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Posted: 14 years ago
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sry to keep u all waiting but i am back with the update 😊
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Chapter-4

"A star shone at the hour of their meeting"

Geet'sflight was about to land in few minutes she was tired exhausted by the long journey her whole life was about to change and she felt it somewhere in her heart she had too many anticipations , too many questions she was not certain about anything how will I handle everything will I be able to fulfil my dad's dream.. she was still trying to figure out the questions in her mind when the announcement was made.....

The Air India flight would be landing in Delhi soon....

Geet came out of her thoughts mentally preparing herself to face a completely new world..

Maan

It has been an hour since he has been waiting for the US flight to land, he was getting restless why the hell is this flight is so late he kept on thinking about Geet's voice and made mental picture of her face a thousand times..should i get her some flowers after all she is coming to India for first time khali haat receive karunga toh kya sochegi....

He gets some white tulips for her and was hoping that she likes them but what if she don't ahmm Maan stupid stop acting like a teenager she is Varun uncles daughter not Your girlfriend that ur being so restless ..and remember you are The Maan singh khurrana smiles

He was lost in his own world when he hears the announcement.........

"The Air India Flight Ic 632 has landed on the Delhi airport"

A smile fluttered on his face (Maan why the hell you are acting like an idiot don't smile be normal and receive her but how will i recognise her hits his head

Geet walks out of the baggage section she was dragging the trolly with her little confused about where to go and her eyes searched for Maan a guy whose face she has never seen but still has started trusting him she didn't knew how to find him when her phone rang...

Geet tum bahar aa gayi ho

(geet was little startled but she screamed Maan out of joy finding peace at last that he came and there was someone out here waiting for her)

Geet replied back-Ji Maan mein bahar hi hoo par kuch samajh nahi aa raha ki kaha jao...(looks around)

Maan-Geet tum phikr matt karo mein hoon yahan bas ye batao tum ho kaha maine tumhe dhoond lunga....

(She smiles a little)Geet looks around and see a coffee house around 'Maan mein costa coffee house ke bahar hoo........

Maan looks around and found Costa coffee house just steps away he walks towards the coffee house but suddenly stops....stops to see the most beautiful thing his eyes has ever seen he was frozen the time has stopped..................

Was she real or was is just another dream which he was seeing from his open eyes her innocent face her velvety skin her smooth curves ohh can this be really true ...he so wanted to run towards her hold her face in his hand to see how can this be true how can someone be so beautiful that even the angels of heaven would sigh...he was still looking at her mesmerized when she saw him and softly called Maan...it was then when he came out in reality her voice brought him back to the world but he was still unable to decide what was more beautiful his dream or this reality and for the first time in life he liked the reality more than anything else..

Hmm how was it the next part will be the continuation guys aakhir humare Geet ko bhi toh Maan ko dekh ke kuch hua hoga

Precap-their first meet continues
Thank you guys for all the likes and comment really means alot....😊😊😊 Hope u like this update too do hit the like button 😆 and leave the comments guys
Edited by ayu14 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it .......... it was awesome cont soon ....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome...maan already likes geet b4 even knowing who she is...continue soon.....wanna no geet's views......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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luved it..
aww for maan love at first sight..
4 geet have to know?
so update soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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not fair yu left cliff hanger pls update next pls pls pls super fascinating update soonnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sry to keep u all waiting.... 😔 My laptop had some problems
Will be updating it in half an hour promise
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharmake11

<font color="#000066">not fair yu left cliff hanger

</div>pls update next pls pls
pls super fascinating
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update soonnnnnnnnn</font>



Haha I am glad u are enjoying it sharmake will be updating soon hehe 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter-5

Their first meet continues...

Geet saw someone she hoped he was Maan she analysed him head to toe he was tall, handsome and his eyes were so deep and silent, there was lot more in it which she couldn't understand...her eyes travelled from his forehead to his eyes then to his nose which carried his little attitude...she smiled a little moving her gaze from his nose to his lips...oh his lips which were so finely carved her eyes couldn't move away from them his face his eyes his lips everything was so serene and calm silence stayed at his face... she could look at them forever..when someone said to her madam thoda side ho jaiye plz suddenly a sense of realisation hit her head and her mind screamed Geet ye kya kar rahi hai tu...Geet came back to her senses she was about to move her eyes away when she realised even he was looking at him continously....his dark eyes penetrating into her heart his every gaze burning her soul...she was nervous and embarrassed but she thought for a minute and two should I ask him is he here for me...is he Maan...but nevertheless she gathered little strength to ask him and moved little forward and her lips swiftly and softly said Maan..........

(So now both maan and geet are back to their senses haha aisa ho sakta hai kya😆😆😆)

Maan was back in his senses (what the hell was I doing) he slowly moves towards her(his head and heart not at all following his command, while his head said not to stare at her...his heart couldn't stop looking at her) at last he tries moving his gaze off her heavenly face and be normal and not a jerk staring at her...

Maan- Geet...Geet Seth is that right..

Geet-nodes her head for a yes (little nervous, but then.....)

she sees the bouquet of white tulips in his hands.....aaaaaahmm is that for me (she had a shine on her face and happiness was visible in her voice....she loved flowers especially white..it was her favourite)

Maan was lost again in her beautiful voice he looked in her eyes..eyes that were so innocent...eyes who has so much purity and so many emotions that he wanted to just look at it forever...she shied and moved her eyes down to break their eye lock...

Maan was little embarrassed he should not look at her these ways...... he hesitatingly presents the bouquet to her and before she can say something he adds ye dadi ne bheja hai...she took the bouquet from his hand and admired them Maan tried hard not staring at her but he couldn't help it out...(poor maan )

Maan was irritated at his own behaviour stop staring you Idiot Kya sochegi woh...

Maan turns away and suddenly says in a stern voice-Geet humein ghar chalna chahiye tum thak gayi hogi itni lambi flight ke baad aur dadi ma bhi tumhari intezaar kar rahi hain

Geet little startled by his behaviour (inhe kya hua)-Ji Maan chaliye...

Maan walks ahead taking the trolley from her and not looking back..He was really feeling like an idiot why am I so attracted towards her...Maan singh khurrana has never stared at a girl like that so what was so special about her...he comes out of his thoughts..Geet car bas thodi hii durr hai,tum yahi ruko mein car leke aata hoon...he was waiting for her reply but she didn't answer...Geet he turns back, she was not there he was shocked kaha gayi abhi toh yahi thi..Geettttt

Geet Geet he runs back madly to find her he wen back near the coffee shop he searched all the airport...kaha chali gayi...bangs his fist in anger on the wall..

Where can she be How can I be so irresponsible he hated himself Geet...Kaha hogi woh...

he turned back restlessly and as he was about to go...he found her sitting on a bench

He ran towards her Geett..He was happy to see her fine to see her safe and right infront of his eyes but then his happiness turned out in anger what the hell she is sitting here does she realise how worried I was for Her.........

Geet...Geet(in an angry tone) tum yahan ho pata hai mein kitna darr gaya tha..tum hai andaza bhi hai how worried I was, ye America nahi India hai aur tum...tum yahan nayi ho tumhe mere saath chalna chahiye naki iss tarhaaaa..(he couldn't complete his sentence)

She moved her head up and saw him through teary eyes...(Maan was hurt to see her cry those beautiful eyes had tears in it and he was the reason he regretted shouting at her...)

main toh aapke saath hii chal rahi thi aap hi aage chale gaye maine bahut dhoonda aapko par (a tear escaped her eyes again,she tried to hold her tears back )parr... phir mujhe samajh nahi aaya ki mein kya karu iss liye mein yahan beth gayi..

Maan hated himself for making her cry he was so lost in his own world ki realise hii nahi kara kab wo aage aa gaya aur wo ppeche chut gayi..he cursed himself for troubling her..her tears were hurting him too much...

His cellphone rang and he came back from his thoughts..(picks up the call)Hello

Daadi-Maan beta aap airport pahuch gaye na

Maan-Ji dadi,aur Geet bhi mil gayi hai

Daadi-Mil gayi hai?Wo kahi kho gayi thi kya beta

Maan-nahii dadi mera matlab hai wo mere saath hai,hum ghar aa rahe hai bas thodi der aur .....(cuts the call)

He turns to look towards Geet who was still trying to fight back her tears

He takes his handkerchief out and gives it to her aasoon poch lo please...

Geet looks at him and then his hand

And takes the handkerchief from his hand and wipes her tears away slowly

She almost whisper to him...par aap promise kariye Maan aap ab mujhe akela nahi chodengey(she was scared the moment he disappeard right infront of her eyes all of a sudden...the world seemed so horrible to her so unfamiliar.. he was the only one she knew and relied on, in this new place)

Maan was touched by her words he wanted to hug her at that very moment and assure her that he will never do it again and be there for her she has nothing to scare but..instead he said just said haan promise and unconciously offered her his hand

She looked at him and then his hand she hesitated a bit but took it later and a smile fluttered on her face

She felt safe to have him back by his side...

thank you she said to him as he looked back on her and just said a hmmm.......

Precap -On their way to khurrana mansion..but why are Geet and Maan not talking😕hmm..

thank you all for all the likes and comments 🤗🤗🤗love u all...plz keep on commenting and do hit the like button guys 😉...
Edited by ayu14 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update
enjoyed it😊
do continue soon

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