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Posted: 14 years ago
part 57
maan went to the preet room. he also wonder how he know the way? its seems like he stayed here long time back. but how is possible. this is geet house. and this is the first time he come here? but something he felt special. but what? he open the cupboard & find preets cloths. he took a white shirt. but firstly he need shower. he went to the wash room. when geet entered she found empty room.
she thought: arey ye kaha chali gay? sayed washroom main hogi. in that time maan come out with hanging a towel on his shoulder. geet drunk her salvia. he looks extreamly hot. every water drop make him more hot. his eyes, his lips. geet looks away. maan obserb her very seductevly. he come to close her. geet back hit the wall. maan placed his hands her both sides.
looked at her more closely.
maan: keya dekh rahi ho tum? said very law voice. geet drop her eye lash but her eyes agin pop out.
geet: oh! mujhe laga aap ko kuch chaheye hongi? iss leye.
maan: ha, yeha to sab kuch hain. mujhe kuch nahi chaheye.
geet: felt, sad, kuch nahi chaheye aap ko. per aise kaise. she made a baby face.
maan smile, kue tumhe acha nahi laga laga ki mujhe kuch nahi chaheye. waise mujhe iss kamre main kuch nahi chaheye, per tum kuch dena chateho to tum de sakte ho.
geet delighted: ha, boleye, aap ko keya chaheye?
maan: mujhe kaise malom hoga, ki tum mujhe keya dena chateho?
geet confused: mere pass to aap ki leye kuch v nahi hain. maine to kuch socha nahi hain.
maan: acha! to pher socho, bad main do. main yehi ho. geet looks at his eyes. his eyes full of desire now. she understood what he meant.
their lips inches away. maan close more. geet close her eyes. her breath touch his face. maan touch her check softly. geet enjoy his touch. they were more close. geet lips tempting. maan heart so much wanted to touch her lips. he open his mouth. he also closed his eyes. he was going to kiss when they heard some foot step geet turned her face and maans kiss touch her check. maan open his eyes. geet stiffen. her check turened pink. maan also embressed. they saty away each other. dadi entered.
dadi: beta, koi problem hain, tum abhi tak change kue nahi ki?
maan: ji dadi ma abhi change kar raha ho.
dadi: change karke niche aao, ek sath khana khayenge? geet jara mujhe help karo?
geet nodded. dadi walk out geet lookead at him. maan looked down. she smile & walk out.
maan: keya, maan, tujhe keya ho jata hain geet ki samne? jara v control nahi khud ki oper? atleast apna payer ki ijharr karne tak wait kar. same on u maan.
they had dinner together. geet sat beside him. she made some of his fav dishes. like, chicken biriyani, naan, kabab. vegetable etc.
maan surprised to see that.
geet: itni kam time pe sirf itna kar paye.
maan: ye kam hain, to jada keya hain
geet: mujhe pata hain ki aap ko pasta pasand hain, wo v italian. but nahi bana payi.
maan: tumhe kaise pata?
geet: kamal hain, main aap ki ghar main rahi aur ye sab apki dadi ma ne bataya.
maan: ye dadima na, sab kuch isko pat a di. jaise ye ghar ki bahu. he stopped. waise acha hain saadi ki baad mujhe geet batana nahi parega mere pasand na pasand ki ware main. he smiled.
geet: keya bar bar kar rahi hain aap? khana khaheye. she served him food. dadi observed all this silently. she smiled to see geets concern.
maans plate full of food.
maan; geet, bas karo. aur nahi kha shakti.
geet: arey, itne se kaise chalege. aap abhi bhi weak hain. apko khana or aram ki jaro rat hain.
maan: ek din main khila ke. mujhe tum keya boxing main vejo gi.
geet: ha, main soch rahi thi. leken aap ko already
ye ho ha ata hain.. iss leye aap ko jarorat nahi hain.
maan: geet, ye ho ha nahi, isko tai chi kehte hain.
geet: ha, ohe. aab chup chup khana khaheye. warna main aap ko khilaongi. jaise hospital main khilayati. they both looked at dadi sudden.
dadi: oh, tum thi maan hospital main.
maan felt ashamed & said: ji dadima, i m sorry mere wajese aap sabko takhlif uttana pada.
dadi: nahi beta sorry kis bat ki. tum koi paray thodi ho. tumhara help karna humari farz hain. delhi main agar tum aur tumhari dadi nahi hoti to mere beti sayed bohut taklif main hoti. aur hum b sayed preet ki tratment nahi kar sakhte thi. hum tumhari aa bari hain.
maan hold dadi s hand: dadi ma, don't say this. maine aap logo ki leye kuch nahi kar paya. par aap logo ne mujhe nayi jindegi di. agar geet nahi hota to sayed main aaj jinda v nahi hota. aue aaad main v aap poute ho. to aap mujhe aise mat khaheye. main aap ko wada karti ho. preet ko kuch nahi hoga. oski sari treatment main karaonga. main bohut sare specialist ko janta ho. hum preet ko abroad leke jayenge. o thik ho jayege.
dadi & geet both eyes full of tears.
dadi: nahi beta, iski koi jarorat nahi tum ne keh dia yehi humari leye khafi hain.
maan: dadi, main sirf kehte nahi ho karta v ho. aur main preet ki treatment karonge. pls dadi itna mujhe karne deje.
dadi: thik hain, par ab tum jake aram karo.
maan: thanx dadima. main ghar chali jata ho bohut der ho gaya hain.
dadi: beta tufan ane wali hain lagta hain aaj rat tum yehi roko.
they finished their dinner. geet arrange for him everything. she was so happy. first time maan visit their house & stay here. woW!!! she change the window cover everything is maans choice. his fav white. white flower, white bed sheet. everything is perfect white.
precap: moon night means lovers night.😳😳
pls do comments..
Edited by reea88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very well written and good story apart from the current track..like all the parts of it.. do write more and kindly work on your hinglish..hehehe.. well written keep it up!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: QueenbeePallavi

very well written and good story apart from the current track..like all the parts of it.. do write more and kindly work on your hinglish..hehehe.. well written keep it up!!!

i know my hindi writting is so bad. but i cant do much. coz i m not indian.. pls consider it dear...thank u so much...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
can't wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
muahhhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update.
cant wait to find out how maan knws geet's home.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
maan is sooooooo sweet
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
wooooooooow .. good work reea :D
when are you going to uploud the next part '?
2morrow =? i am so addicted ,, thats why iam asking :p
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
do continue
it was amazing
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update maaneet scene cute maan so sweet of him to help them but i wonder why knows geet house every well cant wait how yu unfold the mystery pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn thank yuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful...😛

precap looks interesting 😳

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