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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

<font color="#0000cc">wow Kashish she so naughty</font>

</div><font color="#0000cc">she love to tease her brother</font>
<font color="#0000cc">they have great bond</font>
<font color="#0000cc">oh wish i heard brother
amazing update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn
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Haha I knw kashish is naughty but that's all a brother and sister relation is all about
Nd trust me sharmake at times these brothers can be real pain 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Awww Ayu such a lovely update. Very well written.
Haayee Maan to fida hogaya :D
Kashish really loves teasing Maan hehe. Poor him she doesnt even misses one chance for pulling his leg.
Love the senty hug between geet dadima and kashish.
Wah Maan all sexy. Geet all hotty. Kya baat hai.
Chalo Geet inka milaan kardo. ;)
Cant wait for the dance ;)
Do update soon please.
Love
Humera 🤗


Thank u
Kashish is a naughty brat 😆
I am glad u liked it yaar nd dnt worry geet maan Milan will soon come
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy

Awesomeeeee update
loved it
amazing part
awhh i love kashish maan bond
hehe its soo cute
and kashish is soo naughty
lovely maaneet scenes
cant wait for dance seq
update soon
thankz


Glad u all like kashish and maan bonding so much 😆
Thank u for such lovely comment love u all
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing ff 👏...
add me plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello everyone I am back with the update but really sorry for delaying it so much..........was stuck with some work
Edited by ayu14 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😳😆Chapter-14
The Party continues
She walks in beauty ,Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies; And all thats best of dark and bright Meet in her aspect and her eyes.
Maan was obviously mesmerized by Geet despite his continuous efforts for not falling for her he was actually falling for her though his head denied it his heart still said she is the one and Maan wanted to hear this time of his heart...
He saw Geet talking and chatting with people far away her hair was open and the the air was playing with them caressing her cheeks she was trying to put them back but naughty breeze of air teased her to the core
He was watching everything in amusement the way she talks the way her eyes dances when she is not interested in the talks how at times she uses her hand to explain things and that smile which flutters at her face when something funny happens...uff
He was happy he started moving towards Geet when he saw Dev walking towards Geet too something changed when he saw him...something burned in his heart
He was his friend and he knew him from a long time but somewhere in his heart he didn't liked his closeness with Geet he was worried about something he didn't knew what
What was he worried about he thought Dev is his friend he trusts him but was it Geet he was afraid of loosing he sees them chatting giggling enjoying
Why why can't I bear her talking to someone else...may be she likes him this thought burned him...he had pain and anger in his eyes with the very thought....
He just grabbed a drink and gulped it down his throat in one go
..and the another one after finishing it
Geet was talking to Dev but her eyes were searching for Maan where is he she thought she scanned the room ones but didn't find him she was disappointed did he left she thought with heavy heart but that was when she saw him sitting at the bar she was happy for a second but the very second moment she was worried why was he drinking she saw his troubled face and then the empty glasses of the drinks oh god he already has had 4 drinks
Geet Geet...Dev shouted trying to get her attention towards him
Kaha kho gayi tum
Geet smiled ahh kahi nahi dev wo bas yun hi
Acha he said I asked u something
Hmm kya (her eyes were still on maan she was still thinking what was wrong )
Geet I asked can I have the pleasure of a dance with you
Geet was still not hearing she was only worried about Maan
Abhi nahi Dev thodi der mein...I need to talk to Maan (she left him there as her steps took her towards Maan)
Dev was fumming in anger now
Geet-Maan ye kya ho raha hai(in an authoritative voice)
Maan(was little high now)-hmm Geet tum ho hmm wahi mein sochu kis ki himmat ki Maan (he tries to get up from the seat but looses his balance )
Geet helps him to stand straight
Maan-hmm Maan singh khurrana se koi aise baat nahi kar sakta samjhi tum
Geet(still holding his hand so that he does not fall)-hmm samjhi
Maan(smiles)-Geet koi mujhse aise baat nahi kar sakta siwa tumare (he pulls her cheek softly)because you are sweet😆😆
Geet(blushed)-Maan ye tum kya keh rahe ho...you have lost it completely...chalo yaha se i will take you to your room
Maan-nahi...pehle dance with me..
Geet-kyaaaa she was surprised Maan singh khurranna is asking her for a dance (he has definitely lost it she thought)
Maan-pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee (he said that so sweetly that Geet literally melted )😳
Geet-no (she knew he was drunk)😭
Maan-kyu
Geet-because you are drunk Mr.khurrana and aap apne paroon pe toh thik se khade nahi ho pare hai how will you dance (she said that to him making a baby face) kabhi aur....
She turned back so that she can call some waiter to help her get him upstairs but before she could do that she felt Maan's arm around her waist he turned her in such a force that she landed on his chest her hair was covering her face...
Maan tries to put her hair behind her ear with his finger but while doing it his hand touched her cheeks and as his fingers tucked them at the back he touched her ear too her skin was smooth like a marble and the very feel of her skin against his hand was turning him mad he wanted it more he wanted to touch her face her eyes her nose her lips everything......
Geet was not better than him she shivered at his touch feeling his hands on her skin he was so gentle and his touch so intoxicating she craved for more
The music slowly fills in the atmosphere..........
Maan takes Geet to the dance floor as the light goes dim
He starts moving slowly and holds her by her waist and pulls her towards him and takes her hand in his left hand
(sholon si sholo si teri aankho ki ye roshini kis ke liye hai kis ke liye hai)
She smiles as he twirls her out and brings her in again (tera muskuraana nazar yun jhukana mere liye hai bas mere liye hai)
He looks at her intensely claiming her with his words
He dances with her passionately their salsa moves were so perfect and exotic everyone was looking how graceful there moves were
He touches her back tracing his way to back of her neck when he bends her down his lips almost an inch further than hers it was impossible for him to hold back electricity flowing down their veins Geet felt his breath on her lips it was impossible for her she was feeling his passion his desire and she longed for it she closed her eyes when Maan brought her up again with a jerk
She opened her eyes when she saw Maan as he moved his hands away from her waist and took a step back
Geet immediately holds his hands (samjho mera jo ishaara hai jo bhi hai mera wo tumhara hai)she places his hand back on her waist(lehar mein jaise hoon khoi manzil toh hai tu kinara hai)
She steps towards him really close to him he places his hand on her back she says in his ear really softly(yeh meri adayaein yeh meri wafaein yeh meri adayaein yeh meri wafaein tujhko pata hai sabh tere liye hai) Maan was overwhelmed he hugged her tightly and Geet hugged him too they didn't knew what was happening but they were lost in there world The song ends up and that was when Geet came back to her senses she comes of the hug suddenly Maan was little surprised what happened that was when the light turned on again everyone was clapping applauding themThanks to the dim lights no one saw them hugging except one Dev who was red with anger he walks out of there When his phones ring again The same voice on the other side who called him in the office V-Hello DevDev-TumV-Haan maine Dev-Kaha na don't call me up I will call youV-Don't shout I am keep an eye on you, and I am not happy with your work.......I am not happy with their closeness Dev-I am tryingV-what trying I need results tum ek ladki ko bhi kabu main nahi kar sakte...Dev we need results do you get me Dev-was annoyed yes he said before his cut his phone
Precap-Maan confused is it love 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hayeee lovely update Ayu :D it was deffo worth the wait.
Very romantic. So well written.
Yaar who is stalking our poor geet trough dev :s
Great suspense :D
Cute precap

Dp update soon please ( of course when u are done with ur work ;) )

Love

Humera
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Hayeee lovely update Ayu :D it was deffo worth the wait.
Very romantic. So well written.
Yaar who is stalking our poor geet trough dev :s
Great suspense :D
Cute precap

Dp update soon please ( of course when u are done with ur work ;) )

Love

Humera

Thank u
Glad u liked it woha man ur replies really make me smile
will try to update soon 😊
Love
Ayu
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: princess_xaini

owsome update...
loved it...
cont. soon..

😊 Thank u
Love
Ayu
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Posted: 14 years ago
thx for the pm yaar....
nice update... cant wait for next.........................

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