Tuje kaisa lagta hai?~Maaneet~Thread 1 - Page 85

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahi-Maan



For reading my FF Tuje kaisa Lagta Hain?????😳

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Its Party time


OMG😲





Guys Thankyou sooooooo much just over a month I have been writing and I have had over 100,000 views..I cannot believe it😭 Don't worry these are khusi ke ansoo and my readers are increasing so thank you sweeties...a big muah and 🤗

As a way of saying thank you I will be updating soon a special scene for all you lovlies and I am hoping I exceed your expectations😳


Please do comment so far what your views are...as it encourages me to update regularly😊


the pleasurez all ours😛...... keep writing............ cauz we love readin ur FF's😉
keep up the good work 👏.......

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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwwwww really fabulous news yaar
love ur ff
i already told u iam just fida over ur ff
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update the special scene asap

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Posted: 14 years ago
Its always a pleasure to read your FF, Thanks for the PM always and Please continue to write as i miss them if i dont read.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Congrats 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏and Thanks for the PM Please continue...



You are most welcome keep write ...

Edited by monikaseth - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg such a cute baby...
Wow hahaha looking forward to the labour scene lol
Let's see how you portray it
And when is this special update????
Love you x
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Posted: 14 years ago
ufff... mein tho fida hoon aapke FF par... haayyyyy soo hot!... thanks for your efforts!
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Posted: 14 years ago



Scene 87

Maan and Geet were attending a wedding of Maan's relatives in their home town. It was the first wedding Geet and Maan attended as husband and wife. They had to stay there for three days due to Dadima insisting Maan make an effort with his family now that he was a family man.

Geet was reluctant to go she was nearly 6 and half months pregnant. She was glowing. Dadima insisted it will do good for Geet a change of scenary and make Maan a bit more social.

Maaneet arrived and everyone greeted the couple and admired Geet.

"Maan beta kiya Punjab ki sherni le ke aye ho...bahut khoobsurat hain aur tum kitne khush kismet ho tum jaise akar khan ko aisi patni mili jis ne tume jurwa bacho ka baap bana diya" his elder Aunty pulled his ears. Maan smiled embarrassed.

Geet was feeling tired "Maan inn sab ko kaho ke hume humara kamra dekai main bahut thak chuki hoon".

"Aunty ji wo main Geet thaki hain toh humara kamra kaha hain?" he asked awkwardly.

The aunty laughed " Beta 3 din apni biwi ko bhool jao sab larke aik kamre main aur sab larkiya aik kamre main...main larkiyon ko kehti hoon ke Geet ko le jai".

Maan thought *yeh kiya musibat hain ulta hume juda kar diya iss aunty ne damn!*

Maaneet could not sleep at night they were so use to each other. Maan rang her 12pm

"Hello Geet tum jag rehi tih?"

"Haan" croaked Geet.

"Kyon"?

"Aapki yaad aa rehi tih" she whispered.

"Muje bhi...I miss you"

"Maan aap phone rakiye agar aunty utt gait oh aapki khair nahi aur main aapse baat bhi nahi kar sakti koi sun le ga"

"Acha teek hain...Geet I love you"

"Me too bye".

Somehow they managed to sleep though reluctantly. Next day was mehndi day. Maan tried real hard to meet Geet but Aunty kept on fobbing him off that Geet was getting her mehndi done and all the girls were busy getting ready. Maan was getting restless.

Maan wore his black sherwani with silver embroidery..he looked like a prince. All the girls cooed at him and eyed him up. All the girls came down but Geet was not there. Maan kept asking they said she will be down in a minute.

All the girls and boys were dancing including the married couple...Girls were using chat up lines to talk to Maan but he was not interested. He rang on her mobile but there was no answer.

Suddenly the lights went off...everyone panicked...aunty was trying to calm everyone down...Maan had matches box on him he lit it...as soon it was lit he saw Geet a few yards away from him...wearing a baby pink lengha with silver embroidery...her hear had twists at the front and she had a high plait with a paranda...she was wearing a low backed blouse...she had sindoor in her maang and a bindi that was dazzling from afar...she looked like a hoor.

Maan moved towards her bewitched by her beauty...she walked towards him feeling awkward. They came close and both had an eyelock...it seemed Maan had seen her for the first time. Maan suddenly without any prompting started saying some poetry to Geet:

ye ankhein ye chehra ye noor

insaan ho ya pari ho tum

kitni fursat se banaya hoga

tumhei banane wale ne

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rxU--W2Gh7k[/YOUTUBE]



"Beta tume toh kuch gaana pare ga..chalo kuch apni biwi ke liye gaa do".

Maan looked at Geet with intense eyes...he looked hypnotised...he saw Geet talking to the girls. He started singing around the guys...Geet looked startled and puzzled.

kitna haseen chehra kitni piyari ankhei

kitna haseen chehra kitni piyari ankhei

kitni piyari ankhei ankho se chalakta piyar

Qudrat ne banaya hoga fursat se tuje mere yar

Qudrat ne banaya hoga fursat se tuje mere yar

kitna haseen chehra kitni piyari ankhei

kitna haseen chehra kitni piyari ankhei

kitni piyari ankhei ankho se chalakta piyar

Qudrat ne banaya hoga fursat se tuje mere yar

Qudrat ne banaya hoga fursat se tuje mere yar

Maan and Geet were approaching each other to dance that a girl grabbed Maan and started dancing..whilst Geet was taken by Maan's cousin.

teri nazar jhuke to sham dhale

jo uthe nazar to subah chale

teri nazar jhuke to sham dhale

jo uthe nazar to subah chale

Geet twirled and Maan's cousin pushed her towards Maan..Geet rested her hands on Maan's chest and suddenly smiled.

to hanse to kaliyan khil jaye

tuje dekh k hoor b sharmaye

Maan grabbed her long paranda and traced it with his lips and twirled her and her paranda went round her neck.

teri bikhri bikhri zulfei

teri mehki mehki sansei

kohil jaisi boli

teri meethi meethi batei

jee chahe mera tera karta rahoo yunhi deedar

Qudrat ne banaya hoga fursat se tuje mere yar

Qudrat ne banaya hoga fursat se tuje mere yar

kitna haseen chehra kitni piyari ankhei

kitna haseen chehra kitni piyari ankhei

kitni piyari ankhei ankho se chalakta piyar

Qudrat ne banaya hoga fursat se tuje mere yar

Qudrat ne banaya hoga fursat se tuje mere yar

Geet eyes could not see Maan so she started looking around...and he came behind her and started singing. She blushed.

duniya mehaseen aur b hain

hoga na koi tere jaise haseen

duniya mehaseen aur b hain

hoga na koi tere jaise haseen

He traced the outline of her figure with his hands

rangeen jawan madhosh badan

tu husn o shabab ka hai gulshan

tere an se khushboo barse

oariyon si sunder kaya

jo kuch socha tha me ne

wo sab kuch tujh me hai paya

teri ik ada pe me sadke jao soo bar

Qudrat ne banaya hoga fursat se tuje mere yar

Qudrat ne banaya hoga fursat se tuje mere yar

By now Maan made it obvious that he was in love with Geet so much that one night was too much for him to bare without her.

kitna haseen chehra kitni piyari ankhei

kitna haseen chehra kitni piyari ankhei

kitni piyari ankhei ankho se chalakta piyar

Qudrat ne banaya hoga fursat se tuje mere yar

Qudrat ne banaya hoga fursat se tuje mere yar

The song finished with everyone doing a bhangra to the beat. Maaneet laughed and smiled.

"Mundiya aj teh tu dil khush kar deta..aina pyar apni voti naal...Babaji buri nazar toh bachai" cooed Aunty

Maan pinched Geet "Ouchhhhhhh"

"Geet kiya hua? Bahut dard ho raha hain...tum fikar mat karo main tume doctor ke paas le chalta hoon don't worry...sorry Aunty ji hume jaana hoga Geet bahut distressed hain..aur bahut dard ho raha hain uss ko" Maan winked at Geet.

Geet was puzzled what was her hubby up to...she just played along😕

"Haan Aunty ji main doctor ke paas jati hoon...muje bahut takleef hain"

"Acha beta jao aap..aur agar Geet achi hogai toh kal zaroor aana".

Maaneet literally ran from there...😆

Press the like button and please comment..and please don't be sad there is more to come😛


Edited by Mahi-Maan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
"Maaneet literally ran from there...😆"-----------after reading this line i was just smiling n thinking abt it...................i shud say u bring up updates with these cute moments.............uff i love them all.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
so sweet nautanki dono eak din aag nahi reh paye shiataan..thank you for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates
loved them both
u are a a fab writer
muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 2 u
loving all the hot scenes
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww this was a cute scene
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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