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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sreelu.januable

hi bhai.............😊

very xcellent parts................👏
plz cont soon............😉
luv u bhai❤️..........🤗



Thanks sis for your lovely Comment😊 But,I am waiting 4 your Reply😉 Just joking.😆 Your single words enough for me.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nishi_sajan

hey!

I am sorry for not commenting! My exams are going on:(
Awesome Parts!
You are doing a Fab job!
Love the updates!
Thanks for the pm!



Please,Don't feel Sorry 😊 I know, about Exams pressure Actually,Comments n press LIKE tab is very-very big feed-back for me because,I never expect this things from any one.😳 Thanks Nishi for your appreciation.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsurabhi94

all the updates were jst awesome mind blowing

do continue soon



Thanks Surabhi for your sweet reply again.It really means a lot to me.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Joseph_A



Thanks Anjali for your encouragement.Any way i just completed 2 parts of Next Update.I will try to post it tomorrow.

You are welcome...Can't wait to read it..Plzzzzzz update soon.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was awesome..................
just luvd it really...............
hope that sajan meet soon............
and i really like samrat's character ......................u have portrayed it really well..............................
and it will be amazing hw gunjan and samrat will fall in love as they r totally opposite...........................
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Posted: 14 years ago
..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]


Part-8
[A]



SAMRAT VILLA
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Samrat enters in his room.He was in deep thought...he put his purchased stuffs on shelf
..((Finally,shopping complete ho gayi...Thank God! RICHA ko uski dress mil gayi..warna pata nahin aur kitni der hoti...Uff! Kitni choosy hai woh.!..but,she maintains her class...she is beautiful too...aur..aur kya...? why?..aakhir kyun main uski qualities search kar raha hoon....? Hum marriage kar rahe hain ...saath mein rahenge toh ek dusre ko jaan hi lenge...abhi hum ek dusre ko jaante hi kitna hain? But....I don't know...sabhi apni marriage ko lekar itne excited kyun rahte hain...? meri bhi toh aaj engagement hai par main.....main koi excitement kyun feel nahin kar raha...? Mujhe toh sab kuchh normal lag raha hai...thodi der mein evening...phir night ki party mein hamari Engagement...!! Engagement..? wait... maine,Dai Maa ko toh bataya hi nahin... unhen achha lagega...woh bhi toh yehi chahti hain...))
and he called to Dai Maa....after some times she enters in his room...and said softly..."Arre SAMRAT ! tum abhi iss waqt yahaan...? Ye toh tumhaare Office mein hone ka time hai...? Tabiyat toh thik hai...? Kab aaye office se ?" she asked all questions frequently...without any break...
S : "Dai Maa ! Aap kitna khyal rakhti hai mera...(He smiled) Don't worry! I am fine..aapko 1 good news deni thi...
DM : Good News ? kaisi Good News ?
S : Woh yeh ki....Today evening Party mein meri Engagement hai..RICHA ke saath,aap bhi toh yehi chahti thin naa...?
DM : Main sirf tumhen khush dekhna chahti hoon Samrat....agar RICHA mein tumhaari...khushi hai toh haan...main bhi iss engagement se khush hoon...agar tum apni new life ki beginning Nafrat ki jagah Pyar se karna...
S : (he cut her) Not again...Dai maa...Please! abhi nahin mujhe koi pyar nahin hua...Hum marriage karne waale hain aur aaj hamari engagement hai..that's it.OK..! Main aapko woh Ring dikhata hoon...jo maine RICHA ke liye li hai...wait..
and he moved to shelf...and opened it....but...? ((Oh Kahaan gayi..?abhi toh yahin rakhi thi...?Suit ke packet ke saath hi toh rakha tha...agar suit yahin hai toh usse bhi yahin hona chahiye...))
DM : Kya hua...? Kya dhondh rahe ho..? Ring nahin mil rahi kya?
S : Dai Maa...abhi toh yehin rakhi thi...Pata nahin...woh packet hi nahin mil raha...(He was searching continuously)
DM : Achhi tarah se yaad hai naa...?tumne kahin aur toh nahin rakh diya..?
S : Nahin Dai Maa...Mujhe achhi tarah yaad hai...main abhi aaya...aur mere haath mein jo bhi purchased stuffs the woh maine issi cupboard mein rakh diye the..
DM : Oh ! Iska matlab...woh packet tumne kahin mis-place kar diya...shayad kisi shop mein..?
S : Oh..! But,how its possible...? mujhe achhi tarah yaad hai...Mall se nikalte waqt woh packet mere paas tha...pata nahin kahaan rakh diya...? he said with tensed tone
DM : Koi baat nahin...abhi kaafi time hai...tum waisi hi koi dusri Ring le lo....
S : Its not possible Dai Maa...woh Exclusive Collection ka part tha..kaafi mushkil se milli thi...waisa koi bhi dusra piece nahin tha wahaan...Ab toh koi aur hi Ring dekhni padegi.
DM : Ok...phir main kisi Jawellars se keh deti hoon...woh abhi koi achhi si expensive Ring bhej dega...
S : Yaa...! I think,yeh right hai...ab Itna time nahin hai ki, main again Ring select karne jaaoon...waise bhi kaafi der ho gayi hai..
DM : Ok...Tum tension mat lo..main jaati hoon aur Shop mein phone kar Ring manga leti hoon...tum aaram karo..kaafi thak gaye hoge....
S : Thanks Dai Maa...(He smiled softly)
Dai maa left from his room...SAMRAT was in his deep thought....((Aisa kya tha uss Ring mein...? 1 Ring hi toh thi.... phir..?...phir? mujhe itna bura kyun lag raha hai...? kyun main kyun usse bhool nahin pa raha...? Kya maine galat kiya tha...? aakhir woh Ring kisi aur ne pasand ki thi....uske bhi kuchh emotions honge uss Ring ke saath...aur maine..? Maine usse forcely paa toh liya..par paa kar kho bhi diya...Shayad woh Ring meri kismat mein thi hi nahin....But,SAMRAT..its not new thing for you...tujhe toh ab tak aadat ho jaani chahiye....Tu kitna bhi chahe...khushiyaan tere paas nahin reh sakti,woh teri zindagi mein aane se pahle hi...teri zindagi se jaane ka raasta dhoondh leti hain...aur tu akela reh jaata hai...bilkul tanha....hamesha ki tarah....)) He was sad..He was lost in his child hood memories...suddenly,he felt..tears were streaming from his eyes....he wiped his tears fastly....

(( No...never...No..Samrat..You are strong...aisi koi feelings nahin jo tujhe weak bana de...tune khud se promise kiya tha Mom ki death ke baad ki, tu kabhi nahin royega...kabhi inn aansoon ko apni aankhon mein nahin aane dega...Tu strong banega...aur kabhi kisi ko apni life par rule nahin karne dega...tu khud se kiya promise nahin tod sakta...Tujhe sirf apne 'Goal' par focus karna hai..sirf apne dream ko pura karna hai...aur koi bhi tujhe iss se rok nahin sakta....koi emotion...koi feelings nahin....woh sirf 1 ring thi...1 ordinery Ring....))
But..,Was It really a Ordinary Ring ??
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[B]
NANDA HOUSE :

Sharda (Rahul's Mom) opened the door after hearing 'Door Bell' ring...and saw...there was 'Mr. Nanda'(Rahul's Dad)...
RD : Sharda jii...aap bhi naa...! Door open karne mein itni der...?
RM : Aa hi toh rahi thi..aap bhi thodi der wait nahin kar sakte kya? (said with fake anger)
RD : (said after sitting on sofa) Aapse toh kuchh kehna hi mushkil hai...waise, meri princess kahaan hai...woh dikh nahi rahi...
RM : woh ghar par nahin hai..actually,mujhe laga door par wohi hogi...
RD : Ghar par nahin hai matlab..? kahin pados mein gayi hai kya...? Par uski toh koi dost pados mein nahin hai..?
RM : Nahin..Pados mein nahin...Shopping par gayi hai ..woh kya tha ki,...
RD : (stood-Up shockingly n said with worried tone) SHOPPING par...?? Sharda ji ! Aapko kya ho gaya hai...aapne usse akele jaane kaise diya? Usse toh thik se Mumbai ki roads ke baare mein kuchh bhi nahin pata...woh jab bhi bahar gayi hai..mere yaa RAHUL ke saath hi gayi hai..aap itni careless kaise ho sakti hain...? (He said angrily)
Sharda smiled but, said nothing...
RD : Hadhh ho gayi...main itna tensed hoon...aur aap hain ki, smile kiye ja rahi hain..? Usse kuchh ho gaya toh...?
RM : Don't worry ! Usse kuchh nahin hoga..just relax...aur main iss liye muskura rahi hoon ki...GUNJAN ka naam aate hi aap donon Baap-Bete aise behave karne lagte ho jaise woh ab tak koi...8-10 saal ki chhoti bachhi ho... she smiled again,after hearing RAHUL's name Mr.Nanda felt relax and set again on sofa and said...
RD : Haan toh....? Woh hamesha mere liye bachhi hi rahegi...aur RAHUL uski care karta hai..Because,He is my son...and he knows,GUNJAN ko extra care n protection ki zaroorat hai....jaanti hain Sharda ji....main aaj bhi uska woh dara aur sahma hua masoom chehra bhool nahi pata...jab Ravi aur bhabhi ki death ke baad uske so called relatives usse "ORPHANAGE" mein bhejne ki formalities puri kar rahe the...woh 1 corner mein khadi thi....silent...dari hui...uski aankhen bheegi hui thi... jaise woh kuchh kehna chahti ho....par...koi nahin tha jis se woh kuchh keh sake.... koi itna cruel kaise ho sakta tha...uss masoom bachhi ka dard kisi ko mahsoos kyun nahin ho raha tha....jisne sirf 7 dinon pahle apne parents ki death dekhi....usse woh log 1 "Orphanage" mein bhejna chahte the.....

He lost in remembering all past incidents...then,just 2 little drops of water..dropped from his eyes. aur phir...jab aapne kaha...ki,kya hum GUNJAN ko apne saath nahin rakh sakte....Yakeen maaniye....mujhe itni khushi kabhi nahin hui thi...jitni uss pal hui.....aapne mere dil ki baat keh di thi.....
he wiped his tears.
RM : Main jaanti hoon...aapko aur aapki soch ko...aur mujhe faqr hai ki,maine aap jaisa pati paya...aur GUNJAN...bhale hi woh hamein...Uncle-Aunty kehti hai...par woh hamein apne Mom-Dad se kam nahin samajhti...usne kabhi mehsoos nahin hone diya ki,hum uske liye paraye hain....yaad hai aapko...jab usse scholership mili aur woh DEHRADOON jaane waali thi..kitna roi thi....aur woh kyun...aap bhi toh Station par khud ko rok nahin paye the.....bachhe ki tarah roye the aap.Aur RAHUL....
RD : Meri beti jaa rahi thi...aansoo toh aayenge hi naa.....aur RAHUL...yaad hai aapko..kitni nafrat kart tha woh usse....aur meri Princess usne kabhi uski shikayat nahin ki mujhse....par main jaanta tha woh usse bilkul pasand nahin karta....phir pata nahin kya hua....Donon itne achhe dost ban gaye.....meri Princess hai hi itni pyaari....koi usse zyada dinon tak Nafrat kar bhi toh nahin sakta...woh toh kisi ko bhi apna bana sakti hai.....

RM : Haan...kaise bhool sakti hoon...woh sab....aur GUNJAN ke jaane ke baad toh...mera beta woh bilkul badal sa gaya....kitne dinon tak usne humse thik se baat bhi nahin ki,kyunki woh samajhta tha humne hi usse DEHRADOON jaane diya....woh humse naraaz tha ki,humne usse roka kyun nahin......?

RD : Haan kitni mushkil se humne usse samjhaya...par woh tab maana jab GUNJAN apni vacations mein aayi aur usne usse samjhaya. Woh GUNJAN se bada hai....par agar woh kisi ki baat sunta hai..toh sirf GUNJAN ki....
Waise aapne abhi bhi mujhe puri baat nahin batai....!.
RM : (she smiled) Aap batane denge tab naa.....Don't worry..woh RAHUL ke saath hi gayi hai....shopping ke liye.Aaj RAHUL ke Office ki Party hai..woh,GUNJAN ko le jaana chahta tha so,Party ke liye Dress purchase karne gaye hain woh donon...
SD : Oh! Phir thik hai....agar RAHUL uske saath hai,toh mujhe koi tension nahin....main toh sochta hoon ki,......but,he didn't complete his sentence...
SM : Lo..woh donon aa bhi gaye....aap sab baitho main bas abhi aati hoon. She said after seeing RAHUL n GUNJAN on door.RAHUL n GUNJAN enters in room....n both sat on sofa....
R : Good Evening Dad ! Kaisa tha aapka aaj ka din...? Oh! Waise maine neeche abhi Parking mein dekha,aapki Girl Friend ki 1 aankh kisi bande na phod di hai...(He chuckled)
RD : (said with irritating Voice) GUNJAN...! Dekho yeh phir shuru kar raha hai...isse samjha do yeh meri car ko kuchh na kahe.....mujhe toh issi par doubt hai....issi ka kaam hoga...yehi jalta hai,meri car se.
G : (She smiled and said with ordering tone) RAHUL...! Tum uncle ki car ko kuchh nahin kahoge...aur kal uski headlight bhi change karaoge.
R : Oh ! Par kisi khushi mein...? Aur main kyun karaoon uss Khatara ko Repair? Maine nahin todi woh headlight....I swear (said innocently with puppy face)
RD : Iski baatoon mein mat aana GUNJAN...Isne SHARMA ji ki bhi headlight tod di thi..zyada din nahin hue...kuchh hi dinon pahle.....mujhe toh ab yakeen hai yeh issika kaam hai...
R : Dad..! Aap Yeh Kya...
G : (She cut his sentence) Todi ho yaa naa todi ho par...aap usse kal change karaoge.
RD : Yaa ! Right..absoluetly Right.lo,ab GUNJAN ne bhi mere favour mein decision de diya...ab koi argument nahin..Case solved. (said happily)
R : OK ! Baba...kara doonga...But,Its not fair...Aap donon milkar ek bhole-bhaale ladke ko lut rahe ho..(said innocently)
G : Oh ! Mujhe toh pata hi nahin tha...ki,aap bhole-bhaale hain....kya aap ko pata tha uncle? looked at RD n asked innocently...and both laughed...RAHUL smiled after seeing their happiness...He was enjoing this movement.A Perfect Family Movement.
R : Ok...Ok...aur kitna hansenge aap donon.....? Gunjan ! kya Mom ko apni shopping nahin dikhaogi ?
G : Oh...Yaa..! Main abhi dikha kar aati hoon...
Mom just enters in room and said, "Kahin jaane ki zaroorat nahin...main hi aa gayi....lo pahle chai toh lo...main dekh loongi.." and she put the trey on table.
R : Mom ! Mujhe Chai nahin peeni.....main room mein ja raha hoon...feeling tired.thodi der rest karoonga phir Party ke liye ready bhi toh hona hai... and he left the room...

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RAHUL lying on his bed.He was upset...still thinking about that 'Ring'...((Ab main kya karoon...? Socha tha...ussi ring se aaj Party ke baad GUNJAN ko purpose karoonga...Kitni khoobsurat Ring thi woh...jaise sirf meri GUNJAN ke liye bani ho...Woh Shop-Keeper jhooth keh raha tha...par kyun??...socha tha aaj uss se apne dil ki saari baat ....apni feelings......apne jazbaat share karoonga. Kahoonga...ki,main uss se kitna pyar karta hoon...uske bina nahin reh sakta... usse zindagi bhar ke liye apni zindagi mein shamil karna chahta hoon....uss se shaadi karna chahta hoon......ab waqt aa gaya hai Gunjan...jab hum apne uss Promise ko pura karein jo, humne ek dusre se kiya tha....[#] Par yeh sab bina kisi proper arragement ke kehna...? Ab toh ring bhi nahin rahi....! Main jaanta hoon.....uski koi demands nahin hoti....koi zidd nahin hoti...yeh Ring....yeh Formalities...uske liye koi maayne nahin rakhte...woh meri hai...uske liye agar kuchh important hai toh woh hai meri uske liye true feelings...par main..? Main toh usse yeh sab dena chahta hoon...main chahta hoon ki, woh feel kare ki woh kitni khaas hai...mere liye kitni important hai woh....kya halat thi meri uske bina...? Mujhe usse sab kuchh batana hai...par...par shayad aaj sahi time nahin hai...mujhe phir se sab kuchh planned karna hoga... something different.....something special...only for my GUNJAN )) He lost in his thought....just then GUNJAN knocked the door....
G : RAHUL main andar aa jaaoon...?
R : Oh ! Tumhen kab se door knock karne ki zaroorat pad gayi....Please come....main soya nahin hoon...she came n sits besides him on the bed
G : Jaanti hoon , Tum soye nahin...par....RAHUL,tumhaari tabiyat toh thik hai?? hey! Kya tumhen Headache hai ? Main sar daba doon...?
R : (smiled) Nahin...mujhe headache nahin hai and I am totally Fit n Fine so no...chance...Pinki !
G : Chance..? kaisa Chance...? maine toh kuchh kaha bhi nahin....(made a innocent face)
R : Par main samajh gaya...Jo tum kehne waali thi....."RAHUL ! Kya Party mein jaana zaroori hai..?" (Said with her tone(act) n smiled) Pinki ! Don't forget..I am your senior...(He winked)
G : Oh...RAHUL....you are very bed...phir se Pinki..? Aur tumne phir se meri nakal utaari....aur ab yeh seniority ka rob mujh par nahin chalega...main Uncle ko sab bata doongi...Jaao main nahin jaati kisi Party-Warty mein...(Said with fake anger n about to stood up)
R : Ok..Ok...nahin kahoonga...Ab toh khush....Ab toh chalogi naa Party mein...?
G : RAHUL....kya sahi mein Jaana zaroori hai...? Hum koi movie dekhne chalte hain naa...phir paani-puri...aur stall ki Ice-Cream...woh bhi Butter-Scotch...kitni yummi hoti hai woh....(said excitedly) aur Promise aaj...BIKE bhi slow chalane ko nahin kahoongi....Please....Please...Please...RAHUL (said in appealing tone)
R : (smiled..he was enjoying her requests n appeal) Chalenge....zaroor chalenge...Jahaan tum kahogi wahaan.....par aaj nahin...Kal...aaj sirf Party mein jaayenge..
G : RAHUL...! Tumse kuchh bhi kehna bekaar hai...she stood up n about to go....
R : GUNJAN.... (she turned with a little hope...he smiled again n said) Tum ready ho jaao...aur please face expression ko thoda thik kar lo...tum par anger expression suit nahin karta....(He chckled)
G : Very Funny....Dekhna ab kitna bhi kahoge....kabhi movie dekhne nahin jaaoongi...aur tumhaare saath kahin bhi nahin jaaoongi...and she left the room.
R : (( How Cute...woh jab mujh par iss tarah naraaz hoti hai...mujhe bahoot achha lagta hai....chal beta RAHUL....ab tu bhi Party ke liye ready ho jaa....Dude ! GUNJAN tere saath hogi toh tujhe bhi toh thoda extra effort karna hoga naa...Jodi lagni toh chahiye...! )) he was still smiling.

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RAHUL was waiting of GUNJAN in hall for going to Party.He wore a Slaty color Suit,he was looking really extra Handsome n Cute in that suit.He calls GUNJAN loudly....after some min. she came there...She wore the same Green-Red 'ANARKALI' suit.(selected by SAMRAT...n later RAHUL in mall) He studded after seeing her..He was lost in her beauty completly,((Oh God ! How can I resist myself ? No.I can't do...Kya karoon main...abhi sab kuchh bata doon...? Yeh sab kuchh ek sapne jaisa khoobsurat hai...Koi itna khoobsurat kaise ho sakta hai...? Ek Angle ki tarah...Masoom...itna pure....ek aisa chehra jo dekhte hi dekhte mere dil mein utar gaya...Aur yeh Dress...? Kya yeh sach mein itni pretty hai yaa yeh Pretty lag rahi hai..kyunki,isse GUNJAN ne carry kiya hai...?...Dude! Kya sach mein Party mein jaana zaroori hai? )) He asked this question to himself....then just,
"RAHUL Kya dekh rahe ho...? Main kaisi lag rahi hoon...? Maine kabhi aisi Dress carry nahin ki...toh..pata nahin kaisi lag rahi hai..?..." she asked these questions with a very worried tone...
RAHUL just came-out from his chain of thoughts after hearing Gunjan's questions....and he said only....." GORGEOUS !"
G : (she smiled) Thanks...! waise tum bhi kaafi handsome lag rahe ho...woh kya kehte hain....tumhaari language mein.......'Extra Dashing Cool Dude' and she laughed.RAHUL smiled hearing this words from GUNJAN...n he blushed.
R : (said softly) Ab chalein...Meri tarrif tum ghar par aakar bhi kar sakti ho...I don't mind....Mujhe achha lagega.." (and winked his eyes)
G : Mujhe kisi ki tarrif nahin karni, woh toh tumne mujhe itna achha Compliment diya toh...maine bhi as a formality keh diya...Khud ko itna serious lene ki zaroorat nahin...Ok. (cutely said)
R : Ok..Ok...But,I know the truth , Hum wapas aakar bhi iss matter par baat kar sakte hain...abhi chalte hain...warna kaafi late ho jaayenge...
G : Well tum chalo main abhi Uncle-Aunty ko bye keh kar aati hoon...
R : Ok...tum aao main yehin wait karta hoon....par jaldi aana...
G : main bas abhi aayi...


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RAHUL n GUNJAN reached on Building 'Parking Area'...
G : RAHUL hum Car parking section mein kyun aaye...Tumhaari Bike toh yahaan nahin hai...? Kya hum uncle ki car se jaayenge....?
R : No way..! main aur woh bhi uss'KHATARA' par..? kabhi sochna bhi mat..
G : RAHUL...tumne phir usse 'khatara' kaha...? (said angrily)
R : Ok baba Sorry ! Tum bhi naa sach mein Dad ki chamchi ho...but,main keh raha hoon...woh really 'khatara' hai...uss par gaye toh kal tak zaroor pahunch jaayenge...waise bhi usska mere saath purana panga hai...
G : Toh agar Uncle ki car se nahin toh phir kaise jaayenge?
R : Oh ! GUNJAN thoda toh wait karo...and he went to near a white I-10 car and stood beside...."Hum JOY ki car mein jaayenge....yeh waali Car par"
G : Par kyun RAHUL hum Bike par bhi toh ja sakte the naa...? Kisi aur ki Car lene ki kya zaroorat thi?
R : Well...Bike se Ja toh sakthe the..but,woh kya hai naa ki, I am very carring n responsible citizen of MUMBAI City.
aur main nahin chahta ki hamari wajah se aaj MUMBAI National News mein aa jaaye...
G : Hamari wajah se...? aur woh kaise..? (she asked with full curiousity)
R : Obviously Yaar ! look..agar mere jaisa Handsome n Saxy aur tumhaari jaisi Gorgeous Girl , ek saath Bike par honge... toh kitne saare accidents ho jaayenge..tumhen pata bhi hai....maine toh sabko bachaya hai...
G : Woh kis tarah...? aur hamari wajah se accidents kyun honge...? (asked innocently)
R : Very Simple...Mujhe dekh kar driving kar rahi Girls Out of Control ho jaayengi...aur Driving kar rahe Guyz tumhen dekh kar destract ho jaayenge....just think about it..aisi condition mein kitne saare accidents honge...aur 1 saath itne saare accidents hue toh MUMBAI bhi national News mein aa jaayega...aur hum donon pehle toh News Papers mein phir Jail mein...nazar aayenge....(smiled and winked his eyes) so, tumhen mujhe Thanks kehna chahiye...maine,kitni easily etne saare logon ko save kar liya...
G : Thanks RAHUL (smiled) Humein bachane ke liye....But,really iski zaroorat nahin thi...
R : Hello ! Iski zaroorat thi...Tumhen pata bhi hai...Suit mein Bike riding sirf stupid log karte hain...and I don't want to loose my Style Statement aur waise bhi, agar meri khud ki Car ab tak nahin aa paayi toh woh bhi sirf tumhaari wajah se...(Said with fake anger)
G : Meri wajah se....? Maine kya kiya....? (asked with shocking tone)
R : Haan sirf tumhaari wajah se...Main kab se tumhaara hi wait kar raha tha ki,kab tum DEHRADOON se aaogi aur hum saath mein jaakar Car book karenge....Par tum...tumhen wahaan mujh se zyada unn students ki fikr thi....
G : Sorry RAHUL...maine uske liye tumhen sorry kaha naa....But, mera wait kyun kiya...? Mujhe toh Car aur uske features ka koi Idea nahin...
R : (He smiled) Wait kiya kyunki,main tumhaari pasand ki Car lena chahta tha...tum sirf Show Room mein yeh bata dena ki,tumhen kaun si pasand hai....main ussi ko book kar loonga.Jahaan tak features ki baat hai...unn mein zyada farq nahin hota...so, no tension...aur hum kal hi chalenge.....New Car book karne. Oh! Kitni der ho gayi....I think hamein Party ke liye nikalna chahiye ... tum baitho
G : Ok...But,RAHUL Please...thoda slow drive karna....
R : I know Baba,Tumhen speed se darr lagta hai....Don't worry main slow driving hi karoonga....

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* Guyz,Please don't throw Chappals or Sandals....😳 I know,I deserve it...😳 But,see Its already a long part naa...some scene n dialogues of this part is very important for forthcoming incidents so, I couldn't cut it. But,I promise...next part is not disappointing ...Trust me.Actually,I was not satisfied with my previous SaJan first meet scene 😕 so,I deleted whole part.😊 Late is better then Worst.😊

* Guys may be you feel that,I am focusing RAHUL more then SAMRAT. Its right but,Its temporary and only for story requirements.You will see,very-soon story will turn on different side...and Friends,Try to understand..here both male leads are equal...so, I can't cut RAHUL-GUNJAN scenes because,GUNJAN n RAHUL is part of same Family.
* [#] Friends,This is very Important long FB scene of RaJan. I'll disclose that incident very soon.

*NEXT PART :
Posting Date- 09 March,2011

Featuring - (A) RAHUL-GUNJAN at Party Destination
(B) RAHUL's Job in trouble.
(C) A Cute misunderstanding
(D) SaJan meeting and after meeting...SAMRAT..?

Edited by Joseph_A - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
YAY! YAY! finally i succeeded in commenting on ur FF first......m soooooo happy......😃....i luv commenting 1st......😳

JOSEPH, wat shud i say about this update....?! it was just superb, mind-blowing, fantastic, awesum & all the words that define BEST in the dictionery......i luv it to the core.....altough it was more abt RaJan but still i luvd it 4 its dialouges.....i luvd it coz it was funny, emotional, dreamy & the biggest point wich i luvd was the change that i saw in SAMRAT in this update......now i can surely say that our sweet, loving, caring samrat will be surely back.......😃

this update showed that samrat is not a creul guy......he's just made himself rock-strong so that no one hurts him...... & i completely undrstnd & symphatize with him.....he has suffered a lot in his childhood & i completely understnd his POV towards the world.......maybe he has nver been close 2 a genuine person xcept 4 his dai maa......but m sure he will change aftr meeting his angel- GUNJAN........😊

i luvd all the scenes.......specially RM & RD scene.......it was soooooo touchy & emotional.......gunjan's childhood was very painful......😭....but she was lucky that she got a family lyk rahul's.......they r really very nice but i wish k rahul still hated gunjan then SaJan luv-story me koi obstacle nai hota.......😉😆.....luvd the building scene & rahuls dialogues of being RESPONSIBLE MUMBAI CITIZEN......i was ROFLING......🤣

& u definetely DONT deserve CHAPPALS but applauses 4 this part.......👏👏👏......it was truly mind-blowing...... U r 1 of my fav writers & sumwer in ur QUOTES i read that u said this is ur 1st & last FF....!....dnt say dat plzzzzz.....if u dnt write more FF's aftr MBYPH we I-F members will start a strike on I-F 2 bring u back so plzzzzzzz dnt discontinue writing.......may ur FF go on 4 more 4-5 YRS 2 cum......😃......coz i jus luv MUSHKIL BADA YE PYAAR HAI......!!!!!!

& i can see that the girls comnting on ur FF r goin GAGA over RAHUL......they r just drooling over him & asking 4 a luver like him.......GR888888 den......my coast is clear now.......SAMRAT is all mine now......😉😃...... YAY! YAY! m soooooo happy......m not @ all intrested in RAHUL so all u girls can keep rahul & i'll keep SAMRAT 4 myself.......😉😃 he's all mine now.......

i just cant wait 4 ur next update.......WOW! SaJan 1st meet......! damn excited 4 it.......just waiting with baited breath 4 9th march...... & wat abt dat (#) scene? wen i saw that sign i read that part again with concentration & m damn scared......😔....wat promise was rahul talkin abt? wat promise have RaJan made? m very scared......plzzzzz reveal the mistery soon......i cnt wait......😕......it was just mind-blowing update.....sorry 4 the long commnt.....i said watever came in my mind & it luks like i've written an OS......😆.....really sorry 4 this..... & i hope next update isse bhi BEST hoga aftrall its SaJan meet yaar to special to hona chaiya & i m sure u'l do complete justice to it......dnt delay it much further ok......next update will be more ROCKING 4 sure.......😃 & i knw u'l do justice 2 saJan as well the way ur doin 2 RaJan.....😊

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GT 2 PM ME.......

W8ing with baited breath 4 ur next update.......cum soon 9th march......😳
Edited by ekta_monaya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I seriously do not know what to write, Joseph.......... this is just so perfect.........absolutely perfect...... RaJan 😳 scenes were very well written....much as I hate to admit............. as reading anything other than SaJan is not really easy.........Rahul really loves Gunjan ........but waiting for SaJan's first meeting.......... do continue soon. waiting for the 9th.

Swati.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Joseph..
Thanks for updating me with this wonderful FF of yours..⭐️
I just love it.. I read it the previous day.. SORRY I could not comment earlier!! But you were just awesome!!👏 I am egerly waiting for Samrat Gunjan to meet.... Richa and Rahul's character is superb.. One can do anything for his love and the other can get anything done for her love!! 😆
😲What can I do?? I don't have any possible words to describe! I am simply WORD-LESS!! 😕 And Gunjan's character is quite like the one in MJHT, but Samrat's is a drastic change!😲 I guess you took it from Season-2 of MJHT!! The starting part!! Hopefully Gunjan will come soon to his life and change him and make him the cute, funny, romantic😳 and happy-go-lucky man back!! I guess what Dai Maa has sensed is something related to Samrat Gunjan's meeting!! You have so wonderfully chosen the correct people to match with the characters!!👏⭐️😃
And Today's update was just FANTABULOUS!!!👏
The Ring is Lost.. Thank God!!
I think it is a signal for Samrat to stop taking a wrong step in his life when he can get better and he deserves the best and happiness..
Aww... Poor Samrat😭!! Crying for his MOM!!
I just hate his so-called D-A-D!! He is going through so much of pain and what he does is comes and Yell at him?? How DARE he😡!!
I hate Mr. Shergill from the bottom of my heart!!
But Samrat is so cool about it..
Hate to see him HATE "LOVE!"
I really hope SAM's dad either turns good or just gets lost!
Poor SAM!!🥺
I can't bear to see or even read him crying 😳😭
Sorry for the long comment..
Just wanted to express what I felt about this FF..
Hope SaJan meet soon and fall in love in sooner!
AND You are Just SIMPLY-AWESOME Joseph!!!
Thanks for the PM!!
Keep Updating Me with this simply wonderful FF of yours..
Thanks Again!
Nivriti
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow awesome update! We don't chappals on u for this. But i was little disappoint, because i expected sajan's meet in this. But u have said that the story needs so i'll wait for it. Coming to update, sam's dialouge of loosing what he want made me realise that why he is so hyper to get what he wants, which u described in ur previous update, in this update u have reasoned it well. And where did that ring gone, strange! By this thing it had proved that 'A thing which doesn't belongs to us will doesn't be with us for long time no matters how much we carve for that or how much we did to own that.' Rahul's mom-dad convo is very touchy. The way u described gunjan's condition when her parents died, through rahul's dad which made me cry, i'm so much engrossed in it. U have done a great job. And rajans convo is sweet as always. And what they have promised each other and when? I think it is the part of rajans' flash-back. Rahul's talk about accidents was hilarious. And u have potrayed rahul's feelings towards gunjan nicely. He wants special for her. And i agree gunjan is so special and sweet that she deserves special and the guy who sees gunjan's innocence will fall for her and goes any extent for her does not matter that how much hatred he have in his heart. I have enjoyed this update. Do cont soon. And yeah i want sajan meet in next update, i'm very much eager to know what will be their first impressions for each other. Do cont as soon as possible. Thanks for pm

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