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Posted: 14 years ago
Keya,how more parts u will update????
Edited by dia_ditz - 14 years ago
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i wana see geet strong now..................n dat maan in trouble..............pls dont let him take dat land so easily.............n pls update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update
n wat's wrong with maan
cant he bear geet's happiness
jst wanna kill him
he s so mean
plz make him beg a lot in front of geet
n waiting fr nx update
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Posted: 14 years ago
What the reason that he hates her that much i do not undersatnd he is crazy or somethinggggggggggggg.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update n as usual i hate maan 2 the core
I want him 2 suffer a lot
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Posted: 14 years ago
i want Geet to refuse giving him the land... let maan suffer... let him learn tat money is not all... KEM if u can plz make Geet set task for maan if she wants to give him the land badly...but he have to win it...its Maan ofcourse it wont be difficult for him... let him for once depend on someone badly..
Edited by aarthirajendran - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
maan is so mean to her....
i just hope he realizes his mistake soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago

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part 7
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As his jip pass by he gave her a weird look and went off. Geet reaffixes her dupatta on her hair and hurriedly walks off. Maan smirks seeing her worried face. He was about to buy a land that worth 100-200 millions. He wanted see the owner badly. His patient was running out as no one knew who exactly owned the land. Apparently it's a old families land. It's protected & Traditional is that no one could buy it. It was protected jungle. Maan wanted to make resorts... Specially because it's the jungle. It will be huge profit for him... But permission from the family + the government will create hassle! He was trying to avoid that. Completely. Out of his luck it's Geet s family who is the owner & it's passed on to the oldest one in the family. Which simply means it's Geet... He have to see this filth again.


Geet was shopping with Rajji when maan appeared from no where.
Maan- I need to talk to you. Geet jumped with his sudden appearance. Rajji looked at him once and then ran with rest of the shopping bag. Geet ignored as everyone wondered who is this man? Everyone knew Geet in this town. Her background was royl once but due to circumstances they have lost everything. Now barely get one meal. It was thanks to Geet that there family have money now.... Everyone wonders how they fell? They were one of the nicest family. With no greed.
Geet- please don't create any scene here. Geet ignores & leaves.
Maan started to get irritated. No one dare talks to him like that. Suddenly two poor beggars came round maan for some money... He laughs at them.
Maan- look Geet it's your friends!
Geet looks at the beggars. It was a 8-10 years old girl with her small brother. She felt pity...
Geet came towards them- beta... Don't you 2 have school today?
Beggar- we barely get enough money to eat! & school... My parents died. We have no home. No food.
Geet looks at them in pain.
Maan was just laughing... Both beggars felt so low. & down. Unwanted tears rolled down there eyes.
Geet- come with me.
Maan flows. Still keeping his distance way with the filth... For this stupid land what els he have to do?...
Geet- please sir. Could you stop flowing us. She asked nicely.
Maan- hello! I came here to talk to you. Not your attitude. You filthy little b..... And you two get lost. He shouts at them. Geet was shocked with his Attitude. They were mere child.... Geet lost her cool.
Geet- SHUT UP! Just Shut UP. Maan wasn't shocked. He knew well she will stand up for everyone except her self.
Geet- what do you think of your self? You may have the right on me to call me all those name but you have no right to do the same thing on them. She was angry. Everyone in the market started to gather round. Chattering started. You have no right at all. they don't live in your money or living in your land...
Maan started to get P-off off with her. He holds her hand tight. Digging his nail on her wrist. Geet moans in pain... People started to come and push him way thinking maan trying to force this girl. Maan shouts leave me.... Leave me you filth....
Geet snaps at everyone- please leave him. He is my husband.
The crowed started to calm down & left!
Both beggars run way....
Maan holds her hand and drags her off.
Maan- how date you tell everyone that I am your husband?
Geet- if I didn't lie they would have ripped you in to pieces!
Maan holds her tight- a filth like you could never be my wife.... Not even a servant! He was hurting Geet. She cried.
Maan- I am here to buy that land of yours!
Geet looks up. Not surprised. Why els will he be here- what land?
Maan- whole area. That protective area.
Geet- it's not under my name. Maan holds her tight.
Maan- don't lie.... Because in registration it's your name.
Geet- it will be under shrias name from now on. It's restricted. I can't sell you that.
Maan looks at her- who is Shoria?
Geet- let go please. You are hurting me. Tears started to roll down her eyes.
Maan snaps and holds her tighter. Geet closes her eyes in pain- my fut....Hu...bby! Geet couldn't talk in pain. It only sounded like it's her hubby.
Maan- well tell that your filthy Hubby maan sing khurana would like to see him. You both together. I am willing to pay good price.
Geet snaps because it wasn't her land. Maybe it's under her name but there is no way she will sell this to him.... He may have some weird right on my heart but nothing els...
Geet- I am not selling that land to you at all. so forget it. Maan looks back at her in anger. How dare she answer him back. He holds her hair tight.
Maan- what did you say?
Geet- I am not selling the land to you.
Maan- how dare you reply? Do you even know how much money I am offering? You and your filthy family & Further one may not have to work ever again. 80 million. 80 millions.
Geet looks back at his eyes- if I didn't sell my land for 1 billion then what makes you think I will sell this for 80 million? This time she replies back angrily.
Maan couldn't think. Yes that whole entire jungle did cost somewhere in between but who is that rich enough to offer this much price & why would this filthy people refuge? Why? For that big profit? Maan went thoughtless. The land was big. The jungle was endless. With beards of many animals.... Maan have to buy this. No matter what. He had to get his hand on it.
He frees her hair. Geet was in pain. In real pain.
Maan- I will buy that land from you & your husband. You your self will bring it to me. He smirks. Geet looks at him in shock. He drives off....
Geet- hubby! But I am not married yet!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Both of the parts are nice!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
well done geet luv u for da way u answer maan amazng part

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