THE DEVIL AND THE WALLPAPER |FINAL P.41| - Page 34

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Posted: 14 years ago
7000 words 😲 omg Sammy your pure pretty hands, but I absolutely loved it ⭐️👏⭐️

I hope this hasn't put you off writing forever or who will I write long comments too😆

First that beautiful poem and then Maan's dream, I fell for that hook line and sinker 😳😆 I blame your sad OS you wrote in the past, traumatised me for life now 😡😆

As much as I ❤️ Immi, hearing MSK tearing himself up over his dream, I finally had decided which side I was in 😳😆

When he woke up I was also thinking thank god it was only a dream just like him, you can still go get your girl MSK😉 😆 der na kar Maan as the KKHH song goes jaldi se Geet ko apna bana, she is human and has contacts now so how long before Imran charms evade her😳 😆 MSK has made me go all filmy now 😲😆

Altho I was like not the laptop, you could have just left it there and I would grabbed it before you could blink and we would both be happy 😉😆 okay I would have maybe grabbed more than just the laptop 😈🤣 but purely to check if such men like MSK are real which many of us on IF have wondered so it was purely for unselfish reasons I can assure you 😳

you think your soo beautiful don't you - who are we trying to kid Geet here we both know he is drop dead gorgeous but we have all been there, I don't blame you.

🤣🤣🤣 that thing about the coloured contact lens, heard of the wandering eye before but not lens, MSK is soo hot even contact lens can't resist him 🤣 no wonder ppl become blind in love their contacts are going out of control 🤣🤣🤣

Geet called Imran a despardo 😲 😕 I think she needs new contacts 😆 only possible explanation for being freaked out to find a hawt guy staring at you

her antennas 🤣 omg are we triplets now??? Anyway this mean MSK and Imran have a thing for girls with antennas 😃😃😃

Even I was shocked when he sat next to her 😆

the pics 🤣 were did they come from???

him touching her arm, I sure I felt some electricity tooo 😳😆

I loved their interaction here it was soo cute, reminded me of the good old nok jhok days

I love all the poems btw in case I forget to mention that

Pinky is soo darn annoying always medding and interfering,I can't believe she called Geet a skank 🤬 I'm soo glad Geet slapped her twice in the face 😡😡😡

Geet even tried to stick up her intially, I'm soo glad finally Geet realised what she was really like 😡

My anger nearly made me forget the bit where he said he wanted her 😍 what an awesome scene until Pinky arrived

then Imran hadn't been into all along 😆 well she can't have all hawt guys after her it's only fair 😆

Edited by Sigma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Edited ma Chota comment 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: _SiinnceMaan_

16 likes already. Where on earth are my 16 comments ! 😲 If I could write 7000 words for you guys. You can spare me a sentence or two. Really guys 😆

🤣 ! Shut it 🤣 ! i left u 990 (almost 1000 wrds) comment 🤣 ! thts ma LONGEST comment I ever left for any1 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
AMAZING!!!! how did u even get a thought that u forgot how to write....if this is you forgetting then what would it be when u remember?

that was an amazing update!!! loved it!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
I loooved the ending... you are a very talented writer :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wat a nice treat u gave me after a long day of moving for me 😒 finally u updated but THANK U soooo muchh for giving us a LONG update I really appreciate it 😃 it was as usual a marvelous update and I jus luvd luvd luvd itt 😛 once again an awesome job and u rock dear but plz dnt ever say tht u dnt wanna write cuz I luv ur stories and ur writing and I cnt live without reading them LOL.. I understand tht u wrote A LOT but just take rest only for a while then I hope to c another OS or mayb an FF from u 😲 All in all a wonderful OS and thanks alot for sharing it with us 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Saaaaaaaaam !😲
do i even have to ..?
U r AAmzing !! I hellaa love yu <3
OMG in love with your FFs and SSs .. Uuu rockkkk
I betta see a FF or Ss soon🤣

Vernaaaa ..!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow sammy..... brilliantly written..... am sure writing 7000 words was a task but the end has come up very well...... loved it......
i know u hv no time...but try continuing writing something....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh my gosh. That was absolutely amazing. I actually just read the whole thing in one go right now. I didn't want to go through the torture of waiting for updates so I made myself stay away until you finished. And to say it was worth it is saying the least.
I was seriously crying from laughter during the first two parts. The monologues of Geet were just hilarious. I felt bad at first for the poor thing since she stalked MSK night and day and thought he didn't recognize her. But lo and behold it was chubby little Maan who suffered more. Lol
And Pinki I seriously wanted to strangle her in the third part when she was hacking the FB account. I had a feeling there that there was something fishy going on with the way she was acting. I can't believe she would stoop so low.
Oh well our Maaneet were together at last. I'm a little curious as to how Geet managed to jump on Maan's back with a sari on. I mean she's skilled to pull that off...lol
It was wonderful & I thoroughly enjoyed. Please continue writing!
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Posted: 14 years ago
just awesome ending......................
loved it so much....................
both loved each other from their childhood and glad that Imran only wanted to make Maan jealous and Pinky got her due................
fantastic work...................
i just love the pix................
ha ha ha.................
excellent...............

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