Mayur FF..[Kabhi Hum Bhi Khoobsurat The]last pt123 - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

it was superb.........nam se hi connection jur gayi do no mein........eagerly waiting for next part..........cont soon

Ridi....thank u so much for liking it🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: surbhij1

gr8 maria..its awesum....

@surbhi...Thank u so much for liking it....🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: annie07

Maria..............i finally read the story..............and its so cute............i love the way u write..................

i hope Mayank be the air of love and life for her..................who sets her free from all probs.............
But i m scared, coz of title and all............ umm, Adhiraj, kya karega............plz nothing bad wid Nupur...............

@Annie....🤗
Thank u so much for ur lovely comment....😛
Means a lot to me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

part 3 ws nyc maria... luvd it!!!

i'm so excited 4 MN meeting...
continue soon!
luv ya

Pariiii🤗
Tank u so much for ur lovely comment.....😛
means a lot to me......
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
awesome update maria 🤗 ........ do continue soon .......... waiting for MN to meet 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: swati05

awesome update maria 🤗 ........ do continue soon .......... waiting for MN to meet 😳

swati🤗
Thank u so much yaar....😛
i ll update very soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
hey maria!
i knw m late!
but i liked d first 2 parts!!
thnx for d pm!!😳
wud like to read ahead😃
waitin fr mayuz entry!
cont soon n keep omin me😃😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma

hey maria!

i knw m late!
but i liked d first 2 parts!!
thnx for d pm!!😳
wud like to read ahead😃
waitin fr mayuz entry!
cont soon n keep omin me😃😆

@Nikita
Thank u so much for liking it.......🤗
ur comments means a lot to me.....i ll surely pm u😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank u so much for ur precious comments...means a lot to me...😃🤗🤗

plzzz Bear my mistakes😳

Part 4

Today pooja was absent she was feeling scared becaz of Adhiraj

when lecture finished...she turend to go back to home when someone caught her wrist....she looked up and found adhiraj was stading very close to her...

Nupur...

Hamara haath choriye...she said with shaking voice

Adhiraj

...Nupur main bohat dino se tum se kuch kehna chahta hoon...he took step towards her...

Nupur...

Hum ne kaha hamara haath choriye...she repeated her sentence...but Adhiraj did not gave any attention to her words...

Adhiraj

...chor don ka pehle meri bat suno

Nupur...

hamain ap ki koi baat nahi sun ni hamain der ho rahi hai...hum ne ghar jana hai...she was trying to free her hand

...he pulled her towards him...now Nupur could feel his breath on her face

she feel disgusting....she tried to free herself but Adhiraj grip was too strong...she was helplesss...

Adhiraj

.Tum meri baat sune bina kahin nahi ja sakti...He said furiously

She was scared

he pulled her more close....

Nupur

tum mujhe boat acchi lagti ho...tumhare annkhain kitni khoobsurat hain

jab tum muskurati ho toh tumhare yeah pink lips aur bhi khoobsurat lagte hain...he traced his finger on her lips...

she

was too scared ...she was trying to free herself but no use...

hamain chor dain ...hamain ghar jana hai....tears were flowing on her cheeks...she requested him

Adi

passionately gazed made her feel disgusting.....she lowered her eyes

he tried to kissed her on her lips....she pushed him with full forced and freed herself.....

she slaped him hard on his cheeks....

Tumhari himmat kaise hue hamare pas bhi ane ki....agar hum tumhari her galti ko ignore ker rahe the toh is ka matlab yeah nahi ke hum kamzoor hain...tum jo chaho hamare saath ker sakte ho...

she said with high voice...two boys were come there ..as they heared Nupur voice

kya hua yaha?They asked

Adhiraj

turned her face towards them.. ....kuch nahi hua tum jao yahan se....he said with furiously

Nupur

took the advantage of the situation and hurriedly left the place...she was not in her sences....today incident was her made feel insecure....she was crying the whole ......

Onthe other hand Adhiraj

when Adhiraj again turned his face toward her....she was not there...

yeah Nupur kahan gaye.....

Nupur Bushan tum ne abhi tak mera pyaar dekha hai...meri nafrat toh tum ne dekhi nahi hai...is thapar ka badla toh tumhain dena hi ho ga...

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Someone knocked the door...Mayank who was busy with Magazine

he called her...Gunjan darvaze pe koi aya hai

Gunjan...

bhaiya ap hi darvaza pe dekh lain na kaun hai...main coffee bana rahi hoon....

Mayank

...theek hai...he put the magazine on the table and went to open the door....

when he opened the door....

someone hugged him....he was too shocked to understand who was she...and why she hugged him..Nupur who was scred

felt content in his arms...she tighten her grip...she was too scared even she did not realized whom she hugged...

he noticed...she was scared and trembling

first Mayank shocked but then he hugged her back...she was so close to him...he feel bless...both were lost in the moment..

Mayank...

ap theek toh hain...

Nupur

...looked up and looked at him...

Mayank POV

when she looked at me...i memerised by her beauty....she was so beautiful and innocent...her silky black long hair were flwing on her face made her more beautiful...she was angel...her big brown beautiful eyes.....she was Epitom of beauty...i was lost in her

Nupur POV

when i looked up...i saw concern in two eyes...i felt content in his arms...he was looking at me with concern.....with something more...but what?i dont understand

Nupur pulled herself back...Mayank loosen his grip from her west.....

They feel awkward....what happened sometime before they do not understand.......

Mayank

....ap khabrai hue lag rahi hain....kya baat hai....he asked hesitently

Nupur...

who feel embrass...looked at him...she saw geniune concern in his eyes ...she wanted to tell him her pain..but not

Nupur

...woh...hum...wo....

Mayank

...rehne dejiye agar ap nahi batana chahti toh met bataye....he said with smile...he noticed her hesitation..He taught

Mujhe aisa sawal nahi pochne chiye tha...shayed woh nahi batana chahti...main un ke liye ajnabee hi toh hoon...per un ko pereshan dekh ker mujhe kyun bura lag raha hai...

Gunjan

voice came back them in their sences....

bhaiya kaun hai darvaze pe

Nupur

was looking here and there but not in his eyes.....

Nupur...

bhabi hum aye hai...she replied with nervsenous

Gunjan came out of kitchen......

Gunjan...yeah lo bhaiya ap ki garma garam coffee....Mayank who was lost in Nupur...came back to his sences...

Mayank

...kya kaha gunjan

Gunjan

replied with confusion....hum ne kaha apni coffee le lain...ap kahan khoye hain

she said with teasing tone....

She noticed Nupur was also lost in her toughts.....

Gunjan

tought...in dono ko ho kya gaya hai...kahan khoye hain...aur itna ajeeb behave kyun ker rahe hain

Nupur....

tu theek toh hai...Gunjan askeed

Nupur...

ji bhabi hum theek hain...she replied controlling her emotions

Gunjan

...phir itna khoye khoye kyun hai...

Nupur

steal glancing at Mayank...who was already looking her

Nupur

,,nahi bhabi aisi toh koi baat nahi...

Gunjan

...bhaiya in se milo yeah hai meri ladli nand Nupur...she gave her side hugged

aur Nupur ye hain mere pyaare bhaiya Mayank

Mayank

...hiii....he looked in her eyes

Nupur...

hiii....she said in low voice

Mayank

...Gunjan main ab chalta hoon mujhe kuch kam hai...phir aon ga....

Gunjan

...per koffee toh pee lain...

Mayank

...Gunjan mujhe ab jana ho ga...kuch zaroori kaam hai....main phir aaon ga...he said

waise Nupur Bushan...ap se mil ker bohat accha laga....ap se yeah pehli mulaqat hum kabhi nahi bholain ge...he looked at her and said

Nupur

who was standing there silently...looked at him. he was smiling

she

noticed her dimples...he was looking cute when he smiled..

she

blushed hard...she knew..he was teasing her about their hug

she

lowered her eyes...her cheeks were turned red.....

Gunjan

who was standing there..looked at them..noticed Nupur blushed....ye Nupur kyun itna sharma rahi hai...aur Mayank bhaiya in hon ne toh kabhi kisi larki se baat tak nahi ki....aj Nupur se kaise Muskura ke baat ker rahe hain....hmmm Kuch toh hua hai...She tought

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Kali dil ki acchanak khil gaye hai

Koi khoye hue shay mil gaye hai

Ye kis andaz se dekha hai tu ne

Zameen paon talay se hil gaye hai

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Here is Next update......i tried to write more better...i hope u all liked it...plzzzzz do comments and press like button...if u liked it....ur comments and apreciation means a lot to me...

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Posted: 14 years ago
it was awesome
i hate adhiraj......stupid😡
aww......mayur first meeting😍
i was also lost in my mayur dream land.....😳
just too nice yaar
continue soon
and thax a lot for the pm

love
tasfia
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