Tuje kaisa lagta hai?~Maaneet~Thread 1 - Page 54

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates
loved them all
wow this one so hot yaar
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

i'm feeling hotter hear thanks i needed this because out hear its freezing need to make my self warm ha ha ha ha ha ha😆😆 love the song because its mama FV song steamy hot as always my dear pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn



Thanks hons...I love sridevi she looks divine in that song...plus I think DD resembles her slightly
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Posted: 14 years ago
Quick Note

Hi guys,

Loads of you requested me to carry on with my FF...I just wanted to ask if you like the way I am giving you such hot scenes???



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Posted: 14 years ago
is it anything to ask dear?????? we love both u n your writing style.........which leaves us ☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago



Scene 64

Geeting was tossing and turning...she couldn't go to sleep...
"Geet kiya bath hai...na khud soti ho na muje sone deti ho"
"Arre wah eh lo khud muje iss halat main bana kar aur khud maze ke kharate maarna chahte hain"
"Acha toh batao kiya bath hain?"
"Maan muje samosa chaat khani hain...aur Haagan Daaz Ice cream...cookies and cream flavour wali"
Maan got up and sat irritated
"Samosa chaat aur ice cream wo bhi Haagan Daaz cookies and cream?"
"Haan" Geet excitedly
"Mere dimaag kharaab hain ke itni rath main jao..chalo so jao aur kal mein le jao ga"
Maan layed down and turned around. Geet got upset and placed her hand on her stomach
"Dekha...dekha tumare pappa aapki mummy got pregnant bana kar tevar dekha rehe hain...inko ye nahi pata ke mummy ko cravings isliye hoti hain kyonki aap dono ke ye chahiye..aik samosa chaat khana chahta hain doosara ice cream"

Maam felt guilty and got up putting his shirt...
"Acha chalo kyonki tum ne meri jaan chorni nahin...acha bahana hain babies ko le kar blackmail"
Geet got ready and they went down.

"Arre beta aap itni rath kaha ja rahe hain?"
"Dadima Geet ut pataang bate kar rehi hain ke usse samosa chaat aur ice cream khaane ka mann hain" he said annoyingly
"Beta bura mat manao wo maa banane wali hain aur ye cravings toh hoti hain...jao aur uss ka khiyaal rakho" she cupped his face.
Maan realised that he was wrong she doing all this in jest.

Maan drove her to a dhaba..."Bhai aik samosa chaat dena"
"Maan aap bhi lijeye na?"
"Geet tumne dekha uss ke bartan...tum ye sab pasand karti hogi main nahi"
"Maan aap bahut hi pompous hain"
"Main aur pompous nahin toh...bhai aik aur samosa chaat mere liye bhi"
They both ate in their car..Geet was enjoying herself..Maan smiled. He ate too and enjoyed himself.😲

They drove off "Maan ab kaha chale hain"
"tume haagan daaz ice cream nahin khaani aur wo bhi cookies and cream wali?"
Geet smiled and held his arm and leaned her head. They went in the Ice cream parlour and ordered two cookies and cream...Maan left to freshen himself up.
"Geet main abhi ata hoon"
She nodded.

Geet was waiting feeling strange on her own.
"Excuse me" Geet looked and it was a young handsome man
"Ji"
"Aap akeli hain can I join you?"
Geet was speechless..he made himself at home..."Main aapko ye batana chahta tah ke aap behad khubsoorat hain and I am very attracted to you"
"Ji suniye"
"Ye mera mobile number hain and ring me so we can link up?" He winked
"Suniye aap galat samaj rahe hain"
Maan came out and listened to what he was saying from a distance.
"Oh come one..itne rath ge aik akeli larki..yaha kiya kar rehi hain..main tum jaisi larkiyon koo janata hoon...so what say we give each other a good time"
Maan angrily came charging with jealousy
"Ye mere sath hain...Maan Singh Khurana ke sath...naam toh suna hi hoga?" he said with great attitude..Geet smiled he looked so sexy when angry☺️
"Maan Singh Khurana the business tycoon?...acha toh aap isse yaha lai hain I must say kiya cheez ko aapne chuna hain time pass ke liye" he said in a pervy way
"Shut up...ye meri biwi hain Geet..aur mere bacho ki maa banane wali hain...agar khair chahte ho toh niklo yaha se..abhi"
The guy seeing his anger quickly ran😆

"Maan aapko itna ghussa hone ke zaroorat thi..main bath sambaal rehi thi na?"
"Haan maine dekha"..he slammed the napkin down "uss gatiya aadmi ne tume call girl bana diya aur tum sambaal rehi thi"
Geet touched his jawline and smiled "Maan ab bhool bhi jaiye warna aapka mood teek karne keliye aapko sabke saamne kiss kardoo gi"☺️
Maan eyes softened "Acha?" he said seductively "toh karo" he teased knowing she won't.
But she quickly kissed his lips☺️..his heart skipped a beat in shock😲😳
He gave her bedroom eyes "Geet tum bhi na" he was edging to break into a kiss but the ice cream came😆

They enjoyed the ice cream...and left. On the way back Geet smiled to herself thinking how Maan after saying she was his wife told the guy about her carrying his babies to deflect unwanted attention...he was so possessive...😳..she looked at Maan lovingly..she held his arm and leaned to kiss his cheek..he smiled..."Maan thank you...aapne itna kiya mere liye"
"No problem my lovely wife"

They both went home and rested tonight..they were too tired to do anything for a change. Maan was thinking about Geet's upcoming birthday..he wanted to so something special involving him and her...it was her first birthday with him and he wanted to make it memorable one.

Geet had gone asleep...he smiled at her beauty and thought that she was so beautiful that any guy would want to hit on her...he touched her face and felt lucky that he had a gorgeous wife who loved him unconditionally..he came close and kissed her lips...and hugged her and went to sleep contently.

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Edited by Mahi-Maan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zahra15

is it anything to ask dear?????? we love both u n your writing style.........which leaves us ☺️



Awwwwwwwwwwwwww bless and thank you mwuahhhhhhhhhhh🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part.......geet ki bhi kya kya cravings hoti hain..........maan is cho chweeeeet n amazing hubby....the way he told off that man in attitude was superb......continue soon.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan angrily came charging with jealousy
"Ye mere sath hain...Maan Singh Khurana ke sath...naam toh suna hi hoga?" he said with great attitude..Geet smiled he looked so sexy when angry☺️
"Maan Singh Khurana the business tycoon?...acha toh aap isse yaha lai hain I must say kiya cheez ko aapne chuna hain time pass ke liye" he said in a pervy way
"Shut up...ye meri biwi hain Geet..aur mere bacho ki maa banane wali hain...agar khair chahte ho toh niklo yaha se..abhi"
The guy seeing his anger quickly ran😆

wow love that scene so cute fabulous update yu we love what yu give us it make our mind in peace & enjoy the naughty or the hot scene yu better ask again okay😈 we luv yu sweety pie thanks pm pls cont soonnnnnnnnn more more naughty ha ha ha ha
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome..........geet and her cravings.......by god.........bichara maan 😆...... its so emotional blackmailing ........... the guy was hitting on geet😆.........maan is sweet when he said she is his wife n soon to be mother of his kids...... (btw one question: geet doesnt have belly bump yet in this FF ...just like show right?)
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Posted: 14 years ago
looooved it hun! especially the cravings part:p and the Maan getting angry with the guy! 😊

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