Untitled FF - MayUr - Part 6 Pg.34 (16.07) Updated

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#201

tht was beautifull part...from a horifying strt to a mesmirzing love story...it was beautiful...but wht went wrong is still mistry...i really liked it

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samira

@-Samira-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#202

beautiful update Laiba n mayu's confession was wonderful
although didn't get any hint why she hate him

i thought the reason will be about his confession

but it come out she olso have feelings for him

waiting eagrly next update

tank for the pm

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#203

awesome update.

guns scene was perfectly written.

mayank confession was so sweet.

very romantic.

update soon.

thnaks for the pm.

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Mystery

@desiresoul

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#204

Awesome Update
loved it superb
do continue soon

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#205

Wao that was so beautiful

Mayank's confession was amazing

I think Mayank have so me relation with that Mr chopra and he married Nupur for pressurized her dad for taking Mr chopra case

Lovely part

plz cont soon

thanks for pm

and all the best for exams.

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#206

aww... laiba...
awesum update!!!
sooo... MN wr really in luv!!!
now i got d hints.. of y ws she really angry wid him...
luvd it!
continue soon!
n Best of luck 4 ur exms!👍🏼
luv ya!🤗

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#207

Nice update
but i m still confused...
whats d relation of mynk with this case...???
i m waiting for next part

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neetu

@mayurg2010

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#208

Hey I just read the whole 5 parts in one go and i liked it a lot
you are a brilliant writer
you maintained the past very well...
You really confused the readers with your past and present tale...
I some how guessed that it was mayank in both past and present after 2 parts or so... somehow i guessed it before you revealed it.
And now eagerly waiting to know about this karan and about the mystery behind mayur's marriage...
so sad of them. mayank is trying to make things normal and nupur is making it too hard for him but i guess there could be a strong reason for nupur's anger.
Waiting for the next part.
Do pm me this time. I'll send you a buddy request. Do accept me and pm me this time.
Don't forget me huh... pleaseee