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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Dear Joseph I am shocked😲..UR words at the end of Ur update--DONT THROW CHAPPALS AT U😲..Why will We throw Chappals At U Dear?πŸ˜• Because U donot deserve Chappals .But truthfully and really U deserve Applause πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘And A Bouquet Of Flowers 4 writing such A Rocking and totally Mindblowing update......I cannot express how amazing and superb Ur update was and always is..........The story line, presentation style , scenes and Dialogues Everything Was Just ExcellentπŸ‘πŸΌ......Completely MAGNIFICIENT...So 3 cheers 4 U πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ and lotsss of Applause 4 U joseph for such a Fantastic Story and updatesπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘.......................................Stupendous UpdateπŸ‘πŸΌ.....Loved reading and imagining completelyπŸ˜‰πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š.........................

Every n each scene was AwesomeπŸ‘πŸΌ.................Sam- DiaMaa conversation was good N it showed that DiaMaa Thinks of Samrat as a Son n really loves him N she just wants Samrat 2 be happy in life N Sam also cares deeply 4 DiaMaa and loves her n respects her a lott and Samrats thoughts were also well written...Samrats thoughts abt loosing everything and every kind of happiness everytime MAde me emotional and I had tears in my eyes.😭😭....His family had hurt him so deeply😭.....But this samrats scenes proved one thing that Samrat is a Nice n Genuine Person by Heart.he is not at all cruel and Hardhearted and Selfish..But By heart Samrat is a Lovely and Senstive person.....He Shows 2 everyone he is cruel and hard-hearted because he doesnot want 2 get hurt....as people have hurt him badly when he was a child so Samrat acts this way just 2 protect himself ....Infact Samrat needs lotss of love ..he needs a person who will love him totally and completely with whole heart .he needs true love n lover as true love will heal all his wounds which have been given 2 him by his family....and I think when Samrat gets true love then he will shed this cruel image which he has protected himself with and this will heal his damaged heart and then real Sweet, caring n loving Samrat will return.........I feel his true love will be Gunjan😊😊...........As Richa is not Samrats love and Samrat also doesnt love her at all as When we love someone we donot have 2 search 4 that persons qualities as When we love someone we automatically love everything about Him/her .......

I even loved Nanda family scenes..they were really beautifully written..Gunjan childhood was really painfull😭.....Her relatives were really cruel...😑.they couldnot even take responsibilty and give love 2 a sweet little girl and were sending her 2 an orphanage😲....But U know in real life also sometimes When relatives turn their back on their own family members at the time of need Then Sometimes Friends r the one who help us and offer their unconditional support......As in the case of Gunjan When her relatives should have helped n given her love they turned their back on her and Nandas gave her the love and support she needed....😊............I liked Rahul Mom n Dad conversation t hey love gunjan a lottt.....and r very protective of her ....Loved the cute Nok-jhok n convo between Rahul n his Dad n Gunjan..........Rahul knows Gunjan so wellπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†When She came into his room he knew She came 2 butter him up so that she doesnt have 2 go 2 a party πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†................Oh! Gunjan is so sweetttttttttt😊😊......Loved rahul n gunjans connversation........πŸ‘πŸΌ...........And Rahuls reasons 4 getting his friends car 4 party because he is Responsible mumbai citizen and the whole conversation made me smile n grin πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰.....................................Rahul is really a sweet guy 😊 and he lovess Gunjan a lotttttttt and cares 4 her also But his thoughts uptill the time when he is thinking that he has 2 tell Gunjan his feelings r fine But when he started thinking that its time 2 fulfill promises this made me confused
πŸ˜•πŸ˜•What promises?? has Gunjan really promised something 2 rahul πŸ˜•I donot think so I think whatever happened in the past and promises part I feel rahul May be misunderstood Gunjan............ Why is Rahul so sure that When he will tell his feelings 2 gunjan she will immediately accept his proposal Why is he over-confident????πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
As Gunjan doesnot love Rahul atall..she respects him N loves him just like a friend...............

As 4 the ring That ring is indeed special because its made 4 a special girl ie Gunjan😊.........And I think when the time is right then Samrat will get back his lost ring ...........and I wish woh ring Gunjan he wear karey and Samrat he usko phenayeπŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š................................

Joseph once again Totally Outstanding and Fantabulous Update ......Loved reading and imagining a lottttttttttttt😊😍.....................Just Fantabulous and Awesome workπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...............Good workπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ.......................Now waiting 4 Sajan 1st meeting ..and I am sure Sajan 1st meeting will be rocking and Kuch toh gadbad hogi 1st meeting mein I am sure about that alsoπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...........RIGHT JosephπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰..................AND One thing more I THINK U LOVE ICECREAMS N PANI PURI A LOtttttttttttt..........Specially BUTTERSCOTCH ice cream I feel is ur favourite AM I RIGHT JOSEPH?πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š..............I love Panipuri n icecreams also.......😊...My mouth is just watering thinking about Panipuri, tikki,dhokala, samosa and may things + Icecreamssssssssssssssssssssssss................πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†.......................Mujhko Bhi Khanni hai Plsssssssssssssssssssssssssss
πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†....................................

Fabulous update πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘.........Thanks 4 pm πŸ€— and waiting for next update from my 1 of the favourite writer Joseph...U r a very very good writer dear......Love Ur FF a lotttttπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰...try 2 update before 9th plsssssssssssss

Love Gunjan😊😊......................................

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Posted: 14 years ago
well well well what to say Joseph it was awesome update loved it to the core n as swati said its difficult about RaJan ....can't think anything but SaJan .........waiting despretly for SaJan's frst meet ..n mujhay kuch kuch story samajh arahi hai .....but really wanna see kay may sahi think kr rahi hoon πŸ˜‰....U r a very good writer Joseph n u r writing very well .......hats off to u man for writing such a lovely story ......i really wanted to see samrat in a serious char n my wish got fulfilled ...thanks for the pm dear n plss plss plss cont soon ......
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SHAMSHIR-MJHT

Fantastic Update Bro.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ I loved your story telling system....through outstanding dialoguesπŸ‘ U described very beautifully the Ring search scene n Samrat pain. RD n RM convo was superb.Very well presentation of GUNJAN's condition after her parents death , through their convo.πŸ‘πŸ‘ It was very touchy n emotional convo.😭. as usual all RaJan convo n scene was SUPERB.πŸ‘πŸ‘ I loved RAHUL's thought about Accidents thingsπŸ˜³πŸ˜†.Really this is my 1 of the most Favourite FF. Totally rocking Part. Eagerly waiting for Next Part...Pls. Update soon.

-S O H A M.



Thanks Bro for your precious feed-back.😳 Its very-very big thing for me.I never expect these types of lovely comments for my FF😲.I am so touched.Thanks for liking all scenes and dialogues. I work really hard on justify n proper length to all characters. RAHUL n SAMRAT is equal character of this story so,my special attention on their lines.I'll post next part very soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago


Thanks Radhika for your precious comment here.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

Hey Dear Joseph I am shocked😲..UR words at the end of Ur update--DONT THROW CHAPPALS AT U😲..Why will We throw Chappals At U Dear?πŸ˜• Because U donot deserve Chappals .But truthfully and really U deserve Applause πŸ‘And A Bouquet Of Flowers 4 writing such A Rocking and totally Mindblowing update......I cannot express how amazing and superb Ur update was and always is..........The story line, presentation style , scenes and Dialogues Everything Was Just ExcellentπŸ‘πŸΌ......Completely MAGNIFICIENT...So 3 cheers 4 U πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ and lotsss of Applause 4 U joseph for such a Fantastic Story and updatesπŸ‘.......................................Stupendous UpdateπŸ‘πŸΌ.....Loved reading and imagining completelyπŸ˜‰πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š.........................

Every n each scene was AwesomeπŸ‘πŸΌ.................Sam- DiaMaa conversation was good N it showed that DiaMaa Thinks of Samrat as a Son n really loves him N she just wants Samrat 2 be happy in life N Sam also cares deeply 4 DiaMaa and loves her n respects her a lott and Samrats thoughts were also well written...Samrats thoughts abt loosing everything and every kind of happiness everytime MAde me emotional and I had tears in my eyes.😭😭....His family had hurt him so deeply😭.....But this samrats scenes proved one thing that Samrat is a Nice n Genuine Person by Heart.he is not at all cruel and Hardhearted and Selfish..But By heart Samrat is a Lovely and Senstive person.....He Shows 2 everyone he is cruel and hard-hearted because he doesnot want 2 get hurt....as people have hurt him badly when he was a child so Samrat acts this way just 2 protect himself ....Infact Samrat needs lotss of love ..he needs a person who will love him totally and completely with whole heart .he needs true love n lover as true love will heal all his wounds which have been given 2 him by his family....and I think when Samrat gets true love then he will shed this cruel image which he has protected himself with and this will heal his damaged heart and then real Sweet, caring n loving Samrat will return.........I feel his true love will be Gunjan😊😊...........As Richa is not Samrats love and Samrat also doesnt love her at all as When we love someone we donot have 2 search 4 that persons qualities as When we love someone we automatically love everything about Him/her .......

I even loved Nanda family scenes..they were really beautifully written..Gunjan childhood was really painfull😭.....Her relatives were really cruel...😑.they couldnot even take responsibilty and give love 2 a sweet little girl and were sending her 2 an orphanage😲....But U know in real life also sometimes When relatives turn their back on their own family members at the time of need Then Sometimes Friends r the one who help us and offer their unconditional support......As in the case of Gunjan When her relatives should have helped n given her love they turned their back on her and Nandas gave her the love and support she needed....😊............I liked Rahul Mom n Dad conversation t hey love gunjan a lottt.....and r very protective of her ....Loved the cute Nok-jhok n convo between Rahul n his Dad n Gunjan..........Rahul knows Gunjan so wellπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†When She came into his room he knew She came 2 butter him up so that she doesnt have 2 go 2 a party πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†................Oh! Gunjan is so sweetttttttttt😊😊......Loved rahul n gunjans connversation........πŸ‘πŸΌ...........And Rahuls reasons 4 getting his friends car 4 party because he is Responsible mumbai citizen and the whole conversation made me smile n grin πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰.....................................Rahul is really a sweet guy 😊 and he lovess Gunjan a lotttttttt and cares 4 her also But his thoughts uptill the time when he is thinking that he has 2 tell Gunjan his feelings r fine But when he started thinking that its time 2 fulfill promises this made me confused
πŸ˜•πŸ˜•What promises?? has Gunjan really promised something 2 rahul πŸ˜•I donot think so I think whatever happened in the past and promises part I feel rahul May be misunderstood Gunjan............ Why is Rahul so sure that When he will tell his feelings 2 gunjan she will immediately accept his proposal Why is he over-confident????πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
As Gunjan doesnot love Rahul atall..she respects him N loves him just like a friend...............

As 4 the ring That ring is indeed special because its made 4 a special girl ie Gunjan😊.........And I think when the time is right then Samrat will get back his lost ring ...........and I wish woh ring Gunjan he wear karey and Samrat he usko phenayeπŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š................................

Joseph once again Totally Outstanding and Fantabulous Update ......Loved reading and imagining a lottttttttttttt😊😍.....................Just Fantabulous and Awesome workπŸ‘...............Good workπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ.......................Now waiting 4 Sajan 1st meeting ..and I am sure Sajan 1st meeting will be rocking and Kuch toh gadbad hogi 1st meeting mein I am sure about that alsoπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...........RIGHT JosephπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰..................AND One thing more I THINK U LOVE ICECREAMS N PANI PURI A LOtttttttttttt..........Specially BUTTERSCOTCH ice cream I feel is ur favourite AM I RIGHT JOSEPH?😊..............I love Panipuri n icecreams also.......😊...My mouth is just watering thinking about Panipuri, tikki,dhokala, samosa and may things + Icecreamssssssssssssssssssssssss................πŸ˜†.......................Mujhko Bhi Khanni hai Plsssssssssssssssssssssssssss
πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†....................................

Fabulous update πŸ‘.........Thanks 4 pm πŸ€— and waiting for next update from my 1 of the favourite writer Joseph...U r a very very good writer dear......Love Ur FF a lotttttπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰...try 2 update before 9th plsssssssssssss

Love Gunjan😊😊......................................



OMG !😲 This Fabulous long Reply for my FF😲 ? Thanks a ton Gunjan for this feed-back😳Thank you so much for giving so much time for right this.😳 I always wait for your feed-back, I can't forget you are the First person who was submit your Reply after my CS. Actually,I deserve Chappals because,SaJan 1st meet scene is not here.😳 I broke my promise naa.😳

'Dai Maa' is very important part of Samrat life (n my story too).You are right Samrat doesn't love Richa. I think,'Quality Search" lines shows it properly. Thanks a lot for appreciation Nanda's Family scene. I am trying to show, they are happy family n no need of any outsider for them. I know you are very curious for Gunjan promise to Rahul things. This is part of 2-FB scene of RaJan, wait very soon I'll disclose both scenes 1 by 1.

And,Yes you are right Paani-Puri n Butter Scotch ice-cream is my favourite...😳 no actually favourite of our whole Gang.πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³ Posting Before,9th its not possible,Sorry!😳 and

πŸ₯³ Happy WOMEN 's Day.😊πŸ₯³
πŸ˜‰

Edited by Joseph_A - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SwaNia_1

well well well what to say Joseph it was awesome update loved it to the core n as swati said its difficult about RaJan ....can't think anything but SaJan .........waiting despretly for SaJan's frst meet ..n mujhay kuch kuch story samajh arahi hai .....but really wanna see kay may sahi think kr rahi hoon πŸ˜‰....U r a very good writer Joseph n u r writing very well .......hats off to u man for writing such a lovely story ......i really wanted to see samrat in a serious char n my wish got fulfilled ...thanks for the pm dear n plss plss plss cont soon ......



Thanks Sonia,for your precious comment here.😳 Ok,I guess..what are you thinking.... SaJan meet.....after some time , fall in love...Rahul try to create problems between them... but,true love win...!!😊 am I right?? But,Sorry this is not my storyπŸ˜•πŸ˜³. Actually,now this is start of story.... (I hate my slow speed😑) You will see....A unexpected forthcoming twist , will be turn whole story line. and Frankly speaking,Its very difficult for me to decide who is perfect for Gunjan after that incident.😭Actually,I am still thinkingπŸ˜• Thanks again for your feed back. πŸ₯³Happy Women's Day.πŸ₯³
Edited by Joseph_A - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey joseph
yar hats of to you
i have to say i love this ff and love the way you write
although i wanted sajan to meet after reading the update
i completly loved it and didnt mind at all that the sajan meeting got delayed
do continue soon
waiting for next part
love
tanzeel
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Joseph_A



Thanks Nivriti for your long sweet Comment. Thanks to appreciating CS n Story Idea😳 Actually,I selected only SAMRAT's look from MJHT-2. here,He is more rude n arrogant. Gunjan is more sweet n soft spoken personality and main thing her innocence is main attraction of her character.

And,One thing.....please don't forget...here the Characters of Samrat n Rahul is totally in 'Grey" shade....So,here many things is unexpectedπŸ˜•
This is "Passionate Love Story" but,I am trying to maintain a purity of love here.Thanks again for liking this Concept and I love to read Long Comments 😳so,don't say sorry for that.

Hey Joseph...
I know about the "grey" thing of the males..
I really wanted to see Sajan meet soon..
But it is alright.. I can understand!!
And you are welcome..
Next time you update I will again write a long commentπŸ˜‰
I really appreciate your efforts and they are just awesomeπŸ‘
Keep on updating fast..
I am eager about the interesting PRECAP of yours!!πŸ˜†
And I really hope Samrat changes soon.. I want the naughty and romantic Samrat Back
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey joseph it was again wonderful update seriously loved it kudos to u for this wonderful FF πŸ‘ i m loving story's progress as we know this is sajan's FF so it would be wonderful to know how will this two opposite ppl will find their soul ,abt rahul as this is very positive char i like him gosh can't wait for sajans' first meet and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
joseph yaar........
update soooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn..........
i cant wait....................................................................
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooooooooooooooooooon...........
w8ing 4 SaJan meeeeeeeeeeeeeeetttttttttttttttttttttttttt..............πŸ₯³

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