AR FF: Love is.. [Link to my work+Thread 2: Pg 1] - Page 104

Originally posted by: ahenseven

Hey aanya!! .. Hope your better now!! .. Sorry couldnt comment on the previous part .. Exams I tell you and the worst part they are still not over!! .. Coming to the updates they were just fantabulous .. You just make everything sound sooooo perfect .. It's just so real ..( except maybe for the double booking part ) .. But I am sook glad it happened cause otherwise they would have not kissed .. There's never too much drama and I love that about your ff .. Important part next eh? .. Waiting eagerly for it .. Thanks for the pm's and take care .. Loads of love neha:)

nice part.. it was a long part hope in future we also got such long part..
cake celebration was cute specially both wanted to ate more but dont want to be called bhukkad.. its so funny.. cont. soon..........

Very nice part.
And in the end it was awsm.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

Awesome part..😛

Okay am really late but I just recently read your FF and its amazing ! You have a way with words and emotions and I love the flow of the story.

Originally posted by: Ankita.M

Okay am really late but I just recently read your FF and its amazing ! You have a way with words and emotions and I love the flow of the story.

Their bond and the time spent together is addictive and wants me to read more ! Hope you update soon and please add me to ur PM list

Originally posted by: Dmg8594

Res.

I'll read. like. comment. only after you finish the part and since you're not doing that anytime soon today, I'll just go to bed disappointed and inevitably curious! I hate u for leaving it there. I bet Britanny's evil. I could almost see her horns.

*Edited*

Detailed comment is HERE! Say YAY! 😃

"Rahul looked at her. She was already asleep. He felt bad waking her up after 5 hours of sleep but he had to. And now he knew how to make her wake up. "Ridzy, Armaan aaya hai tujhe pick up karne!"

Riddhima's foggy brain registered one word. Armaan. She bolted upright and said, "What the HELL is he doing here?!"

I loved this! Rahul's got amazing tactics! Haha! 😆

""Aah... the skank." She muttered under her breath."

LMAO! 🤣

"She opened her eyes to see the most amazing chocolate cake. There was a message on it with icing. It read, CONGRATULATIONS! The first paycheck is always a big deal. May you have many more in the future!

-Armaan"

Awww...Armaan is the CUTEST thing ever! I love him! *Sigh*

"Wiping their mouths, they sat down and looked at the cake. A lot of it was still left. Riddhima wanted more. Oh God. Chocolate cakes are my weakness! Especially these gooey ones! I wanna have more... par iske saamne khaaungi toh bhukkad samjhega!

Armaan looked at the cake longingly. Arre yaar... ek cake apne liye bhi mangwana tha....chocolate cakes are seriously amazing.... and this one is mindblowing! I wish I could have some more... par cake uska hai... I can't sound like a bhukkad..."

LMAO! Bhukkad hai dono ke dono! Too funny! 😆 Especially Riddhima...The most 'diet-conscious' girl I've seen! 😛

"Being with her almost every moment gave Riddhima an impeccable view of her life. And as much as she hated it, somewhere she was jealous of Ashley. Her life is so... protected! Hamesha usske paas koi hota hai. She has the perfect life. Bachpan mein perfect parets.... perfect friends...pefect looks...perfect boyfriend. Perfect...just f-ing perfect. She always has someone to lean on. She's never alone, not for a single moment. Her parents love her; she has the perfect to-be-husband who is madly in love with her and she's in love with him. Na koi dard aur na koi insecurities. Aisa kyun? Usse bin maange hi sab kuch mil gaya aur mujhe...I asked for it every damn day of my life but not once did He listen. Whatever. I'm way past that now. Or am I?"

I so understand what she's going through...I've been through this so many times, I've lost count...But I guess it happens to all girls once in their life! If only Riddhima would look around a little closely, she would see! 😕

"Riddhima turned around and as soon as she saw his face, she gave out a peal of laughter again. There was lipstick everywhere on his face and all over his white shirt. She giggled uncontrollably while he stood there scowling."

I wish I was there to do that to him! 😛 Dirty much? 😆

"Mujhe bahal jaana hai!"

Riddhima grinned at him. Armaan was baby-talking? Playing along she said, "Acha? Kahan jaana hai tumhe?"

Aww baby Armaan! Sho cute! 😃

"Mere BEST friends hain. Humaari families bhi best friends hain. But they live in India! Do saal pehle shift ho gaye...I mishh them!"

Riddhima smiled at him. This was a totally new Armaan. And she was afraid she liked him too much."

Aww...Obviously she liked him too much! How daft is she? 😕

"They leaned in closer and their lips met. He kissed her slowoly, gently and she kissed him back powerless to stop. Her hand ruffled his hair while he continued to kiss her with the same ardour.

Riddhima was on a high. This was something she'd never experienced. For as long as she could remember, she'd locked her heart away so that noone could damage it further. But this, this wasn't damage. It was bliss. She didn't know what made her do it. Maybe it was the alcohol that had loosened her. Maybe it was something else. She didn't try to figure it out."

Honestly speaking, I wanted their relationship to be platonic for a while longer...But probably the tour is going to be another high point after this one..Seems inter-related!

For the first time, I didn't want them to kiss, but I loved the way you described the whole feeling...Riddhima has to know she likes him, if she's too daft to understand the whole love bit...But she has to know now!

Anyway, my comment's done finally! Sorry for being so late!!

Continue soon missy! Read your note, and I hate how you're not updating today! Hmph! 😡