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divan_arshi

@divan_arshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Hey!

jst read ur story... really liked d way u write..

i m glued... felt every emotion... felt like a movie running in front of my eyes..

plz add me in ur PM list

Thanks for writing😊

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sajniksgian

@sajniksgian

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#172

Omg..what a wonderful writer u are...u made me speechless yaar...

the part is awsome...and the way u described each and every feeling and sensation is just mind blowing...

pls update soon...Thanx for PM...

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tehzeeb

@tehzeebkhan

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Ridaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa🤗🤗 KaSH jhappi for u sweety awwww Thank you so much n sorry for ghayybing it won't happened again.

Now for the writing i honestly don't have words to describe or to tell u how good your FF is and how good writer you are.....😊

Loved it i read the part last night on my I Pad thats why didn't comment,i juzz came online from my laptop to specially comment here and Rida plz plz plz plz plz its a die hard request plz try to write more than once a week plz plz .

Loved the way u described all the charactrs, the bond between 3 brothers and what 3 girls share with eachother is amazing.Part was so hot and scene was set romanticly.Sid seems like a nice guy juzz pair him up with Ridhima,Atul😡 left anjali na after sleeping with her jerk,but now he realised what he lost ab samaj mai ayy ga bachoo😛.

Armaan pehli nazar mai hi pagal hou gaya 😉yeh tuo hona hi tha Shilpa hai hi asi g😊☺️😳

Rida seriously now all week the story will be revolving around my head n trust me i won't be able to concentrate on anything other than thinking what will happen next so plz plz plz try to write the next part as soon as possible. plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon a tight hug🤗🤗

Love you Tehzeeb 😊

Edited by tehzeebkhan - 14 years ago

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sheena_123

@sheena_123

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#174

This update was so good😊

I realli liked their first meeting and it was breath taking! Now no one can stop Armaan from making Shilpa his and only his!😳❤️

Ironically, Armaan did not believe in love as he presumed these emotions to be crap, well well now Shilpa is here and her beauty and innocence will make him fall in love with her😉😳

Overall, your writing is great and the way you explained the emotions and feelings of Armaan and what he was experiencing at that moment when he saw her was realli good!😊

Great Job!👏

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unknown

@Rapunzzel

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#175

hey ridaaaaaaaaaaaaa update sooooooooooooooon

waiting 😍

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madhuri

@soniaraheja

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#176

omg.......part was just amazing cant describe into words yaa...........was totally into ARSH la la land........😍 😍 😍 .*sigh* now hve to wait for next part.......but plzzz try to update soon.....cant wait for next part.............

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Neha

@neha-rockss

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#177

halwuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
wen r u updating next?????
i ll b leavng soon..........wanna resd d update nd den go!!!!!!!!!!!!
wen wen wen u hav left it at such a breathtaking spot😔