Tuje kaisa lagta hai?~Maaneet~Thread 1

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#851

nice update ... nxt one soon plllzzzzzzz

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nadia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#852

Guys Thankyou sooooooo much just over a month I have been writing and I have had over 100,000 views..I cannot believe it😭 Don't worry these are khusi ke ansoo and my readers are increasing so thank you sweeties...a big muah and 🤗

As a way of saying thank you I will be updating soon a special scene for all you lovlies and I am hoping I exceed your expectations😳

Edited by Mahi-Maan - 14 years ago

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Sumaiyah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#853

how cute! please continue... loved the punjabi part at the end.. lol

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Posted: 14 years ago

#854

super brilliant update love the last part when maan liar that geet is in pain pls cont soonnnnnnnn thanks pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

#855

For reading my FF Tuje kaisa Lagta Hain?????😳

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Its Party time

OMG😲

Guys Thankyou sooooooo much just over a month I have been writing and I have had over 100,000 views..I cannot believe it😭 Don't worry these are khusi ke ansoo and my readers are increasing so thank you sweeties...a big muah and 🤗

As a way of saying thank you I will be updating soon a special scene for all you lovlies and I am hoping I exceed your expectations😳

Please do comment so far what your views are...as it encourages me to update regularly😊

dont worry my dear we love reading it MUAH so the pleasure are all our sweety

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crazedfan19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#856

its always a pleasure reading your ff! please continue writing!!

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crazedfan19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#857

great job!! LOVED it as always!! Thank you for the pm!!! please update soon!

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nadia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#858

Scene 87

Please be warned😳

Maaneet were dropped by a cab so there did not get a chance to talk about anything. They got home and Dadima was surprised to see them.
"Beta aap log ghar wapis aa gai?"
"Haan dadima wo Geet ko false labour pains thi toh maine doctor ke paas gaya toh uss ne bataya ke gabrane ki koi baat nahi"...stammered Maan.
"Acha beta muje toh laga ke aap jaan booj kar wapis aa gaye".
"Nahin dadima hum toh bahut enjoy kar rahe teh par Geet ko aik dum dard uta toh socha gahr wapis aa jai par kal hum shaadi par chale jai ge".
"Teek hain beta aap upar jai" she lovingly touched Geet's face.

Maaneet looked at each and laughed. Maan walked upstairs and was looking outside his balcony. It was breezy night with the the moon and stars sparkling away. He had taken off his sherwani and now was wearing a white shirt all open and combats. Suddenly he heard the tinkling of anklets, he smiled...his Geet was near...he carried on looking the other way...she shook her anklets..he ignored her...she shook her bangles..he ignored her...Geet came behind him and hugged him.
"Maan aap ne ye sab kyon kiya?"
"Sab kiya?"
"Meri false labour ka natak aur waha shaadi se bhaag aye"
"Kyon tum waha rehna chahto tih?"
"Nahin par kiya faida waha toh aap bahut romantic ho rahe teh magar ghar aa kar muje ignore karne lag pare"
"Acha? Jab main tume bulata hoon toh tum nakhre karne lag parti ho aur jab ignore karoo toh pir aise khud paas aa jati hoon"

Maan turned around and saw that Geet was sparkling in the dark...he looked at her with bedroom eyes
"Maan muje aise mat dekiye...aur waise bhi aap ne party main kuch ziyada hi ghaa diya aur iss ki toh saza aap ko milni chahiye"
"Kaisi saza"
"Aap ko bhaand dena chahiye"
"Ooooo handcuffs I would love that"...he laughed. She hit his chest with a fist in embarrasment.
Maan bought her close "Geet tum aaj bahut beautiful lag rehi ho hmmm".
"Maan aapki jo ankhen hain na bahut shaitan hain"
"Geet aik game kelte hain..main ankhen bhadnta hoon aur tum chupo aur agar maine dhoond iya toh pir samaj gai tum..."? Geet went shy..he took her dupatta from her neck and tied his eyes...

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Maan tries to sense where Geet is...he walks towards his room
Chup ja Chup ja
Ja kahi chup ja
tujhe dhundega dil deewana

Geet is hiding behind her the curtains...and sings

aa aaa..
Main chali main chali main chali
tujhse main door bhali
dil main tere ek chor hai
dil pe nahi ab zor hai

She turns around and Maan is infront of her...he is about to catch her that she runs...he smiles

Chup ja Chup ja
Ja kahi chup ja
tujhe dhundega dil deewana

Geet is feeling embarrased and nervous of what is in Maans mind

eaiiii aayi sharam

Maan walks and falls on the bed

aapno se to sharam karte nahi

Geet reaches the bed to help but stops

jaoo jaoo jaoo jao sanam
mausam bada beimaan hai
bas main nahi armaan hai

Maan grabs her arm and pulls her...

aaa aaaahhh
Dil na dhadkao sanam
aaise na darao sanam
pass aao tum
zid na karo
aaise na tum baiyya dharo

Geet pulls away...and Maan takes off his blindfold...

Geet goes towards the balcony..

eee dekho dekho dekho
darta hai maneee dekho dekho dekho
darta hai man

Maan comes near and pulls her blouse dori...

yeh to kaho
dar hai kis baat ka?

He undoes her paranda and opens her hair

ke chodo chodo chodo
deewanapan

Maan intensley pulls her and blows on her face...she involuntary shakes

Kehti mere dil ki lagi
samjhogi ki tum deewangi

Geet pulls away and feels shy
nadaan Hu Main Bekhabar
samjha do mujhe dilbar

Maan grabs her and picks her in his arms...she holds him by the neck
itni bhi na bholi bano
tumko kasam jaane bhi do

Maaneet reach their bed...both are memerised by their presence...Maan seductively starts taking her bangles off "Geet toh main jeet gaya" she looked a bit ruffled.
"Geet bola na..haan ya na?" he looked into her eyes. She ignored his gaze.
He started taking her earrings off.."Geet tum mere sawaal ka jawaab do"
he started taking her necklace...his lips were near her neck..she closed her eyes..she knew he was going to kiss her but he didn't...she sighed in anticipation.
"Geet bolo na"
"Kiya boloo main?"
"Wohi jo tumare dil main hain".

Geet got up and went a bit further..."Maan aap bhi na...main aapki biwi hoon aur aapka toh haq hain"
"Haq kaisa haq?" Maan smirked...he came near and started untying her dori's.
"Aapko haq hain mere paas ane ka"
"Aur?"
She turned around and hugged him
"Aur muje pyar karne ka"
He enclosed his arms around her...she felt safe in his arms.
"Acha main tume poori rath jaga sakta hoon?"

Maan picked her up and brought her back to the bed...she smiled "Maan you missed me so much that you could not spend 2 more nights in your aunties house?"
Maan nodded..."so sweet"😳 Maan was on top of her and Geet had her arms around him.
"Acha Geet main tume aik joke batata hoon....Knock knock"
"Who's there?"
"Kiss"
"Kiss who?"
"kiss who? kiss me"
Maan laughed Geet blushed☺️

Geet composed herself "Toh Maan aapne itna acha ghaana meri shaan main gaya toh muje bhi kuch karna chahiye"
Maan looked on..she moved him to the side..."Acha toh kaha kiss chahiye?"
"Geet" he said with a turned on voice..she caressed his face with her smooth long fingers..he looked drunk....she kissed his temples..."Yaha kiss chahiye?"
"Hmmm" he replied...she kissed his eyebrows "Yaha bhi?"
"yes"..she kissed his jawline "Aur yaha?"
he nodded...she kissed his neck...and sucked it for a little while...he touched her stomach...she moved down to the bottom of his stomach and made her way up...giving long wet kisses he was going mad...she felt his chiselled body...she came up and met his eyes and whispered "Maan anywhere else?" he grabbed her hair and smacked her lips against hers...he kissed her aggressively...she responded to his need...he opened her mouth and devoured in her flavours...both loved to french kiss...the kiss of soul....both moaned and carried on...Maan bit her lip slightly...it was so sensual...Maan took her blouse and she slid his shirt....he unzipped her lengha. Now all Maan could see was Geet in a pink bra and briefs...he got up he shut the light and put the lamp...he slid his combats and boxers. he came into bed.

"Geet if you feel uncomfortable let me know, I am a bit worried your heavily pregnant now"
"Teek hain" Geet said breathlessly
"Lekin agar tum chahti ho toh main ruk jata hoon" he teased.
Geet pulled him close "don't you dare Maan"
Maan laughed and came close...he kissed her neck while he unhooked her bra...Geet could feel his body but she still had her underwear on...he kissed her ears and licked them with the tip of his tongue...she sighed and moaned....he came down to her breasts and sucked them and teased them with his tongue...he grabbed and rubbed them aggressively
"Maan no they are sensitive now"
"sorry...my babies will be drinking doo doo very soon from them"...Geet smiled them talking about babies between their foreplay.
Maan touched her stomach and kissed it...he fondled with her and started to play with her...he realised she was ready. But he decided to tease her...he kissed her the inside of her thighs...she scrunched his shoulders....he kissed her over briefs and bit her and sucked her..she moaned "Maan"....she shuffled to his sensous touch...he came up and kissed her lips...she raised her leg over his and he felt her middle and pulled her briefs off. They were kissing each other senseless...Maan was about to enter and Dadima called out
"Maan" Both froze thinking what the hell. Maan whispered "Geet don't answer"
"Magar Maan"
"Sshhhh Ji dadima?"
"Wo main pata lagane ayi ke Geet ab teek hain?"
"Haan dadima so chuki hain aap fikar mat kare"
"Teek hain beta aap bhi so jaiye"
"Ok Dadima love you..."
Geet laughed under him...Maan smiled "Dadima ko bhi abhi aana ta...kaha teh hum? haan"
"Maan abhi mera mood nahi"
"Madam aapka mood abhi main teek karta hoon" he nuzzled her neck...and kissed her with frenchies..soon she whispered
"I was only joking..come inside me dhak dhak"
Maan lowered himself and went inside her deep...and narrowing the distance and spaces between them...she played with his hair while he pleasured her with his intensity..she was his wife and she loved being his bed partner...Both took themselves to places they had never been before...they were one and would remain one. Maaneet's one day away from each other created such chemistery in their bedroom department. Geet screamed with pleasure and he placed his hand fearing dadima will hear "Chup bilkul chup"...she smiled remembering all the times he had said that to her.

"Maan aap ne muje bahut miss kiya hain na?"
"Tume kaise pata?"
"Jab aap aise intensly muje pyar karte hain toh muje pata chal jata hain" she smiled.
"Am I good?"
"You are always good..akhir jurwa bacho ki maa aise hi nahi bana diya" she teased.
Instead that turned Maan on and he wanted another round..she resisted and started having pillow fights
"Maan no...no..nope"
"Geet yes...haan yes yes yes yes yesssssssss"

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Edited by Mahi-Maan - 14 years ago