My Only Mistake! I'm A FEMALE (MG) #1 - Page 23

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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting for ur update yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey plz update the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazinggggggg update loved it and doo continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update .👍🏼
maan kay jawab deyga ha.pls cont soon.😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 7

Maan waited for Geet and her sibling to leave the temple premises once the trio was out of sight he banged his fist on the tree trunk and yelled his lungs out,
he was very ashamed of the fact that for money his step brother stooped so low not only he married an innocent girl but also consummated their marriage knowing very well that he will leave her the very next day,
how can some one be do heartless; and people said he was heartless,
Dev was always considered to be the soft boy one who can never hurt anyone, and what is this that he has done, not that he has not heard rumors about his passing affairs but then those girls knew who he was,
and here the situation is more complicated even his own wife allowed him to OMG NT you should be ashamed and Pammi Maa and Kamya these 3 women together helped this jerk to ruin a life.

Now what will I do? I had no intention of marrying her, or rather anyone,

and if I say no then her family will go for another groom hunt and she again has to go through this torture just because of my stupid Khurana sibling;
now I know why Dada ji kept these siblings of mine out of his will, he was never in favor of papa's second marriage and hated the 3 children born out of this alliance;
he probably hated Kamya the most as she was not even a Khurana and forced papa to never adopt her; these women are so cruel, spine less creatures;
it is truly said that woman is the greatest enemy of a woman.

He returned to his refugee in a sore mind, and to his shock; who was waiting for him?

His DM, oh! God, how bad the luck I have today?
While Maan was still in his thought process and delayed his journey back to his adobe, Dadi had come;
she had left the moment she received Munshi ji' s call.

By the time Maan was back she gathered all the information known by the elderly man;

she was waiting for her dearest grand son for confrontation.
Maan had never thought that DM would ever pay him a visit; and that too without his knowledge; he went to her and touched her feet, and

M: hello DM, for what do I owe this surprise visit for?

DM: hello Maan, can't I come to meet my grandson who for months does not feel like showing his face to his poor old Dadi?
M: DM you know very well that it was your decision to shun me out, it was you who threw me out of the Mansion after I threw Dev.
DM: but you still did not leave the premises, you still lived in the out house
M: DM you know very well, that I can never turn away from my responsibilities and I can never leave you alone in that huge premises where one can be easily get lost.
DM: then what are you doing here? As far as I know you are here in this small town for last 20 or so days, of course away from the Khurana estate
M: yes, I very well know but people around don't know about my absence and they still feel that I ma there and even if I am not there I can come any day, and that fear is enough to keep the unwanted goons away.
DM: you have quite a way to argue your point and its pointless to argue with you, you never seem to mind arguments
M: it is you who started the whole scene, forget it, have you had
dinner
DM: no, were waiting for you
M: ok, let me arrange
DM: I have asked M ji he will be coming any time
Soon dinner was served and the two had their dinner while M ji
left knowing that this meal will be followed by heated discussion
M: DM now you please take rest M ji has arranged your luggage in the room on extreme left, good night
DM: not so soon Maan, I am here to discuss some serious issue with you
M: now, what have I done? (Frustrated, he just wanted to have some peace he was very disturbed by the way the things turned out)
DM: what is all this that I get to hear?
M: now, what have you heard? (God only knows what all things she gets to know and how?)
DM: you went to some Handa's to see their girl for marriage purpose
M (surprised): who told you this crap?
DM: it's none of your concern; the thing is did you or did you not
M: yes, I went to the Handa's, in fact I have been going to their house quite often in these last few days, but it has nothing to do with marriage and all, so please don't get ideas.
DM: why have you been going to their house? To meet their daughter Geet
M (damn am sure M ji spilled the beans): yes to meet Geet, that's true but not for the reason you think
DM: I did not get it
M: DM, I have purchased a land through an agent that officially belongs to Geet, and the papers that the agent gave us were not complete so I have to go their to take her signature on the documents
DM: it could have been done in just one meeting
M: yes only if she co-operated
DM: why did she not co-operate, (doubting Maan)
M: not only she but all those Handa's denied selling the land and at the same time confirmed that the papers we have are authentic
DM: explain (sternly)
M: some one sold the land on Geet's behalf never informing her or her family
DM: and she willingly signed the documents and gave them power to sell the land don't you think this is a story a rubbish plot from some detective novel
M (now lost his temper, he was frustrated already and now DM was doubting his intentions and at the same time doubting the integrity of Geet and he did not know why but he did not like it): do you want to know who sold that land and how that person took her signatures
DM: of course
M: I am warning you DM you will not be able to stand the truth that is already killing me, that is making me feel guilty in spite of the fact that I have done nothing wrong
DM: don't talk in riddles, truth is truth may be bitter but is still will be the truth
M: NT and Kamya sold that land to me through an agent
DM: impossible, they are in Canada, and why will they?
M: whether you like it or not it is the truth, and as to your other answer, NT asked Geet's sign on a blank paper
DM: and you want me to believe that this silly village girl agreed
M: yes, she agreed and those original property papers were given by Geet's grandfather to your lovely daughter in law Pammi as a marriage gift
DM: marriage gift?
M: yes, marriage gift, a gift by the parents of the bride to the parents of the groom
DM: groom?
M: yes, Dev
DM: Dev?
M: yes Dev married Geet just 12 days back
DM: what? But he is already married and why will he remarry he is happy with NT
M: for money, DM, money
DM: I don't believe
M: you only said truth remains truth; Dev sold her land to me for
2 crores and also sold her jewels that were weighing 900 grams genuine gold antique ones; the one that passes from one generation to the other KHANDANI ZEWAR!
DM: this can't be true
M: there's more he drugged her and left her on the Delhi airport from where the police took her and she was there for more than 24 hrs till her family came to her rescue.
DM: this
M: one more thing Dev did with her all the marriage rituals even the SR.
DM (horrified): say, Maan say all this is not true
M: and you know DM how old this Geet is?
DM: 20-21
M: no, just passed her 12th she's only 18
DM: Oh! God
M: and DM do you know her result she scored 93.6%, she must be a good student and she wanted to become an interior designer, now what will happen to her? Have you ever thought she does not even realize that after that one night she could have conceived?
DM: no, this can't happen
M: but I am pretty sure that she is pregnant
DM: how can you say?
M: I have met her before and these last days I found her very pale, and she fainted the other day, I am pretty sure
DM: how can you know the signs? (Stammering)
M: all were same as when Sameera was pregnant she showed all these signs, and she also said that it happens in early days, and these are the signs that warn that a new life is beginning in your body
DM holds her head: Maan I want to meet her
so now Maan told every thing even the fact that Dev and NT are behind all this to Dadi ....
he also is sure that Geet can be pregnant....
so what do you think will happen?
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Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yeyyy...1st one....🥳
the story is getting interesting...as there is not a soul left to know the truth...
except for dev n co-conspirers who dont know that maan n dm know...
seems like u took care of everything in the early stages....
i just hope maan doesnt marry her for the sake of saving her...coz now dm also knows...
but geet's family is still unaware of maan being dev's brother...mmm..
n now dm wants to meets them...meet geet...wonder what will happen...
waiting for the next part...


P.S. if u r thinking of updating "we can be best" let me know...i wanna complete a hatrick..being the 1st in all to comment....😃😆
Edited by jyoti_l - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update shruthi.....
me wanting for more😭😭😭

now may be dm talks to geet..tells maan's past to her 😆😆😆😆 and get both of them married
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
maan will marry geet forsure!
con't soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeeeeeeee
i think dadi will go n tell yes on behalf of maan for d marriage of geet n maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
Now that was amazing shruti luved the way u handle it wish the serial could also do something like this

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