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RAJSHREE

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Posted: 14 years ago

#241

nice part 😊

do cont soon 😳

hope u r well now😳

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reea88

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Posted: 14 years ago

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sorry guys... for ur long waiting... i m really busy of my personal work.. i can't get time to update... but i 'll update very soon atleast 3 parts of this ff... and this ff going to be end very soon... pls wait little more... i m really sorry for that... pls forgive me... love u all reea...

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reea88

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Posted: 14 years ago

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pART 59 MAAN & GEET hold each other. geet felt his warm heart beats. both closed their eyes fell what their heart saying. maan hold her more closer. she also supported him with her act. rainning outside seems like support them to more closer.

geet: maan... she whisper...

maan: hmmm, geet.. said in suductive voice.

geet: what if someone trying to separate us.

maan: no geet.. thats not possible. i never let anyone come between us.

geet: really..

maan: yes, thats my promise.

geet: why???? said innocently..

maan: coz u r my best secretary.. he smirked.

geet open her eyes with irratation..

geet: what, secretary??? just secretary???

maan: no not exactly, u r my.. he stopped.

geet looked at him

geet: what??? finish ur word..

maan enjoy her restless..

maan: u r also my part time wife... he loughed loudly..

geet became angry. she was fuming with anger.

geet: u... u r so mean. don't u dare to call me ur part time wife. she warned him.

maan pretended innocent

maan: why??? i still remember u were done my part time wife job very well in hospital.

geet: yup, i did this, but not as ur so called temporary wife. i did it because. she paused.

maan cupped her face

maan: becuse what??? geet looked at him lost his eyes.

geet: coz... oh main... i can't see u like that.

maan impressed.

maan: why?? i mean u always said i m a monster. then why u save me always.

geet: u r my... u r my boss.. ab sadu ho ya dust danav aap ho to mere boss. agar aap bimar par gayi to salary kaun dega??? she looked at him confidently.

maan smirked. he know its a biggest lie of her.

maan: oh really??? then i should reward u for this. some bonus. ok tommorow u meet my house i 'll reward u.

geet eyes poped out. what the hell he is talking???

geet: i don't need this... thank uuu... keep ur reward with u. i 'll not come. she twisted her lips.

geet murmerd: samajta keya hain apni aap ko.. payer ki luvs to ati nahi humesha business ko beach main lati hain. she turned to leave. maan hold her hand.

maan come to close her & touch her shoulder.

maan: geet, u know u don't know how to lie. then why u try.

geet: i m not telling lie.

maan: yes geet... u r trying. i can prove it.

geet asked : how.

maan carrassing her shoulder. geet shiver with his touch. his hand slidely touch her neck side. geet closed her eyes. her heart beat faster. he slowly put his hand on her left neck side. wrrapped her with his hand & pulled her more closer to him. geet still close her eyes. his warm breath touch her skin.

maan: daar lag rahi hain???

geet nodded no.

maan whisper: tum jhoot bol rahi ho geet. i can hear ur heart..

geet was in same position

geet softly said: nahi ye sach nahi.

maan touches his nose with her neck & said: thats true geet. tumhe darr lag rahi hain... he kissed her neck softly. geet could not took it long. she went way from maan & ran from here. she was so happy. she felt she live in a new world while she was running. she came her room laid on bed.

geet: thats true maan. i fell it. i fell ur touch. i fell u. i love u .. i love u maan... i love u maan... she cluched the pillow & bed sheet. i love u.. i love uuu..

maan thought: i love u geet. tommorow i 'll start a new life with u... he smiled to saw himself in mirror.

next morning

maan came down stair. treid to find out geet... when he heard her giggles. he came to close her when he saw someone hug her. when those man turned behind. maans eyes wild..

maan: jay!!!!

precap: maan in dellima...

note: sorry guys for late update... i m so busy in my study. can not get much time. pls try to under stand. pls do comment. pls forgive me any mistakes.

Edited by reea88 - 14 years ago

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pop77

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Posted: 14 years ago

#244

I hope Maan don;t confuse about his relation..

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Sehar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#245

awsome part...
waiting for the next part...

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Tamy95

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Posted: 14 years ago

#246

when will u upload the next part ?
i am waitng sooo long ..
cant wait .. :D

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reea88

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Posted: 14 years ago

#247

part 60

maan could not move when he saw jay & geet his in his arms. his world vanished in dark. he could not ignore it. he remembered all things. what jay had said to him. his love his best friend which is geet. sameera & geets word. he saw their love, friendly behave like a statue. both were looked at him. jay was surprised. he could not believe his eyes.

jay: you?????

geet: oh yes jay he is...

jay: maan shorab khan...

geet surprised: u know him???

jay: very well said with rough voice...

geet confused: how??? she looked at maan. who was in same position.

jay: what r u doing here?? asked maan.

maan no response.

geet: what happened jay? jay moved towards maan slowly with his attitude look. geet tried to stop him. she scared what happened both of u..

jay stood in front of him. maan looked at him blankly. suddenly jay hugged him tightly.

jay: oh big brother how r u?? he smiled.

geet relif but surprise at a time.

maan stood there with no response.

geet" big brother???

jay turned to her & said: yes geet, my big brother. we meet in plain.. i told u na??/

geet remember:all things thats meean was maan..

jay ; yes.. i m so excited. what r u doing here big brother?

geet given to answer.

maan: i m her boss. geet hurt to lisen it.

jay: oh tough guy!!! but geet u did not tell me...

geet: u also did not tell me.

maan: well, guys i have to leave now. i ve some work.

jay: no way,i meet u after long time.. u can't leave like this way.

maan: no jay.. i have to.. i see u later. he towards the gate. geet hold his hand, maan pls take breakfast with us..

maan: no geet. some other time.

geet: maan, i will meet u evening..

maa: he did not gave any answer. & he left.

geet confused with his behaviour.

whats wrong with him.

at maans house,

maan broke almost things . he could not control himself. his pain just kill him. his love, his life all is now problem. jay is nice guy. he know him very well who love geet very much. on the other side geet his life. he can't survive witout her. what to do now??

also he was not sure about geet feelings..

maan screamed: why u did this to me? why? why u snached my happiness all the time.. why??

he hurt him self badly.

he thought: who is beetter for geet???

his heart says u but his mind say jay because he was her best friend & know er very well. he always keep her happy.

but i will also keep her happy.. she is my life... but his mind say: but what about her feelings.. she will happy with jay. cause u r very arrogant person. u can't control ur angry ness. so u 'll hurt her by ur attitude.

maan said: no.. i m changing.. i 'will change for her totally..

his brain: no maan thats not p[ossible.

his heart: maan its possible just try it.. first u express ur feellings to her.

brain: what if she reject.. will u able to bear it??

maan stopped both of u.. pls leave me alone..

he fall on bad & cried.

on the other hand jay made a big surprise for geet. he asked her to go with him in evening.. geet confused..

note: sorry guys... i m too much busy in my personal work.. thats why i m e regular here... pls forgive me.. pls commets..

Edited by reea88 - 14 years ago

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Tamy95

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Posted: 14 years ago

#248

yaar next upload kab ayega ?
i am waiting sooo looong ..
besbari se intezaar kar rahin hu ..

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reea88

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

i m sorry guys.. i know... u r angry with me.. but i m too much busy in my studies.. thats why i m not able to contnue here.. but i m trying to get some time to finish my ff.. BUT when i will get time ALLAH knows... i m sorry guys.. pls forgive me.. btw today is my birth day.. pray for me..

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maaneetkimeet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: reea88
i m sorry guys.. i know... u r angry with me.. but i m too much busy in my studies.. thats why i m not able to contnue here.. but i m trying to get some time to finish my ff.. BUT when i will get time ALLAH knows... i m sorry guys.. pls forgive me.. btw today is my birth day.. pray for me..

wish u a many happy return of the day ... all ur wish came ture ...it all right dear we will be wait but do complete it ...u have fun day lovey enjoy