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Posted: 14 years ago

OHH

Please I'm waiting uptade fast na :D
And remose to.. I love that also :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
u better remember last time....like u have to post update on next thread!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
yeah pls pls pls update remorse as well...!!!

and if u have time then 2 parts....hehehehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
is it only me getting impatient here 🤣
P.S dont forget about remorse 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MsMovielover

is it only me getting impatient here 🤣
P.S dont forget about remorse 😆



no yaar..keep me as well in line...😉😆😆😆😆😆

yeah keya....remorse bhi jaldiiiii....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey how much time u gonna to take now...???
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara



no yaar..keep me as well in line...😆

yeah keya....remorse bhi jaldiiiii....😊



thats good at least i'm not the only one 😆
ohh come on keya you are making us mad 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara

hey how much time u gonna to take now...???

Arre...yaar...giv d updater breathing time atleast....😆😆😆😆😆😆..
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Posted: 14 years ago




***PARADOX***
Concept 1
part 29




The whole day maan spend with Geet. He dropped shila home later on and took geet out. She was lost. Maan parked the car somewhere ad she crawled in maans arm. Sleeping... While maan stroked her hair. He felt so safe with her in his arm. She was still in shock. To many thing happened. Psychologist strongly advised her to stay way from all this! The atmosphere. She needs a different surrounding. Maan was worried sick! Somewhere it was him as well... He done something that he shouldn't have. He shouldn't have!!!!!!!!

Maan walks in along with geet at 8pm. Everyone was having dinner. Both joined. Geet sat next to maan near Darji. She plaid with her food for while but started to eat when maan snapped at her. Shila was fine getting better. But Geet always slow... Specially in emotional and mental way... If something effects her it takes her forever to overcome it... Avantika noticed maans worry along with others!! Not understanding why that might be.... But of course both maan & Geet knew... There are more then that sams incident!

Geet staid for sleep over. She slept in shilas room. Maan hopped that will cheer her up a bit....

Maan walked down to the living room at 11pm after Geet went to bed. Finding sam sitting there. He apologized and was about to leave when sam asked him to join.
Maan smiles and starts to watch the telly.
Sam- thanks maan for everything.
Maan- it's ok! I hope you are alright here.
Sam- never better. She smiles.
Maan- for get everything & start a new life.
Sam- I will try.
Maan- why don't you join university again! Then start working for khurana. This will help you to over power everything.
Sam- I will think about it.
Maan nodes with a smile & goes back to the telly.
Sam- is Geet alright?
Maan- no! She is not reacting to anything.... She needs change of environment! Darji was telling me to send her to boarding school to UK! But I don't want that.
Sam- why? It will be good for her.
Maan- it's too far!
Sam was confused.
Sam- umm...
Maan- anyway. I will take a leave. I have uni 2 Moro.
Sam smiles....

Few weeks have passed. Geet started to come back to normal. Which was a good news for maan because then Geet don't have to travel way from him. She could stay here. Close to him. He started to spend more time with geet... Maybe somewhere this was the best act.
It's maans 20th birthday. He planned the whole day with Geet. Geet sat on maans lap. Relaxed as she took out his gift. Both opens it together... It was rolex new watch. Special edition! Maan had collection... But this one was the best... Its from his Geet.
Maan- who have brought that?
Geet- I have brought it. She looks at him confusingly...
Maan- and who's card you have used? Maan asked questioningly!
Geet- umm... Well! She had a cheeky smile.... You see other day you left your wallet home... So me and shila decided to pay the shopping centre visit. She smirks.
Maan makes a false angry face- basically you brought gift for me with my money.
Geet nodes happily. Maan bursts out in laugh.
Geet- helps to when I ask for your pine and you happily tell me. Maan laughs louder...
Maan- that's cheating.
Geet- I know. That's why I have brought you another gift. She smiles...
Maan- hmm....
Geet gives another rapping paper. This time Geet didn't take her eyes of his face... Gazing at just one thig.....

"Kiss me…"

Maans expression changed instantly. Since that day he haven't touched her properly. He let her happy but from distance.,. He did everything as possible but kept his most wanted desire in-depth....
Maan smile. Holds her cheek- no jane....
Geet looks at him- then let me!....
Maan- no... It's...
Geet- nothing will happen... Trust me....
Maan nodes for a no again but Geet doesn't listen. She cups his face & slowly nibbles his lips.... Exactly the way he have done. Maan tried to protest but failed.... Geet snakes her hand round his neck.... And pushes the set backwards... Maan was taken back a bit with her aggressiveness.... He licks his lips. Licking kissing. It was taking maan to the insanity... He tried to control but his hand unwillingly went round her waist.... Geet was confused as what to do further. The feeling maan have left in her that night was beyond her imagination. Something special. Something she couldn't explain which left her shaken... But it was sweet. It was special... She opens her mouth for maan to take the same step again... But he hesitated. He wasn't sure if this will leave her shaken again... Geet tried to understand his rejection... Must be because she was scared that day.... She took the first step to enter his mouth... To give him the feeling... She is alright... To give him confidence that he can carry on with his action... And that all maan needed. That's all he required to understand that his Geet is mature enough to Handel him..... Both twists round. Maan couldn't control anymore. The desire she was building up in him was too much to Handel. The love the care.... He was expressing all his worry in that one kiss... As they nibbled on one another lips... Playing with there tongue.... Drinking everything around.... Breathless. Something nun could express.... With time maan puts Pressure which Geet happily accepted. Enjoying. She bit his lips... Maan moaned. Geet smirks and started lick the blood off.... While non stop enjoying the texture of there newly found desire. Both gasped time to time for breaths but still didn't stop.... Geets hand unwillingly went round maans back... Under his top feeling the flesh... While maans body started to rub against hers... Nothing to that high level but he was simply feeling her in his arm.... Feeling the love with in him... Making the physical of there appliance real... The love. The care....
It was almost a hour when both were disturb by a phone call.... Geet laid under maan flashed. Pink... As maan tried to lick all the saliva off but in return it made it wars....
Maan- hello!
Shila- bro! Everyone is waiting for you.
Maan- me?
Shila- yes! Your some weird friends is here! One of them names rubas another slent... Another maynk! You have some business- party to attend. So hurry up! & also uncle told you to be there sharp 10! You have 20 minute!
Maan closes his eyes! His hotel chain advertising party.
Geet dries his face with her duppata and then here's but it was pointless as maan starts the kiss all over again....
Another 30 minutes passed by.... He turned his phone off....
Geet- don't you want to go to the party?
Maan nodes for a no while kissing her cheek traveling his way down to her neck..... Geet closed her eyes with completely different feeling... Loving his lips....
Maan- I will go late....
Geet cups his face and starts to kiss him back…..


next- party with sam😲


hay you all… ty sooo much for all the lovely comments… :D i hope you like there second kiss😳

pls do leave me some comments and LIKE BUTTONS😳

thanks for all the love & support…

i havent PM anyone… bit busy… will try my best today…

hopefully free😭




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Posted: 14 years ago
hey watch out this as time pass...!!!

MANEET ROCKS!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SivddD2Zzv4

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