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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#381

part 8
Maan didnt get to meet Geet....................oh my hes too much in the flashback and now he thinks that shes dead..................wonder how he will react when he sees her and that too in the present condition................very controlling...................cont soon and thanks for the pm..........................

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579908

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Posted: 14 years ago

#382

interesting FF, plz do include me in your PM list =)

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Shreya

@..shreyaa..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#383

Awesome update
loved it
amazing part
hawh! omg
maan was soo rude and mean in past
but i guess he had realized now wht he lost
cant wait
update soon
Thank u

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#384

I LOVE THIS STORY! QUITE AN INTERESTING PLOT .

LOVE HOW U R JUGGLING THE PAST & PRESENT TRACKS👍🏼

Do continue!!!

Edited by gawdygory - 14 years ago

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SaJan-SaJan

@SaJan-SaJan

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#385

nice update....

cant really imagine maan like dat...

atleast he regrets it at present...

i hope geet wl b able 2 tel suraj d truth...

plz do cont soon..

thnx 4 d pm..

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#386

Hey guys: Thank you for your support in this fan fic...more of Geet's past will be revealed slowly....Enjoy!

Chapter 9

Flashback:
Geet was home looking around to do something...as usual Maan was busy with work...Geet decided to Call Meera and see how she is...she missed her so much
Geet: Hey Meera...what are you doing?

Meera: I am mad at you

Geet: Why? What did I do?

Meera: Why did you decide not go to college?

Geet: woh (thinks about Maan's decision) I think its better...I just got married and I think it is better if I think about my home first

Meera (laughs): Relax Geet...I was just pulling your leg...listen my class is canceled today so how about you and I hang out...I am dying to see you

Geet: umm Meera...I don't know..Maan is not home and...

Meera: Geet come on please...you can call Maan jiju and leave a message...give me his number and I will leave the message if you want

Geet: No (thinks about it) ok I will call Maan right now and leave a message...

Meera: ok..I will pick you up in half hour...be ready

Geet: ok bye..(she hangs up the phone and calls Maan's cell but it was switched off...she calls the receptionist and found out that he is in a meeting..she left a quick message and told her to tell Maan ASAP....Geet got ready..) Nakul (she yells)

Nakul: Yes Ma'am

Geet: I am going out with my friend...if Maan sir calls just tell him that I will be back in a little while..I have also left a message for him at his work

Nakul: Alright Ma'am
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Maan had come home after work early..hoping to surprise Geet...he was very excited since he got a new contract today and wanted to share it with Geet...he entered the house and called for Geet...hearing no response...he looked around the house searching for her...he called for his servant Nakul.....

Nakul: yes sir (Scared)

Maan: Where is Geet Ma'am?

Nakul: Sir she left around 12 in the afternoon....Ma'am had left a message for you at work

Maan: hmm ok....you can leave for the day (Maan called his office and he fired his receptionist for not giving him the message)

Maan went to his home office and tried to concentrate on his work...he looked at the clock it was 2...still Geet wasn't home..he got more and more angry and worried....he threw the file on the floor along with everything that was on his desk...he went to the living room and sat there..waiting patiently..he looks at the clock once again and it was 4...then he heard Geet coming in...he looked up and saw Geet carrying lots of bags in her hand struggling to hold each bag as she walks...he silently observes her..she still didn't see Maan in the living room...she drops the bags on the floor and sits on the floor taking a deep breath...she takes about 2 bags which seemed to be grocery bags and walked to the kitchen with them...Maan got up and looked over the bags that were on the floor...they were shopping bags from the mall...he walked in the kitchen and saw Geet humming to a tune placing the grocery in its proper places...

Maan: Where were you? (Geet dropped the vegetable that were in her hands and looked back...she saw Maan standing by the kitchen entrance)

Geet: Maan Appne toh mujhe dara diya tha...

Maan: Maine pucha tum kaha thi? (He walks toward Geet)

Geet (smiles): Didn't you get my message? I had gone and met with Meera...hum dono shopping karne gaye the

Maan: kitne baje?

Geet (looks at him): umm jab main gayi thi toh 12 baje the

Maan: 12 baje...aur tum ghar aayi 4 baje...itni der tak kaha thi?

Geet: I was bored at home..so I called Meera and she wanted to hang out since we haven't seen each other for a while...I tried to refuse her but she wouldn't take no for an answer..(she turned around and stared to put all the grocery back as she talked)..so we went shopping for a while and since I didn't had my lunch..we ate together and after a while Rohit (Maan's hands turned into a fist) came there because he needed some things from Meera (she puts the grocery away and looks at Maan) and so we spent the whole time talking and catching up..before coming home I remembered to do some grocery shopping as well..that is why I was late...(Maan steps closer to Geet and slaps her on the face...Geet looks at him shocked..tears drop down from her face..he aggresively holds her hair and pulls her head up to face him)

Maan: how dare you go anywhere without me?? (shouts at her...Geet looks at him with fear) You are mine now...whatever you say or do has to go through me now...(holds her hair even tighter...Geet moans in pain) aur aaj ke baad tum Meera aur Rohit ko kabhi bhi nahi milongi..SAMJI TUM!

He lets go of her hair..she falls back on the counter...crying...Maan leaves the kitchen and goes upstairs..she jumps when she hears upstairs door slam shut...she sits on the floor and cries...Maan's words were ringing in her head...she hugs her knees and cries..she thought that Maan's possesiveness will change after marriage but it is becoming worse day by day...she missed her dad... "what did I do wrong babaji?...I only went to hang out with Meera" (crying..after a while she gets and goes to the bathroom...she looks at her face and it was red and kind of swollen from the slap...she silently cries while looking at her face...)
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Geet knocks on Maan's office door..she was scared of his anger...her hands were shaking as she knocked the door...when she didn't hear any response she knocks again....she was about to knock again when the door flung open...Geet stepped back a little...

Geet: woh woh (Unable to say what she wanted to because of his anger)

Maan: woh woh woh kya? (Still angry)

Geet (looks down): dinner ready hai

Maan: hmm main 10 minute main aata hoon (Geet starts to walk away...when Maan pulls her back holding her wrist...she hits his chest...she closes her eyes and looks down...her heart starts beating fast scared that he might slap her again...) Don't take whatever I said to you earlier as a joke...(he holds her wrist even tighter...his voice sounded like a threat..she gets scared and nods her head...) or else I won't be responsible for my anger next time or for what I do...(he aggressively pulls her closer and pins her to the wall...he starts kissing her on her lips...tears slip down her face...he pulls her inside the study room...Geet walks backwards scared...Maan pulls her close and pushes her on the couch...he takes her pallu off...Geet stops him before he goes any further)

Geet: Ma Maan dinner is getting cold...

Maan: I don't care about the dinner....(he bends down and starts kissing her neck while his hands travels everywhere forcefully...Geet couldn't handle his aggressiveness and she knew that she couldn't stop him...)

End Flashback!
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Maan went to Suraj's office to discuss the designs that he and his team came up with...he was back to his usual stern self...

Suraj: Good morning Mr. Khurana...Sorry about last night..my fiance wasn't feeling too well so she decided to leave

Maan (ignores him): Shall we get down to business?

Suraj: Sure...I have to get the designed approved by my fiance...I am sure you will be able to meet her today when she comes in..

Maan: hmm ok...(spreads the blueprints on the table) So this is what my design team came up with...as you can see that (he stopped when he heard Suraj phone ring)

Suraj: sorry about that...(he takes the phone in front of Maan) Mahi...what happend? Are you coming in today? (Maan tries to pay attention to the blue print) you are sick? Ok I will bring something for you on the way...take care and let me know if you need anything..bye (hangs up the phone)

Maan: So (continues on) everything is accommodated and will be safe for all the employees....

Suraj: hmmm I like the work so far Mr. Khurana...

Maan: Alright...

Suraj: Well then let's go out for lunch my treat

Maan: umm

Suraj: Don't say no..its the least I can do for you coming this far

Maan: umm ok sure...

Precap: Present: Suraj: Mr. Khurana I just have to drop this inside to Mahi...you could even meet her if you like....
Maan: No I will wait in the car

Will Maan see Geet when Suraj goes to meet her?

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#387

amazing part.....really liked it....bt i hate maan for slapping geet........what did he think of himself.................n now he is regretting his doings.....................continue soon

ohhhhhh i just realised am first..😆....i think for the first time here.......

Edited by zahra15 - 14 years ago

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#388

Luvly update
Grrr h8 Maan 4 slapping geet---Maans possesiveness is going over the top
He can't expect her 2 dy everyfin wiv him---she has her own life aswell
Wonda wats going 2 happen once Maaneet agen--is he still da same aggressive person or is he changed?
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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cyum321

@cyum321

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#389

Awesome

OMG maan sai toh darr lag raha hai.............😭

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manisha shibloll

@doosheeka

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#390

NICE UPDATE........................CAN WE EXPECT ANOTHER SOON ENOUGH.................I JUST WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS WHEN GEET WILL MEET MAAN FINALLY........................

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