.., I'm glad ur liking it...

I know... there is a lot of confusion... But u have to wait.... There are clues in the update if u look very carefully... Some tiny clues that might solve the confusion... Right now i'm loving the confusing look on pepoples faces... 😆

But no... It will soon come out.. Are they married? or aren't they? Remember Nupur haven't seen this "Man" before? so....

I will very soon... I'm just waiting for something/someone... But i don't think weekend but next week i'll update maybe not only one but more updates since i have an off week...

I know how u feel... 😆 U'll soon get ur answers...

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Thank you Everyone for such lovely comments... I didn't expect people would like it... But thank u everyone...I'm overwhelmed that u liked the ff..& Thank u to everyone who pressed the "like" button 😊

For next update... very, very soon... But by next week there will be a update... 😳 & yes there are many who are confused about Nupur and This "Man"( u guys assuming it's Mayank who knows who it is..) Relationship... Are they married? or aren't they? There are some tiny hints in the update if u look carefully... till I updare, try to solve the puzzle...

One important thing... I still don't have a title... so If any ideas do tell me or PM me... 😳

-Laiba

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Awesome Laiba😃😃

PM me when you update yeah😃

Great start😃

A title...can i suggest one??

How does THE PATHWAY TO LOVE sound??😆😆

Sorry if it sounds random...just came to my head😆😆

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: AmyArTiMayUr
Awesome Laiba😃😃
PM me when you update yeah😃

Great start😃

A title...can i suggest one??

How does THE PATHWAY TO LOVE sound??😆😆

Sorry if it sounds random...just came to my head😆😆

Aww thanks Amina... 🤗

Of course... nahi bhi kehti phir bhi karti... 😆

Of course... My ff is so adhura without a title....

it's one of the wortss title ever... Aise suggestion bhi koi deta hai.. i seriosluy i hate it Amina...

Okay just kidding.... 🤣

It actually, sounds good... But the thing is i don't.... I' m waiting for someone.. Usske baad i'll see what title to choose... But agar it suits my ff then most definitely....😳 It's actually very sweet.... Lekin i've to wait with title..

-Laiba

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

hey Liaba

(heyy Liaba's my babysisters name too😆)

wowowoowow I loved ur starting

so Nupur is married with Mayu

n she didn't like the marriage niether her parents

wnder y she married then ???

so then Mayu comez and takes her to another house

btw loved how u described everything

can't wait to read the next part

do continue soon please

and please do add me in ur pm list

thanks

Lina😊

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

updated post on pg 5..😊

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

wow.......it was awesome........plz pm me when u update

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

😊congrats for ur first ff

interesting ff

please do add me to ur pm list

would love to read it 😊

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Mystery

@desiresoul

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

aweosmeee ff laiba loved first par do continue soon

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