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Posted: 14 years ago
helllooo...kya haal chaal??????sab badiyaa?????????ghar pe sab theek thaak???????
bhai behan??????????chachu chachi??????taauji taayiji????????πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...accha sab theek hai na??????chalo fir update ki baat karte hain...
yaaar kyun???????????kyun??????????????????kyun rulaane pe tuli hui hai???????pata hai teri fic padh ke lrl ki kitni yaad aati hai?????ek ye fic aur ek "ankahi" ye dono fics jale pe namak ke barabar hainπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...lrl ki saari yaadein taaza ho jaati hain...
kaash lrl ko aage continue karne ka contract tujhe aur priya ko de diya jaata to main bhut khush hotiπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ..
loved each and every scene...raj to mujhe pagal karke hi chodega😳😳not that ki main already pagal nhn hun par ab to mujhe mental asylum mein bhi nhn legaπŸ˜†...
every scene was superb...dr.keerti rocks man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! unhein plzzz kahin mat bhejna...fic ka flavour hi khatam ho jaayega😭...kaise raj unhein tease kar raha tha...πŸ˜†...naina ne dr.keerti ko roka iss baat ko lekar...par dr.keerti sach mein dr.shalini ki dost nikali...raj ko accha chup karwaaya...
yaar ye raj naina ki umar ko lekar itna irritate kyun hota hai...pyaar karte waqt to nhn socha tha ki vo itni YOUNG haiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...
suriji was also awesome..."waada tera waada" hahahahaha...sach mein ye jab lrl mein suriji ne bola tha to itne cute lag rahe the na..πŸ˜†...
huda sach mein ek din naina se peetega aur uss scene ko dekhne ke liye raj ke saath saath main bhi bhut betaab hunπŸ˜†πŸ˜†...
aur haan last but not the least...raj naina ko ab nhn chodega...poori party mein to naina bachti rahi "suicide" waali baat se...par ab raj nhn chodne waala usse...i waiting to see ki raj kaise jhaadta hai usse...
cont realll sooon...i cant wait...
ab ye baat mujhe mat bolna main to kabhi update sooon nhn karti...😑...koi baat nhn readers ka haq hota hai update jaldi maanga...πŸ˜†
love u...
aman

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Mana hey di !

How r u feeling now???..i know doctors r really bad patients..I hope u proove to b an exception and take your medicines on time and rest too.😊 I'm lil better now...and yeah...am not an exception to the rule...πŸ˜›πŸ˜† am equally bad patient...πŸ˜†
Lolita Mam really scared Raj..he was stammering infront of her as if he is a cadet instead of captainπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† he..he..Raj is always in jinx when someone shows some kinda affection to him...

Loved the canteen scene and yes captain to shud do something abt his feelings otherwise he'll end up being a viewer only when he can b much more😳😳
Keerti gave a right description of each cadet...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ haan yaar...maine usse sabkuch theek se samjha diya tha...πŸ˜›

Poor Raj!!! now Keerti and Abhi have joined Shalini and their main hobby seems to b pulling Raj's legs.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† That's real entertainment for them...πŸ˜†

Keerti is teasing him so much πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I love her easy relationship with Raj.😊
Party was fun..πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ Raj was so touched with these gestures from his cadets..He owned them so much..Naina is continously trying to avoid her suicidematter but Raj wont leave that so easily..Waiting for their meeting.πŸ˜ƒ
Missed RN in this update but rest can't b ignored so I hope in next part our Captain wud b able to convey some of his feelings to Naina..she has waited long enough to hear his confession.. RN meeting toh hogi..but abt Raj letting his feelings out..hmmm..not sure...πŸ˜›
Pls continue soo
take care Bye

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

take medicines and rest well...coming to the update it was awesome...

thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

dat was gud part πŸ‘πŸ‘.. thanks puri...😊

πŸ˜† Lolita ji πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... Captain ko dara diya na πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...

agree with keerti ...its high time Captain confesses else sach mein viewer bankar reh jayenge πŸ˜† arey nahi...main hoon na...πŸ˜‰

canteen scene was good πŸ‘πŸ‘...

& Raj getting back credentials back 😳😳... happiest moment πŸ₯³ ...


Good to see the re union scene of every1 πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...

Missing RN scene alone πŸ˜›πŸ˜›.. Let the captain & Protege meet akele mein πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰... bechare kafi din se nahi mile πŸ˜›πŸ˜› theek hai theek hai...milati hu unko...πŸ˜›

continue soon πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

Heyy Mana!!!!!!!!!!!! hey shreya...😊

another awesome update from your side,,,,,,,,,😊 Thanks...
LOLITa ney toh becharey raj ko dara hi diya ,leking bada hi Sweet sa thaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!πŸ˜† Thanks again.
Keerti is also right ,,,,,its high time for raj to break the ice and do izhaare ishkk to Naina
aur hamarey hero ko uska khoya hua honour aur glory waapas milhi gayi,,I'm so happpyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!πŸ‘πŸ₯³
and the reunion party of cadets and RK was too good,,Naina stealing glances of RK ,,heheheheπŸ˜†
RN scenes were less but its okk ,,,,kabhi na kabhi aaage mil toh lenge hi 😳 Haan bilkul...πŸ˜‰
and and and Last but not the least ,,don;t worry for the update,,just take care of your health,hoping your speedy recovery as well as the speeding update,,πŸ˜ƒ Thanks a ton dear...
bye and take careπŸ˜ƒ I will dear...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome part.
loved it.
continue soon.

how r u now
get well soon

hey rakhi !
thank u so much dear...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ridhz21

Awesome update
loved it
lolita scared raj πŸ˜†
loved mess part πŸ˜ƒ
Aalekh and raj scene loved it
raj won't leave suicide matter easily
missing RN alone scene...hope in next update get them...loved d updateπŸ‘
take care
continue soon



Hey Ridhz!! Thanks for liking the update and commenting!!
stay tuned for more,... bye dear !
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mohabbatgirl

hey thanks for the PM.. and the update was fantastic as always.πŸ˜ƒ. So Raj is finally a Captain again.. πŸ‘ Good to see all the cadets having soo much fun.. and Keerti and Abhi pulling his leg was quite funny.. πŸ˜† Raj and Naina stealing glances at each other and blushing.. 😳 looking forward to the Raj-Naina confrontation and confession.. 😍 😳😳


Thanks dear 😊 Stay tuned...more to come ! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hahaha...Lolitha ji ne toh bechare raj ko dara hi diya lagtha haiπŸ˜†...but loved her gesture... Keerti's interaction with the cadets is nice...she got to see them all finally after hearing abt them so much from raj...the felicitation ceremony really brought back the time when he was robbed of his credentials...n loved to see he sought assurance from Naina...that now everything is going to be alright...the bond between raj n Keerti only deepened with time n their reluctance to part with each other showed this only...but good to see Naina managed to stop her for the time being in the name of party...Raj is happy abt it...n the teasing session between Keerti n him regarding this was cute... Thanks a ton esha...Keerti, unknowingly has taken place of his elder sister...

The party scene was excellent...Raj got to know what happened in his cadets lives during his absence... and also told them what he had been doing all the while...he is really a part of all of their lives n vice-versa...so Naina is avoiding the topic of her attempted suicide in front of Raj fearing him but was unaware that he already knows that...now I'm waiting to see when he confronts her about it n when they'll have some time alone...now Dr.Mana...have some mercy on the poor love birds n allow some privacy to them to talk...since his return u haven't allowed them a single min of privacy to talk about themselves...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...now budge n give them some space yaar...πŸ˜†πŸ˜† haan yaar deti hu na... par tum sab ko badi jaldi hai unke "space time" mein dekhne ki ! πŸ˜› Bad manners !!!πŸ˜†

And Get Well Soon😑...Doctors ko Bimaar padna allowed nahi hai😑😑...samjhi...Areyyy !!! 😲 ek toh main bimaar hu aur tum mujhe daant rahi ho !!! 😭
so jadli theek ho jaa...aur haan iss ke liye khud apna ilaaz mat karna...kisi achche doctor ke paas jaanaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† he..he...πŸ˜† I'll keep this advice in mind..πŸ˜†[/QUOTE]

Thanks a ton for commenting Siri...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

Awesome yaar...teri fever ki nahi ud ki baat karr rahi hun...πŸ˜† achcha?? 😲 Mujhe toh laga tu fever ki baat kar rahi hai...πŸ˜›
he he he...Lolita maam ne toh bekar me raj ko dara diya yaar...!!! mujhe yaad aa gaya voh scene jab Naina KMA chod kar ja rahi thi aur Lolita maam ne use mithai khane ke liye bulaya tha...!!! par naina toh nahi aayi...chali gayi thi...sayad vohi mithai rakha hoga unhone Raj ke liye...aur specilly ki orderly ko bhej kar layi hogi...tabhi kaha ke spel aap ke liye order ki thi...ha ha ha...mujhe pata hai food poisioning ka case ho sakta hai...par yeh sacvh me thode hi hai...yeh toh fiction hai na...πŸ˜† fiction hua toh kya hua? Food poisoning toh food poisoning hai na? aur food poisoning toh baad ki baat hai...sabse pehle toh uss mithai ko FUNGUS lag chuka hota...jisse dekhte hi, Raj khaana toh dur, sungna bhi pasand nahi karta...hain ki nai?πŸ˜›πŸ˜†

kirti ne bhi sahi kaha...Raj agar iss tarah silence viewer bana rahega...toh aise hi reh jayega hamesha ke liye...aur yahan par toh LIKE button bhi nahi hai...ha ha ha...πŸ˜†

bichara Raj...Kirti uss ka BAND bajane taiyar hai...par Raj bajjne se bach raha hai...!!! in fact Shalini bhi Kirti ko kafi support karr rahi thi...nahi...πŸ˜‰ ab dono friends jo hai...πŸ˜›

Huda ka Kirti ke liye comment sahi me mast tha...he he he...πŸ˜† thanks...πŸ˜†

yeh sahi hai Pooja aur Ali ka engagement ho gaya...cadets ka pura scene ek damm mast tha...maza aa gaya...πŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘

kaash uss waqt kirti...'meri naina' keh deti...maza aa jata...πŸ˜› par mere rehte woh kaise kehti?πŸ˜›

sachi bolun toh iss...'HUM' (abhi) ke aane ke baad mujhe GAMM cha jata hai...ha ha ha...πŸ˜†

in fact mujhe bhi kisi ne yehi kaha tha ke...compliment ko chod kar har bar dushri baat ko hi pakdoge...'...aur jiss ne kaha tha...voh Doc iss fic ki writer hai...!!! ek doc ne Raj se kaha tha aur ek Doc ne mujh se...πŸ˜† lolzzz...πŸ˜†

gana tak toh thik hai...par abhi ne phir se apne rules n regulation samne laya na...toh Abhi ki main Abhi abhi murder kar dungi...πŸ˜† oye...mere fic ke kisi bhi character ko chuna bhi mana hai...Maj.Nair ko bhi πŸ˜› samjhi??? πŸ˜› arey yaar...mere fic ko unki zaroorat hai...πŸ˜‰

aur fever ka asar baht ho gaya hai tujhe...RN ko bilkul bhi akela nahi choda tune...!!! doc hai na tu...itna nahi janti ke Patient ko khush rakhne se voh jaldi thik hota hai...!!! aur raj ki khusi ko... tu yun dur bhaga rahi hai ke...mera mann karr raha hai ki abhi aa kar sari kasar tujh pe nikal dun... par isse koi faida hoga aisa tujhe lagta hai kya?πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›

dekha...jaldi me hi sahi...par comment kitna fast kiya maine...kya karti...tu jaldi jo ud karnewali hai...πŸ˜ƒ

vaise apna khayal rakha kar...fever tujhe hota hai toh weekend ki tension mujhe hoti hai...med le kar jaldi se thik ho ja...kisi ne yeh sunn liya ki meri frnd jo ki doc hai aur khud bimar padi hui hai...toh mera toh naak hi katt jayega...πŸ˜† theek hai theek hai...πŸ˜†

hey...marna mat...aur plz jaldi se next part post kar...!!! main toh isi umeed me baithi hui hun ke sayad ek scene toh RN ka ho...bole toh akele me...yaar...πŸ˜† dekhungi...sochungi...kal parso kuch kahungi...πŸ˜›πŸ˜†

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