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Originally posted by: Evee

neha its making sense....just keewp writng... i am liking it... 😃 i like how kripa offends angad and angad dosent really mind 😆

yeah same here! Looks like Angad has a soft side for Kripa!!😆😉

WOWOWOOWOW I LOVE IT PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE FAST

Hey
It's goin great. Don't worry. I'm pretty sure that everyne loves it. PLzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Cont. fast.
Good Luck.

dun borry neha.. its coming out good.. just keep writing 😃 😃 😃 long stories baad mein.. but continue soooooon!!!!!

Originally posted by: princess1_43

omg neha... wht r u saying ... thatttt was fabbbb... ofcourse it makes sense.... ur fan fic is just starting and taking a gr888 turn... 😆 come on .... cheer up.... 😳 and dont worry its turning out to be just perfect 😊 😊 😊

cant wait for ur next part.lol writing a book on how arrogant angad is ... wont that be fun 😆

🤗 🤗 🤗

yes that would be fun! 😆

Originally posted by: simplyconfused

ok first of all fantabulous part....so kuch kuch hora hai Angad ki dimaag mein!! 😆 😆 and it made perfect sense and it is awsome even though it wasn't going according to plans!! Not a single one of my fan-fictions have turned out according to plan!! 😳 😆 so dont worry about!! and CONTINUE SOON!!!!

lol ya, when I start my fan-fics i think of something then sudddenly i twist it. Like in Pyaar Ka Pal Angad was never going to die. He was going to jump out the window just fine into Kripa's arms and they would have told each other they love each other. Than u guys and Malks put the whole Anagd is dead idea in my brain and i changed the story! 😆

Originally posted by: nottyangel

wow neha 👏👏 i just red both parts u r a fabolous writer 👏 there r no words to describe how good u r 👏 👏your the best 😳 i loved both parts specialy the sencond part 😆 neha u should train ekta ....you always wrote cute love stories about A-K 😳 they're simply terefic 😳 plz cont as soon as u can 👏 😳 im loking forword to read more 😛 love maryam

thank you! And i dont think i need to train Ekta. It's not worth my or her time 😆

Originally posted by: ~*kRiTu*~

dun borry neha.. its coming out good.. just keep writing 😃 😃 😃 long stories baad mein.. but continue soooooon!!!!!

hello missy! Finally ur comments i was waiting! 😉 Well i understand ur problem as well. Thank you!

Neha 😛

Originally posted by: neha9

lol ya, when I start my fan-fics i think of something then sudddenly i twist it. Like in Pyaar Ka Pal Angad was never going to die. He was going to jump out the window just fine into Kripa's arms and they would have told each other they love each other. Than u guys and Malks put the whole Anagd is dead idea in my brain and i changed the story! 😆

hmmm....looks like i should we should keep our mouths shut!!😆😆BUT then again the whole Angad dying gave it an interesting twist!!