SandStorm(FF) -(updated Chapter 19)

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#581

amazing conclusion.........................finally maan has said it......................loved their confession...........

congrats on successful completion of this ff................if u start a new ff on maaneet pl do pm me

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: gawdygory

OMG !!! 😳

CONCLUDING PART WAS SOOOOOOOO ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

I guess another Khurana Jr. in the making !!! 😆

ANYWAYS ON A SERIOUS NOTE ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT 👏 👏 THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FF I've READ SO FAR ,

NICE CONCEPT, VERY GOOD FLOW OF STORY, PRECISE PLOT , LOVELY PORTRAYAL OF THE LOVE & PASSION BETWEEN MAAN & GEET & LASTLY YOU HAVE VERY WELL MAINTAINED THE ELEMENT OF CURIOSITY FROM THE BEGINNING TILL THE END 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👍🏼

Hoping to read a new one soon ..... 😉 LOVE U DEAR 🤗

Yes... i had to give all of you something to remeber before ending...

Plot excited me a lot when I had thought about it... I had a rough sketch with me when i started writting......but I didnot knew it will come out well...

.. thanks a lot for so much encouragement.

Edited by goldenball - 14 years ago

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#583

Originally posted by: Kavita03
very good ff

Thanks..👏

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: sukklover

dear ..

4 pm me....dear

lots of &

sach a n sweet n awesome update....

just

4 ur update...

to pm me dear....

sorry 4 late reply dear....really

to u dear.....

lov,❤️

Tama

Tama

I am so touched by this...thanks dear.

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#585

Originally posted by: muskaan_cute19

ooo dear loved the ff it was fab really loved it
thouruogly enjoyed reading it completed today ially
sorry 4 commenting late bt
really loved all the part
i wish if we could get an epilogue 4 it would really love to see it
thnx 4 the pm dear
du continue soon

Thanks dear.. Epilogue.. I had not thought about it...and now I have taken my mind completely off this FF .. so I will leave this here only.. Planning to put a new one soon..so wait for that.

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#586

I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed your ff very much,i read all the parts and loved it.plsssssssssssssssssssssssssss continue soon and plssssssssssssss add me in your PM list.

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#587

Originally posted by: seemamary
I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed your ff very much,i read all the parts and loved it.plsssssssssssssssssssssssssss continue soon and plssssssssssssss add me in your PM list.

This one is concluded.. For next one surely I will PM you.

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khansangel

@khansangel

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#588

i just read ur ff .....👏 goossshhhhhhh it was simply amazing .... 😃plzzzzzzzzzzzzz start a new FF soon and DUN FORGET TO PM ME PLZZZZZ ADD ME TO UR PM LIST ..... 🤗

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Debolina

@debomaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#589

hey...i've fnshd ur SANDSTORM today,as a whole!
& i cnt xprs my flngs wd words!!!
OMG!OMG!OMG!
what a ff!!!full wd almost evrythng...accdntal sort,hidden-love,care,emotion,desire-passion-pleasure,at last acceptance of love..n what a happy ending after dat super-emotional confessn of deir love,dat made me teary!!! :)
AMAZING!!!
**LOVE U THREEMUCH AS A WRITER**:)
TC...i jst hp n pray ki it wd mk its place in ff cntst!BoL..

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#590

Originally posted by: debomaaneet
hey...i've fnshd ur SANDSTORM today,as a whole!
& i cnt xprs my flngs wd words!!!
OMG!OMG!OMG!
what a ff!!!full wd almost evrythng...accdntal sort,hidden-love,care,emotion,desire-passion-pleasure,at last acceptance of love..n what a happy ending after dat super-emotional confessn of deir love,dat made me teary!!! :)
AMAZING!!!
**LOVE U THREEMUCH AS A WRITER**:)
TC...i jst hp n pray ki it wd mk its place in ff cntst!BoL..

Thanks.👏👏👏👏