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Posted: 14 years ago
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
loved geet jealous
maan meeting geets dadi
cant wait
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb part dear..how will be there meeting ?
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 56
maan teased geet more in their car. he was enjoying her fuming.
maan: waise geet, tum london main keya kar rahi thi?
geet confused: achar( pickle) bana rahi thi.. keya matlab hain iska.
maan: i mean, tum itni najok ho, bhai ki ladli bahen ho tum hoa akeli kaise rahi, sabke bina.
geet: kisne kaha aap ko main sabki bina rahi, mera dost thi oha. aur waise v mere bolane par mera bhai london chala jata. she said happily. maan smile.
maan: ha, bechara kar v keya sakta tha, agar itni jungli billi behen ho. osko to apna jaan bachana tha.
geet look at him angerly: keya kaha, apne mujhe jungli billi kaha.. how dare u? mujhe keya apne kisiko katte hoe dekha? nahi na? tu pher?
maan: jungli billi kahi tarake hote hain, kuch hote hain tumhari tara jo logo ko shar khate hain. chain se nahi jene dete.
geet: acha, main sabke jena haram ki. kiski ki bataye mujhe?she gave him sharp look. maan thought sirf jina keya geet, tumne to mere sab kuch chin li. mere jindege tumhari ho gaya.
maan; ha, bohut sare list hain, jaise tumhari wajase bechari sam ki keya halat ho gayi.
geet: bechari!!!! ye sam bechari kaise ban gayi!!! koi bechari nahi hain sam, ek churail hain main keh rahi ho. aap ko bata nahi wo keya gul khilate rehte hain pore din. pore city jante hain oski bare main. maan nodded with agreeness.
maan: acha, agar itna buri hain to tumne osko bachaya kue?
geet: oski bhai jay ki wajase. aap mujhe kehte hain ki main bhai ki ladli ho?? apko yakeen nahi hoga iss jay apni behen ko kitna payer karte hain. bilkul andhe ki tara. aur sam oski pora fayda uttha ti hain. par btw, aap bar bar sam ki war e kue baat kar rahi hain, majra keya hain maan sir. she narrowed her eyebrows.
maan: waise, u know geet main be sayed jay ki wajase osko consider kia. par maine osko maaf nahi kia. he sudden angry.
geet looked at him: kue,
maan; jo tumhe chot pouchayege main osko nahi maff kar sakta. main tumhari taklif nahi dekh sakta. tumhe rota hoa nahi dekh sakhta.
geet eyes full with love & passion & said: kue?
maan: kue ki tum mere paye....he stopped. he wanted to say u r my love.
geet: try to find out his uncomplete sentence. main keya?
maan looked away : oh tum mere ... dost ho.. aur ye keya kue kue laga rahi ho. tum janti ho na main koi b kaam adora nahi chorta.
geet looks at him dissopointed.
geet: ha ha, janti ho aap to maan hain na.. mr akdroo.. jaise kaam ki lawba or kuch dekhaye nahi deta.
maan : tumne mujhe akdroo kaha.. he gaves her a glare.
geet: oh sorry, apko to sirf akdroo nahi dust danav v bolna chaheye.. geet murmur: pore romance ki moment main pani pher di. sadoo kahi ka.
maan: geet!!!
geet: mujhe pata hain mera naam geet hain, bar bar yaad dilane ki jarorat nahi.
maan: geet, tum kitni chir chiri ho. jungli billi.
geet: apne ferse mujhe jungli billi kaha.
maan: main keya kar sakh ta ho agar tum ye naam deserve karo.
geet twisted her lips. aap se main baat nahi karongi.
maan: thank god mera kaan baj jayega.
geet more irratated. maan stop his car with sudden break geet faal on his chest. their touch melt them again. they looked each other with so much desire & love. their heart beating highly. maan cup her face. geet melt his touch. she closed her eyes. enjoying his touch.
maan: geet!!! said very softly.
geet: umm. she unable to talk.
maan: seat belt pehenlo.
geet open her eyes instantly: keya.
maan: ha, warna police pakrege. she back on her seat. & fix her seat belt. she fuming with anger. achi khasi mood ko kaise spoil karna hoti hain ye koi maan se sekhe..
maan: smile.
they reached geets house. there was so dark, rarely visible anything. & maan forget thats hawali which he saw earliar with jay.
geet came out from the car.
maan thought: ye geet kaha leke ayee. yeha to kuch v dekhai nahi de raha hain. bhoot ka ghar lag raha hain
geet could hear his murmur: ye bhoot ka ghar nahi, bhootni ki ghar hain i mean mera ghar hain.
maan teased her & said: tabhi to bolo, itna andhera kue hain.
geet step her foot. aap ko to..
geet kaun hain ye? a female voice behind them. they turned back.
geet: oh, dadi ma, ye maan hain. maine kaha tha na aap ko.. oh mera boss jo...
dadi stopped her: samaj gayi..tu tum osko bahar kue khari kar ke rakhi ho tum bhi na. ander aao beta. maan pleased to see her. don't know why. it seems they know each other & this place.
he took her bless. geet happy to see that.
they enter their hawali. maan wondered to see this place. huge ball room like palace. every furniture symbol of their khandani. he looked around & wondered he felt he know each of corner in this hawali. the staires, the rooms everything.
maan asked: oper main 5 bedroom hain na. geet& dadima looked at him shocked.
geet: ha, par aap ko kaise pata.
maan also did not know the answer: pata nahi.
geet ignore, may be he guess.
dadi: jao, beta maan ki leye dinner ki intejam karo.
geet nodded. she went to the kitchen but wrong way.
maan: kitchen right sede pe hain. geet turned & looked at him with surprise. maan also confused. geet again ignore & went to the kitchen.
dadi : asked, to beta bolo apni bare main, kaun kaun hain tumhari ghar main.
maan: ji sirf main aur dadima.
dadi: aur tumhari ma bap.
maan always try ignore that question. but today he have to answer it.
maan: o log nahi hain. he quite. dadi fell his pain. i m sorry beta. udhas mat ho. we r same like u.
maan nodded & said: i know dadi ma. he bit his lips.
dadi smile: its ok, u can call me dadi ma. main geet ki dadi ho aur tumhari bhi ho.
maan smile.
geet camme out with glass of water. suddenly she slipped & fall on maans lap. maans face full wet. he hold her. they looked each other. again they lost with each other eyes.
reea said:( abey, dadi ma hain samne. kuch to sharam karo.😡 par in log sone tab na😆)
they back sense when dadi ma cough. they straighten themsef. geet: i m sorry.
dadi: keya karti ho geet, beta tum oper jao, oha preet ki kamre hain jaha tumhe kapre milege.
maan: no its ok.
dadi: beta jao, warna thand lag jayege.
geet was going to show preet room, where maan said no need. i will find it. he towards the stairs leaving geet confused😕
well, guys maan is confused. how he know this hawali. even i m confused. give me ur guess.
sorry for mistake. i m really sorry i try my best to update my regularly but don't get much time. pls stay with me. & give ur support.
this update dedicate to raj -202.. pls do comments.
Edited by reea88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
first time ever ..Me First....

cool update..it reminded me of the fight they had on the way to the dhaba...
Maan confused...well he has reason to be all this seems so spooky to him for sure

Edited by nanditasingh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome update

Loved it

Can't wait 4 da next part

Con soon

Thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
very funny update n im more confusd like maan do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiiiiiiiiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
has maan been in da haveli before
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
maybe he was there in his childhood let see how yu unfold the mystery fabulous update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update dear......
guess both dadi's are friends and maan might have visited it in his childhood..............or geet's brother might be a close friend to maan..............
Edited by puth - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update.
maan was amazing.
love it.

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