Maaneet OS - A Promise Well Kept - Page 11

I am overwhelmed by the emotions that you evoked in me...

Usually, I would complain after reading a sad OS, and this was far beyond sad...it was not sad, it was a classic!

I don't remember crying so much ever! Ever!

I mean, I was literally bawling...the love, the pain, it was all so deep, so touching!

the pain, the helplessness that Maan felt with just a few hours of his life were left...the silent prayers, the desperate attempts, his sincere wish to be there...to be able to assure the love of his life that he will be there, in person...

my eyes are still stinging with the unshed tears, THIS IS FOR SURE THE MOST TOUCHING OS I HVE READ TILL DATE, alongside one by Jaz!

I am still trying to overcome the pain...the pain of loss...but more than the sadness, this was about LOVE...about FAITH...about the love after life...the love thats TRULY ETERNAL, the love that knows no boundaries...NOT EVEN THOSE OF DEATH...

You have rendered me speechless, yet so full of emotions that i want to go on and on!

I take a bow dear!

wrote this in a different sense somewhere, but here, it truly represents the turmoil that you have evocked in me...

When the heart is too chocked to sway...

Originally posted by: princess163

I am overwhelmed by the emotions that you evoked in me...

Usually, I would complain after reading a sad OS, and this was far beyond sad...it was not sad, it was a classic!

I don't remember crying so much ever! Ever!

I mean, I was literally bawling...the love, the pain, it was all so deep, so touching!

the pain, the helplessness that Maan felt with just a few hours of his life were left...the silent prayers, the desperate attempts, his sincere wish to be there...to be able to assure the love of his life that he will be there, in person...

my eyes are still stinging with the unshed tears, THIS IS FOR SURE THE MOST TOUCHING OS I HVE READ TILL DATE, alongside one by Jaz!

I am still trying to overcome the pain...the pain of loss...but more than the sadness, this was about LOVE...about FAITH...about the love after life...the love thats TRULY ETERNAL, the love that knows no boundaries...NOT EVEN THOSE OF DEATH...

You have rendered me speechless, yet so full of emotions that i want to go on and on!

I take a bow dear!

wrote this in a different sense somewhere, but here, it truly represents the turmoil that you have evocked in me...

When the heart is too chocked to sway...

there is nothing more i can say...

youhave truly managed to portray...

LOVE ALWAYS FINDS ITS WAY!

Swati

Originally posted by: princess163

I am overwhelmed by the emotions that you evoked in me...

Usually, I would complain after reading a sad OS, and this was far beyond sad...it was not sad, it was a classic!

I don't remember crying so much ever! Ever!

I mean, I was literally bawling...the love, the pain, it was all so deep, so touching!

the pain, the helplessness that Maan felt with just a few hours of his life were left...the silent prayers, the desperate attempts, his sincere wish to be there...to be able to assure the love of his life that he will be there, in person...

my eyes are still stinging with the unshed tears, THIS IS FOR SURE THE MOST TOUCHING OS I HVE READ TILL DATE, alongside one by Jaz!

I am still trying to overcome the pain...the pain of loss...but more than the sadness, this was about LOVE...about FAITH...about the love after life...the love thats TRULY ETERNAL, the love that knows no boundaries...NOT EVEN THOSE OF DEATH...

You have rendered me speechless, yet so full of emotions that i want to go on and on!

I take a bow dear!

wrote this in a different sense somewhere, but here, it truly represents the turmoil that you have evocked in me...

When the heart is too chocked to sway...

there is nothing more i can say...

youhave truly managed to portray...

LOVE ALWAYS FINDS ITS WAY!

Swati

Originally posted by: maanddy

Woah ! Finally i manged to find time for this wonderful and out of this world comment, I've EVER received on my work ! 😳

Yes, this is my MOST FAV OS, i keep read it often ! And, trust me while writing this one, there was one single para, when i almost cried ! For your info, I do not cry much and i'm not like that at all !

But, i'm just speechless after reading your lovely comment ! I am so overwhelmed, i can't find proper words for it ! It's just amazing !

And, you touched the core of my OS ! What you said is exactly i wanted to convey through this ! Pure love and faith ! Nothing else ! 😊

I'm so sorry for your tears and once again, THANK YOU SO MUCH ! 🤗

Love you for loving my work ! 😆 ❤️

Maddy😊

BTW, did you read my comment(the one i edited just yesterday) below Unfinished Journey?

You might not like that😆it has COMPLAINTS...THREATS and what not!😉😆

Life ends but faith goes on''

People disappear but souls go on'.

Smiles fade but tears go on'.

Death remains, YET, Life goes on'.

When you left me, my life was gone;

Despite my promise, I couldn't move on!

Yet, you were always there, it was ME who was a moron,

You opened my wings, tugged me to fly on'

When people thought I was living a life,

I was only living my promise;

When everyone thought I was alone,

It was you who saved me from turning into a stone!

Your faith was my fuel'..

OUR dreams were my aim''

Our kids were my strength'.

When I dared to move again!

Today when I see tem happy,

The tears still roll on'.

Yes, a promise has been kept well,

Its time for us(u and me) to go on''..

Originally posted by: princess163

Well, i had hoped to do a better job, but this is what I wrote...

It would be wrong to call it poem, coz i am nowhere close to a poetess😆

Its just that I have written some for muskanp's ffs coz they really really affect me(as in, i keep thinking abt them!), and there people started calling them poems, for me, they are still just creations...maybe my outbursts...when i think too much abt a partucular update/ff then this is how it comes out! And,of course, I write for my own SS😳

well, here it is,do tell me how u found it, and please please be honest!😃

THE PROMISE WELL KEPT...

Life ends but faith goes on''

People disappear but souls go on'.

Smiles fade but tears go on'.

Death remains, YET, Life goes on'.

When you left me, my life was gone;

Despite my promise, I couldn't move on!

Yet, you were always there, it was ME who was a moron,

You opened my wings, tugged me to fly on'

When people thought I was living a life,

I was only living my promise;

When everyone thought I was alone,

It was you who saved me from turning into a stone!

Your faith was my fuel'..

OUR dreams were my aim''

Our kids were my strength'.

When I dared to move again!

Today when I see tem happy,

The tears still roll on'.

Yes, a promise has been kept well,

Its time for us(u and me) to go on''..

love

Swati😃

Originally posted by: maanddy

PERFECT ! Just one word for this ! 👏

Loved it and thank you so much for sharing it with me ! I loved that so much ! 😳

Thank you babes ! 🤗

And, now that you have just stunned me ! From now on, if i will ever get problem in my work for titles or poems or anything like this kind of 'creation' as you mentioned ! I will for sure ask you and take your help !

I hope you won't mind ! 😊

Oh yes ! I wanted to tell you before but i forgot, regarding your complaints, that thank god you have not read my other SS - Kiss the 'Knight' Goodbye. It is my favorite and if you really hate sad ones, then i would prefer you to avoid it ! But, i still think that after A Promise...My most fav is Kiss the Knight...They both are like my babies...I just love reading them, time and time again !

Love,

Maddy

And the help part

Hahahahaha...would be glad to help you in any possible way, yoi don't need to ask, but, I do seriously doubt my ability to do that!😆