FF-PARADOX- THREAD 4~MANN & GEET-updated on thre 5 - Page 20

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Posted: 14 years ago
god edward is gone now for sure poor geet n the precap is awesome
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Hmmm possessive maan! amazing! continue soon!
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Cangates for new thread
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Congo on ur new thread....🥳
awesome part...rlly nice..plzz update soon..😃
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THANKS FOR ALL THE LOVE & SUPPORT…. UPDATING :D
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wowwwwww updating status me waiting
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***PARADOX***
Concept 1
part 32
Happy V-dAY




Maan sat in the car while Geet at the back seet.
Geet- I am changing. Glass up. Maan looks out. Extremely angry. Geet takes her vest off then bra.
Geet- why are you angry? You know it happens.
Maan didn't utter a word. Geet wore a low cut top. Showing her half boob... & changed in to a short.... She comes at the front and sits on his lap. Her both leg resting on either side of him.... She slowly slides her hand round his neck.... Then maans eyes fell on her really low cut top...
Maan- what are you wearing? & you are not going out like this.
Geet- who said I am going out? She smirks naughtily.... I am all yours at the moment.... She smirk and started to give him shower of kisses.
Maan started to breath hard. This wasn't right. Not at all...
Maan- jaan stop it....
Geet- do you know what Edward told me....
Geet losses her pony tail. Letting her hair cover there faces....
Geet- that you will crash me on bed tonight... She smirks...
Maan- tough... Nothing like that will happen!
Geet- I want you to crash me... She smirks...
Maan- you becoming naughty day by day! Maan slowly started to kiss her shoulder line. He Just couldn't control.
Geet- you have made me like this. What could I do? If you possibly can't leave any chance... Then how is that my fault?.... She pushes the chair back....
Maan- jaan not now.... You have to go in to here the result!
Geet- shila is there.
Maan- hmm.... He pines her to the sit and starts to kiss passionately.... It's been 30 minute... Everyone started to come out... Whole competition was over. Shila walked out with a big trophy.

Rano- where is Geet?
Shila- bro is dropping her home.
Rano- this is the limit. It's her competition.
Shila- oh well! We have the trophy still.....

Maan dropped Geet home at 12 midnight. She sneaked in wearing maans jacket.... Luckily no one saw....

Few more weeks have passed. Maan have joined the office. Sam helping him with everything as well as a secretary.

Sam- sir may I cone in?
Maan- how many time I have told you sam... Don't call me sir!
Sam- I know. But I work for you. She smiles.
Maan- yes. But the formality is unnecessary.
Sam- yes... But...
Maan- sam! No! Just call me maan.
Sam smiles- ok maan! Here is your file. Would you like a coffe?
Maan- yes please.

As sam leaves geet calls.
Maan- hello....
Geet- are you picking me up today?
Maan closes his eyes in frustration. He is so busy at work that he completely forgot it's 3 & he promised that.... Ugh!
Geet- it's alright. Don't worry. I know your busy.
Maan- I love you. He smiles.
Geet- aca suno...
Maan- bolo....
Geet- umm....
Maan- yes.,,,
Geet- oh actually...
Maan- bolo Geet! I have lots of word to do!
Geet- I will tell you later. Geet hangs up.
Sam walks in with coffe & bunch of red flowers...
Sam- someone have send you this flowers. Maan looks at it. Knew well who was it. He smiles.
Maan opens the note- from your jaan. I love you. Maan smiles.
Sam tries to be nosy to see but failed.
Sam- lovely flowers.
Maan- thanks. You may leave. Maan texed Geet... I love you 2.....
Geet texed back- where is my flowers? Maan smiles reading the tex... He replies back- am I not enough?
Geet bursts out in laugh but shila snatches the phone and types two zero & replies.... Maan gets confused again....
Maan- so I am nothing to you? With a angry face.

Shila killed her self laughing. Get looked at her annoyed.
Shila- it's high time you tell him what that 2 circle means.
Geet- no! I am not telling him. You are so mean. What he will think! She replies in anger... Of course he is everything to her. How could he even think like this. She decided to pay the office a visit. Stupid shila.
On the other hand it's been 1 hour since Geet haven't replied to his tex. He started to get frustrated. He worried just then Geet walks in. There face instantly brightens up. Twinkled. Geet smiles. She ran across the room & sat on his lap. Kissing him tight.
Geet- I missed you! She smiles.... A sigh smile....
Maan didn't say another word just kissed her tight on the lips. Neither couldn't stop the kiss... Nibbling. Exchanging there Tongue. Suckling.... While there hand wondered round one another body.... It took them half an hour to come back to the reality...
Maan- jaan mujce bohat Sara kam hi.... He smiles while still nibbling on his lips....
Geet- then do it na.... She smiles....
Maan- if you are here... Tempting me... How could I? He smirks. He took out some tissue & wipes both of there lips...
Geet- when are you coming home?
Maan- I won't be able to see you for a week. I have to go to London twomoro! Geets eyes widens. One week!!!!!!!! She stands up from his lap instantly- one week? One week!!!!! What am I suppose to do for a week?
Maan- it's only a week.... I will be back soon.....
Maan hugs her from the back to comfort her..... Gently kissing the nape & her shoulder line.....
Maan- I love you.... But I have to go....
Geet turns round & gives him a quick peck.....
Geet- home early! She walks off half angry half happy!!!!



next- sam & maan going to london😲


hay you all' ty soooo much' :D

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thanks for all the love & support 2mx update will be up later on 2day' and will PM all then :D

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update thankz for making it awesome and happy v-day
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Posted: 14 years ago
second 2 comment😭😭wanted 2 b d first
anyways
HAPPY HUGS DAYYYYYYYYYY
A BIG BEAR HUG FRM MY SIDE
n awesomeeeeeee updateeeeeeee
Edited by rsroopali - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet knows how to manofy maan and with sheila's asaar now she has also become naughty and haha Sheila is so funny sending those two circles poor maan misunderstood what it meant and geet too embarrassed to tell him and awe his going to London and that too with sam hmm and now geets angry so maans turn to manofy her lol anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

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