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Posted: 14 years ago

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yaar i m waiting

update now

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Posted: 14 years ago

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loved the update

geet s so understanding

maan s rlly lucky 2 hav her

hope he doesnt take her for granted

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waiting for update.
can we get an update today. pls muskan

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Are you updating this too now?

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plzz update dis FF dying to know wht happen's nxt

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Yipeeeeeeeeeeeeee I eagarly await 😊

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I loved this new thread and 114 update is so much relief for geet and dadi:-). Waiting for next eagerly ....dear muskan!

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hey how long will it take

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-truly magical-
part 115

Geet - agar uncle himat nahi juta payen tho issme aani ki kya galti hain? Kya aap bhi unki tarah himat nahi juta paa rahen?
Daadi broke down completely & hugged Geet - nahi beta nahi

Geet was happy that she could make some difference. She wanted to meet Maan desperately & speak to him be with him. She wiped her tears & walked into the outhouse. She looked for him. She asked nakul where he was & went to the gym when Nakul said he was there. Maan was really angry at himself & the situation he was surrounded with. She reluctantly walked in ..her heart skipped million beats seeing him hot toned sweaty bare back.

Her mouth went dry she couldn't think of words to express her emotions & over that Maan looking so irresistibly tempting. She kept gaping at him for a while admiring his curves, his muscles flex as he thrust punches in air. Jhali mouh band kar, pata hain tera pati hain lekin koi aise drool karta hain kya? She clutched her duppata & wondered how to control herself. She just wanted to hug him feel him whole of him. She gasped, he immediately turned she got scared with his sudden moment & turned her back & closed her eyes tight.

Maans anger rose seeing her turn her back at him. Oh so she can't even bare my sight now he thought.
She fumbled with her words - main humare...she couldn't say anything
he drew the towel at him & walked to her
she couldn't even think straight with him walking towards her - Daadi se
Maan turned her at once - nahi karni mujhe Daadi se baat
she was tickled with his touch but soon it began to hurt & his words piercing through her heart.
Maan - nahi karni mujhe tumse shaadi
she didn't know wat was he saying. Why is he talking about shaadi at all she thought
Geet - aap shaadi ki baat..before she could complete.
Maan - I don't want to marry u ..samjhi tum

she blinked her eyes innocently - but we are married ??
Maan - nahi rakhna rishta aise insaan se jo mujh pe barosa nahi karta
she felt like lump hitting her heart, making it suffocating & difficult to breath. Humara rishta insab ke beech kanha se aagaya she wondered. Why is he talking like this.. she was confused she looked at him blankly yet again. Like he didn't make sense to her. Barosa??? aab inhe kya huwa she thought. She couldn't think of any reason why he was angry at her. Is he upset about something but wat, then why is he saying all this.

Maan really didn't know why was he angry & wat was he angry at. He wanted to sort out things with her & here he was shouting at her for no reason. Talking all rubbish just because she turned her back & spoke about their marriage, actually making him realize he was at fault in delaying their wedding, Maan Singh Khurana was wrong...which was terminating him.

Rishta nahi rakna ?? why did he say that.. ? Lekin kyun ?? meri galti kya hain?? she just kept thinking why he wants to leave her all of a sudden. Every thing was fine between them. Her mind didn't seem to understand anything her heart already stopped functioning. He shook her couple of time..samjhi tum..

She didn't respond just turned & began to walk away. Rishta nahi rakna ?? why did he say that.. ? Lekin kyun ?? meri galti kya hain?? she just kept thinking .. did he get bored of me, like had enough of me types. Chi chi aise thodi hota hain. He said he loves me right. Kaha tha na usdin. We are married aise thodi koi rishta khatam hota hain, lekin aise kya baat hogayen ki he wants to leave me. Meri galti kya hain, mana ki main ne kabhi kaha nahi lekin main tho unke bina rah hi nahi sakti. How will I live without him. Is it over..

Maan kept calling her ..GEET ..GEET meri baat suno
she couldn't hear, she was lost.. her senses didn't seem to work. Her tears stopped
Her yearning lips and a throbbing heart didn't need ignition, she was burning within she had the urge to yell, go out side running cry out loud... her emotions were twisted, her stomach in knots, she wished there was something to erase her thoughts. She just hoped that it passes, maybe merely a phase

she was ready to be out of this daze right now, just then.. walked down the steps like a dead body when Anni just shook her ..geet Geet..kya huwa tumhe..Geet!!. Maan stood their frozen seeing anni calling out her name. Geet snapped out & hugged anni & cried.
Anni - kya huwa tumhe?
Geet - Maan
she couldn't speak a word more than that
anni got her some water - tum Maan ko janthi ho
Geet just realized wat was happening, Maan was breaking up with her, she couldn't stop her tears hearing his name. Anni looked at her Eyes uttering the words that her life is blinded to tell, a suppressed mind conceals what the spirit knew too well. Smiles on her lips disperse the glower of a heart's desire but a laughter on the lips spread the tears that eyes conspire.
Anni was failed to understand her emotional turmoil - tum Maan ko jaan thi ho she asked again
Geet snapped out of her torturous thought - hain Anni main tumhare bhai ko janti hoon she said... Maan closed his eyes crying his heart out. Anvesha is geets friend anni...oh god she knows..she accepted Anvesha much before than he did. He is been so ridiculous with her. He grabbed his shirt & ran towards her. While Daadi just walked in. he held back his steps getting agitated, fearing wat Daadi has to say now.

He was taken by surprise when he saw Daadi smiling at Anni & hugging her. Anni touched her feet Daadi held her back - humare yanha betiyan pavan nahi chuti
Maans eyes filled so did geets reflecting his emotions.
Anni - Daadi woh....
Daadi - tumhe kuch kahne ki zarorat nahi, Geet ne mujhe tumhare baren main sab bata diya
Maan felt like killing himself. he didn't like the feeling of not knowing how bad she felt, he didn't like looking in her eyes and seeing all her fears, her pain that he filled in there. He just wanted to fall at her feet & cry...I'm such a fool, to have ever hurt you please let me take back those words, I really didn't mean any of them. How could I be so stupid? How could I be so blind? Oh god why is she looking so lost. Why is she not even looking at me. She knows I just lose it & talk rubbish. Please Geet meri taraf dehko.

precap,
Maan losing it!!

-PREV PART 114 NEXT PART 116-

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muskan

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