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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

awesome mindblowing update👏waiting for next part😃

thank u so much😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
I m really overwhelmed with all these responses
thank u so very much
well I m thinking of giving a long valentine day special part😉😳😳
it may be today late night or tomorrow........
so tell me who wants it😉
Edited by shining_moon - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
we will be waiting eagerly darling..................... HAPPY VALENTINE'S TO YOU TOO..............😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting waiting for special valentine my dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
do pm it's late here
will probably read tomorrow
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Posted: 14 years ago
where a yu my dear still waiting😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
well I m writing a long part
it will take atleast an hour more.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY
chapter-5
Maan felt as if he was dreaming a moment ago...was all that real...can anyone be so beautiful???...she is gorgeous... heavenly...her sparkling beauty cant be defined in proper words...maan was dazzled and speechless...!!!!!
geet went back stage...her heart was throbbing with accelerating pace...not only bcoz of her dazzling and energetic performance but also with the rush of emotions in her heart... she just could not fathom how can a stranger affect her like this... she dont even know his name...but now after seeing him again after their first meeting she felt at ease like her inner restlessness stagnated suddenly...the only thing which she understood was that she was actually longing to see him...like it was her earnest desire...!!!!!!!
same was the case with maan...from the moment he first saw her at the hill he was going through a strange uneasiness which vanished the moment he saw her again on the stage...he was trying hard to suppress this unknown feeling or the irresistable desire for this stranger...
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The result was announced and geet was declared the undisputed winner...she was called upon the stage and thats when maan came to know her name...GEET...the magical song of his life...!!!!!!
As geet neared the stage she saw maan with the trophy...
GEET-So he is the MSK...Maan singh khurana...all the girls were taking about...
her heart was beating erratically now as she was getting closer to him...
Geet is thinking...Why am I nervous...oh come on geet he is not ur husband that u r blushing like a new bride!!!
WHAT???...I m Blushing!!!!!...no no...no ways I m not blushing its just the silly makeup...will never use that Damn rose again...!!!!!
But geet rose donot heat up the cheeks...
Ok fine!!!!...I m blushing but plzzz babaji dont make do anything stupid in front of him...
Maan's hormonal urges were taking a toll on him with every passing second...
MAAN-Wow man...she is looking even more pretty with that blush reddening her cheeks...WAIT...WHAT??...BLUSH!!
She is Blushing!!!!!!
but why is she blushing????...is it bcoz of me...do I have the same effect on her which she has on me???...
maan was really happy n his lips moved in a slight smile of content though hardly recognisable...
both were lost in each other when one of the judges said or interrupted😡😡...
J-Mr. Khurana...Mr. Khurana...
MAAN-hmm
J-Mr. Khurana the trophy...I think geet is waiting for the trophy
MAAN-what...oh yes...ofcourse...
maan hands over the trophy to geet and extends his hand saying...CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!
GEET-thank u...and took his hand for a handshake...the whole hall cheered geet with loud clapping sound...pinky n neha were very happy for geet n drooling over MSK...sameera was buring with jealousy seeing geet with MSK...but the sensation of each other's touch shunned everyone from maaneet's world... they were lost in each other's eyes relishing the beautiful touch which was sending current down their spine...
when the other judge saw that they were again lost n not letting go off each other hand he again interrupted...
J-ahh...Mr. Khurana...Mr. Khurana...a bit louder this time
MAAN-hmm
J-lets go to join the party
MAAN-what...oh yes...lets go
he said leaving geet's hand reluctantly... maaneet were embarrassed at ogling at each other in front of everyone...infact geet turned a deeper shade of red...and left the stage immediately
maan too left with other judges n guests to join the party which was a part of the function...
there was a lavish dinner arranged for the guests and the participants...maan's eyes were constantly searching for geet... he was already missing his pari badly...
he searched the entire hall but geet was no where to be seen...he thought may be she left...but then he saw the girls to whom geet went after getting down the stage...geet was not with them too...now maan was getting impatient n worried...he didn't wanted to talk to any of those girls as all of them were drooling at him...but his concern for geet overpowered his annoyance with those girls and he went to pinky and neha...
MAAN-ahem ahem...excuse me
pinky and neha's mouth fell wide open...they culdn't believe that the great MSK was actually standing infront of them and willing to start a convo...it was a dream come true for them...
MAAN-woh...actually I wanted to ask u that are u geet's frnds
pimky and neha still staring at him without blinking...maan was lossing his patience seeing them openly drooling over him...
he cleared his throat and asked a bit loudly this time...
MAAN-excuse me miss...
NEHA-Mrs. MSK...(in a trance)😆
MAAN-excuse me...he said angrily which frightened both neha n pinky and brought them back to earth...
PINKY-sor...sorry sir...what did u said??
maan calmed down a bit controlling his anger...and asked again.
Are u both geet's frnd??
PINKY-yes
MAAN-actually I needed to talk to her...can u tell me where is she??
PINKY-oh yes...woh geet has gone to change...she is in the green room...
MAAN-thank u
saying this maan left towards the green room...after his departure both girls were like OMG!!!!...the MSK actually talked to them.. they were on cloud nine...then suddenly pinky said...
But neha why was he asking for geet...
NEHA-I dont know
PINKY-whatever...but dont u think geet is taking a long time... it has been quite a while...
maan was near the green room when he found it open and empty.. he instantly felt something is wrong...but then he thought why is he so worried for geet...why the hell he is searching for madly.. what is it that he is so much concerned for geet...his chain of thoughts broke when he heard a scream...!!!!!!!
it was coming from the opposite end of the passage...
he rushed towards the sorce of sound and he was completely shocked and angered at what he saw...!!!!!
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Geet came down the stage and walked towards pinky and neha... she was quite embarrassed at what happened on the stage... she didn't dare tolook back at the stage towards maan fearing she will end up doing something more embarrassing...
here pinky and neha came to geet and hugged her...congratulating
her...
PINKY-hey geetthat was amazing performance yaar...u were awesome congrats...
NEHA-yes geet u truly deserved the award...very well done
GEET-thanks guys...I m glad u liked the performance
PINKY n NEHA-liked... we LOVED it!!!
PINKY-n u r so lucky geet u got a chance to touch MSK...hayyee!
GEET-ok guys...lets eat something I m famished(she quickly said inorder to change the topic)
PINKY-are ye to meri line hai...
neha and geet laughed at that and they moved towards the buffet..
it was a huge hall with every arrangement...there was a bar at the opposite side of the buffet...music was playing continuosly to entertain the guest...
pinky and neha were chatting non-stop about the competition, hall, the lavish party and the food while eating...but geet was still lost ...she hardly touched the food...suddenly she saw three drunkens giving her dirty looks...she was getting uncomfortable standing there...which was making it more difficult for her to concentrate on her food...
PINKY-are geet tu kuch kha kyon nahi rahi hai...
GEET-guys I m really tired...I should go and change...
NEHA-but geet ur food...
GEET-I m not hungary...I'll just chage and comen then we can leave...
saying this geet left to the green room
PINKY- what happened to her...abhi thodi der pehle keh rahi thi she is famished aur abhi keh rahi hai bhook nahi hai...
NEHA-yeah...may be she is very tired
PINKY-yeah...may be...anyways lets finish our food fast I want to eat ice cream too...
NEHA-pinky...
PINKY-what...I m really hungary...
NEHA-when u r not...
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Geet was entering the green room when someone grabbed her from behind closing her mouth with his hand to shut her up... she tried to free herself by hitting the man with her hands when his other two friends came n grabbed her hands n dragged her to the other end of the passage which was a bit dark and aloof...
geet got very scared by all this but she was not ready to give up n tried to put up a fight by wriggling vigorously but to her utter dismay they threw her on the ground and held her on the floor wih her back towards them...tying her hands at the back...one of them standing beside the one tying her hands pushed him saying...I saw her first so I will lay my mark on her first...
as the guy on geet was pushed off she instantly turned and hit the one approaching her by her leg at the place where it would hurt him the most...he fell on the ground with immense pain...the one who was tying her came forward...she tried to hit him the same way but unfortunately he caught her leg and with the helpof his other frnd tied her legs too...
now she was completely tied up and hell scared...the one who was on the floor got extremely angry and slapped her hard...he took off her duppatta while the other two hold her in plac...he ripped off her sleeves which brought tears in geet's eyes...she thought all her hopes,dreams will shatter now... her life was going to end in the most disgraceful manner...she sreamed for help but it was not audible outside due to the loud music...then that guy bend his head down inorder to kiss geet...she closed her eyes helplessly but suddenly she felt the weight from her being lifted up and thats when she opened her eyes and saw her saviour...
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Maan was at his wits end when he saw an all tied up geet lying on the ground held by two ras**ls and one bas**d on top of her... his blood boiled at the sightand he stormed towards them with full rage grabbing the one on top of geet by his collar and punched him hard on his face and kicked him which landed him on the ground...blood oozing out from his mouth...then he bashed up the other two...knocking the daylights out of them...
he grabbed the first one again by his hair this time and smashed his head to the wall...maan completely lost his senses seeing geet'splight and hit them all till the time they fell unconscious...
he was still not satisfied and got hld of the first one dragging him ruthlessly and was on the verge of killing him when geet called him...MAAN!!!!!!
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as soon as maan's face came to her vision she felt protected... that now no one can harm her...but then she saw maan's wild attack on those drunkards...she noticed his eyes which were burning with rage...spitting fire...and then what she saw stunned her ...maan dragged one of those unconscious men ...hitting him mercilessly...she knew if he wont stophe will end up killing him and thats when she called him...MAAN!!
Maan stopped the instant he heard his name from geet's mouth for the first time... as if it had a cooling effect on him...he released the guy and went to geet...
he bend down and untied geet...she was shivering like anything and had tears rolling down her eyes continuosly...seeing geet like this was adding to maan's anger but he composed himself for geet'ssake as she needed him at the time...he raised his hand to her face n wiped the tears from her cheeks...the warmth of maan's touch was what she needed the most at that time so she instantly clinged to him hugging vry tight...maan was taken aback by the sudden hug but then he realised geet must be scared sohe reciprocated and shielded her protectively in his arms...geet felt as if it was the safest place for her...
after a while they broke the hug...it was then she realised she has actually hugged him...she felt a bit uncomfortable due to her torn dress and disoriented state...
maan sensed her discomfort and covered her with her coat...supported her to get up and asked...Are U ok???
she simply nodded...n then he asked her to change in the green room n she went n changed...
when she came out maan asked...
Its not proper for u to go out in the hall like this...let me drop u home...I'll call the driver at the back gate so that no one will be there...
geet first wanted to oppose but seeing the concerned in maan's eyes she thought otherwise...
they reached the back gate and man called his driver...soon the car arrived and both got inside...
geet told her hotel address n maan dropped her there...the whole journey was silent...none spoke...they arrived the hoteln geet went inside after mumbling a thanks...after confirming geet safely reached her room maan also left for his home...
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so here is part-5...a long one as I promised...
plzzz do tell how was it by ur long comments n I really mean long comments...my back is aching now for sitting for 2 long hours typing this...n yes if u want to be pmed then plzzz click the like button on the first page n add me in ur buddy...
pmzforthis update will be done later...
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love u all
Edited by shining_moon - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow Maan saving

Geet that was sso cute love there understanding without words super hilarious update my dear pls cont soon
Happy V Day my dear enjoy
Edited by simi91 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing ff...plzzz add me 2 ur pm list......

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