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Posted: 14 years ago
thanx for the PM

njoyed reading the update, but MAAN's dream - i thought it is for real and for a sec thought of not reading the entire update and the very next sec i found that its just a dream and a great sigh of relief appeared on face and a smile appeared on my lips

on the whole very gripping story, PINKY and IMRAN turned out to be extremely opposite as expected

PINKY - betrayed GEET

IMRAN - turned out to be example of true freindship

thanx once again
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sammy, awesome. Dont you dare call one of my favorite FF writers Mrs. Maan Singh Phurana's OS a shameful creation. OK? You dont know what an awesome writer she is. So better be careful in future.
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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved it...but whn i started readind it ..i had a mini heart attach nd was fumming with anger...was abt to close d page ..whn my eyes caught tis "'NO!' Maan screamed, frantically sitting upright"....glad that u made it a dream😈..ufff then on i loved it to d core....ha ha ha pinky needed that...tooo gud🤣🤣🤣🤣....
Edited by eiya22 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
An absolutely perfect Ending. And a beautiful content. Love you for this. You made my night.! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Congrats Sammy for finishing it..i thought we will nvere have a ending to it..hehe..
woha and did u write that..I mean it had a happy ending..hows tht possible with u...i have never read an OS from u which had happy ending..ur FF did...thst a diff story...but still..
thnku for the ultra long update..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey SAMIRA,😊

First of all thnx a lot 4 completing it, i thought my hair will turn gray till u update😆 though they are already few silver in my hair (thnx 2 my carelessness) due to malnutrition 🤣

Coming to update,

Love the "My immortal" song; so rightly depict the situation.

Maan's Nightmare 😲, U made me believe that it happened but then I realized it does not sound right & Woh... it was a dream.

I did not know that MSK looks like this with fangs & devil horns 🤣

Where is Devil staff it was missing so here😆


& Geet has that BIG eyes 🤣

Poor MSK, Geet destroyed hi look, (Swollen face & red eyes & May be no BSKs)

Very good poem 😊 & FAVORITE teacher got best 4rom MSK, 👏

I love Kurban Hua dance, it was a nice surprise included in.⭐️

😲😲Sweet Pinky turned into REAL DEVIL 😡

Imran was only pretending???, U made us believe that he loved Geet

Loved the way trio had fight. Imran the cupid.

One day Geet will handicap the Maan by constant hitting😆

Loved the confession.❤️

Now I can't write any more as I am not used to talk/discuss so much🤣

Love U, Bye😊




Edited by serenelove - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mind-blowing update! Loved it to the bits! Lolz....Geet slapped Pinky.....smashing! Imran is a great friend.....am glad he was not left heartbroken. Ah, Geet and Maan finally together and happy.....all the misunderstandings got cleared.....it was just superb!

Oh no, you certainly can't take such a long break from writing....we will help you recover from your amnesia and all other stuff....lolz. 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
*Cries Out* Why oh why did it have to endddd!!!!!!????
*Hopes* That there will be an epilogue? Oops .. faintly remembers someone vowing that they will not write for the rest of eternity .. 😆
*Jumps with Joy* OMG OMG OMG OMG That was sooooo damn uhh .. can't find the words ... can't find the words ... 😍
Ok Sammy... you have momentarily left me speechless .. I seriously can't come up with the right words to appreciate this OS .. and I think I'll have to pump my brain again so I can conjure up a lengthyyyyyyyyyyyyy comment for you!!! 😉
*Sighhhh* That - Was - Beautiful!
More later Mrs. Phurana :)
Love,
Z
<3
Edited by Mk.Gh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMFG 🤣 ! 7000 words 😲 ! 🤣 !! damn girl u write alot 🤣 ! I never wrote more thn 5000 wrds ! EVEN FOR MY COURSE WRKs 🤣 !!

Reserved ***


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the 1st PArt was just amazin !! Maan's feeling/anger seeing Geet&Imran together, how he wanted to just kill imraan! n his guilt was shown of losin geet! amazin

n thn hahahahahaha OMG OMG OMG hahahahhahahahhahahaha Cant f**kin stop laughin afta readin this part '' Well there was no chances her future children would ever encounter any Baby Singh Khurana's after the damage she had imposed on his private part.' hahhahahahahah sammy ur too much hahahha.
Just Love how ur geeet is completely different <3 !
ahahahahahah her drawin Maan as a monster hahahah was amazin ! !

n Geets thaught abt imraan Starin @ her like he is jst gona jump on her 🤣 !

hahhahaha OMFG !! the 2 drawings scared the shit outta me hahahaha 🤣

Awwww Now I felt really bad for both imraan n Maan .. 1 tryin to find out the reason behind geet hatin him so much , the otha watchin the girl he loves wid some1 else ! *can i hug both <3 *

OMG tht Poem was so sad n BEautiful :'( !! loved the lines 'Did you ever look at me, the way I've always looked at you?
Did you ever love me, the way I have loved you?' Beautiful ! in 1 word <3

LOl geet concerned about her tummy 🤣 !! * onli if Tummy master eva looked afta his stomach .-. *

Lol Pinky is so Evil here 🤣 ! to make Maan Jealous she invited Both Maan n Imraan 😆 ! Kamini I tell u 🤣


'Geet turned around and was about to head off when a hand grasped her wrist, preventing her from leaving. Geet looked over her shoulder and saw Imran dressed in a black suit, standing behind her.' OMG ! can i please really see imraan n geet together 🤣 ! I mean im in love wid thm <3 !! uffff <3

OMG Sammmmy u reminded me of the most beautiful Maneet Moment :( ! Kurbaan Hua <3 !! aye jst loved how Maan said ur dancin wid every1 buh refusin me ? ' <3

''Maan crushed his mouth to hers, slanting his lips savagely across hers. Geet froze with his touch, unable to comprehend how to react. This being her first kiss, she did not know how to retaliate. Instantly, his rough kiss softened as he realized that this was her first kiss. Not wanting to scare her, Maan's lips gentled, as he cupped her cheeks and caressed her face, silently urging her to respond. On a will of her own, Geet found herself wrapping her arms around his neck, brushing the back of his neck with her trembling fingers. She shyly opened her lips a bit, allowing him to have better access. With a groan, Maan broke the kiss, only to press hot scattering kisses onto her cheeks. He tilted her head upwards and began kissing her neck, nipping at her ear lobes with his teeth.'' *BLUSH* *BLUSH* *BLUSH* *BLUSH* *BLUSH* OMG OMG !! hahahahah 🤣 ! I was actually imaginin Maneeet like this *BLUSH* onli if we could actually get somefin like this *BLUSH*

OMG can some1 kill this pinky 😡 ! she is so pissin Off ! 😡 ! I mean couldn't she come 5 mins later 😡 ! Kamini !!

'Don't you ever call Geet anything. Words like filth and skank suit your personality much better.'' Loved how munda closed the motti kamini's mouth 😡 ! I think she should jst open her mouth to eat! not to say anyfin .-. !! SAAND ! .-.

OUCH !OUCH ! 🤣 'I don't know whether you were contemplating whether to approach me or eat me. Either option disgusts me.' Pinky so deserved it 😡 🤣
OMG ! Pinky here turned out to be wah a bitch .-. ! all this time her gettin imraan n geet was nothin buh hatred For wat she thaught geet would forget maan .-. !!
She so deserved tht slap 😡 !! Why didnt geet here had a bitch fight wid this Kamini 😡 !

cuz of all this kamini Pinky ! now Imraan is hurt :( * can Please Please Go Hug Him <3 *
OMG OMG :O ! Imraaan Being the Small Fat Boy :O ! tht description was beautiful !! for all this time he loved her !! for her ! he lost weight n everythin ! OMG * NO HUGS !! can I take him home ;) ! he shooo shweeet *
Why is he such a sweet heart :O !! all this time he was tryin to get thm Close Awww <3
He even got beaten up for no reason :O ! *this time Can i Take him to ma room ;) !! JST TO HUG HIM m cure him U NAUGHTY GURL ;) *



LOOOOOOOOOOOOL!! the best part GEET ON MAANS BK TO STOP HIM 🤣

OMG the Confession Part was the Best <3 !! Geet confessin her love to munda <3
'You can stop sucking your stomach in now Geet, I don't want you to pass out on me'. Outraged, Geet struggled to stay calm in his embrace. 'Your unromantic bully! The least you could have done is responded to my confession'.
hahahahhahaha Typical Maneet 🤣 !! there has to be a Tom&Jerry Fight in every romance <3

I vow upon my life,
my life is because of you.

Beautiful Poem <3 !! girl ur not jst an amazin Writter buh a gr8 poet <3

BEST confesssion Ever <3 !! I mean Way better thn The Jungle confession 😆 !


OMG Sammmmmmy WOOOW ! u jst left me speechless ! I mean 7000 wrds were worth read <3 !!
I mean I never always read such long post buh ur SS was jst Awesome tht i didnt stop at all <3
Beautiful <3

PLUS: now i want an OS on Imran n Geet ONLY 🤣

Edited by -Cwezy_Manoola- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sammy AKA Mrs. Maan Singh Phurana......

I love you and your happy ending😈 fic...to death...I loved the part where Pinky turns into Ekta Mayi type vindictive villain...totally unexpected......
Poor Imran.A....I see you saved him for yourself..🤣

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