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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 5-

Kashsih's house-

Sujal goes inside and all the girls are shocked to see him there…

Sujal pointing towards the girl: This is not Kashish

Tulsi: What are you saying?

Sujal: I don't know who she is but she is definitely not Kashish…

Tulsi: I know she is Kashish

Sujal: fine…let's left her dupatta…

They do that and Sujal is shocked to see Kashish there…

Kashish gives him an evil smile…

Tulsi: Sujal…isn't she Kashish?

Sujal embarrassed: yes

Daksha: Sujal beta if you're pining so much to see Kashish…you don't need to lie…you could have told us…

Sujal: yes mom

Tulsi: ok beta… go now

Sujal leaves…

When everyone starts telling Kashish you're so lucky to have a husband like Sujal who loves you so much…Kashish thinking yeah right…The professional henna people put Mehndi on her…When Sanjana comes to her…

Sanjana: I can't believe it…I thought we would be in trouble

Kashish: Thank God…you picked up the phone I was so freaked out about what Sujal might do…

~Flashback~

Sanjana picks the phone and talks to Kashish…Sanjana excuses herself and goes to Kashsih's room while Kashish is already there…Kashish changes into her clothes and they both quickly go down there…

Now-

Then Tulsi comes to Kashish…

Tulsi looks at Kashish and starts to cry…

Kashish: mom why are you crying?

Tulsi: I just realized you're gonna leave us…

Kashish: mom I'm not leaving you…I'll come everyday…

Tulsi: beta everything changes after marriage…

Kashish: mom nothing is gonna change…

Now for the first time Kashish had realized that she was gonna leave her family…her house where she grew up…she was remembering her childhood and started crying too…while everyone else was dancing and singing…

~Wedding Day~

The Sinha's house was filled with relatives and friends…everybody was busy getting dressed…Tulsi went into Kashsih's room to wake her up…she saw her sleeping peacefully and couldn't wake her up…Just then Mihir came in there and they both were looking at their daughter who will leave them in a while…Kashish woke up and saw her parents looking at her…

Kashish: Mom, dad what are you guys looking at me like that?

Tulsi starts crying and hugs Mihir…

Mihir: we were just thinking how much our little daughter has grown up…

Kashish gets up and hugs them…they have a group hug…

Kashish: I love you guys a lot…

Sanjana enters the room screaming: Kashish…

Everybody parts away…

Sanjana: sorry…

Tulsi and Mihir: we should go…

Sanjana: change quickly we need to go to the salon to get your make-up done…

Kashish: I'm going but first can you make me some coffee…

Sanjana: sure…

Salon-

Kashish is sitting on the chair while the beautician is doing her make-up…

Beautician: B

B: so are you excited to get married?

Kashish: it's fine…why don't you just concentrate on doing my make-up than talking

B: sure

Sanjana: are you ok Kashish?

Kashish: how do you think you would feel if you're getting married to the person you absolutely hate?

Sanjana: not good

Kashish: exactly that is how I feel…

Sanjana: you didn't listen to me when I said just don't do it…

Kashish: anyway I have decided not to let that bug me…

She thinks I'm gonna make his life a hell…he would regret ever getting married to me…

Sanjana just prays for the best…

~Beach~

They decided to have the wedding at the beach because they llive In CA... Everyone is there and they are waiting for the bride to appear…Kashish enters wearing this amazing Ghagra, choli and dupatta in silk tissue, all embellished with heavy antique zardozi and diamant embroidery

and goes up to Sujal who is wearing
a Jodhpuri suit with zardozi embroidery, worn with a brocade vest with paisley motifs

she sits next to him on the mandap…the priest starts reading the mantras…Kashsih's parents tie the knot…Both Kashish and Sujal stand up to do the seven rounds around the fire…while the rounds are happening all Kashish can think about is how she's ruining her life because of Sujal so now she's gonna ruin his…Then Sujal takes the vermillion and puts it on Kashsih's mang then he takes the mangalsutar and ties it…Sujal gives her an evil smirk and Kashish returns it…Sujal whispers to Kashish " now you're one step closer to hell."

~Wedding Reception~
It is held @ this hotel...

This is how the reception area looks:

Kashish is wearing this red georgette saree with beautiful sequins work and heavy work blouse,which she looks amazing in

while Sujal is wearing this
Jodhpuri suit worn with a brocade vest highlighted with sequins

Everyone is already inside waiting for the bride and groom to appear together…Sujal and Kashish enter together and everyone applauds…

They cut their wedding cake and Sujal is forced to give Kashish a piece of it…Kashish eats it and does the same to Sujal…Everyone is thinking they are such a cute couple…Now they wanted them to dance together…so Sujal takes Kashish in his arms to the dance floor…the spotlight is on them…Sujal puts his hands around Kashish's waist while Kashish puts her arms around his neck…the song Do Dil From Pardes comes on…

[Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo

Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo Do Dill Mile Rahe Hain Magar Chupke Chupke Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain Magar Chupke Chupke Sabko Ho Rahi Hai Haan Sabko Ho Rahi Hai Khabar Chupke Chupke Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain Magar Chupke Chupke Saanson Mein Badi Bekaraari Aankhon Mein Kai Rat Jage Kahin Kabhi Lag Jaaye Dil To Kahin Phir Dil Na Lage Apne Dil Mein Zara Thaam Loon Jaadu Ka Main Isay Naam Doon Jaadu Kar Raha Jaadu Kar Raha Hai Asar Chupke Chupke Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain Magar Chupke Chupke Aise Bhole Bankar Hai Baithe Jaise Koi Baat Nahin Sab Kuchh Nazar Aa Raha Hai Din Hai Ye Raat Nahin Kya Hai Kuchh Bhi Nahin Hai Agar Honthon Pe Hai Khaamoshi Magar Baatein Kar Rahi Hain Baatein Kar Rahi Hain Nazar Chupke Chupke Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain Magar Chupke Chupke Kahin Aag Lagne Se Pehle Uthta Hai Aisa Dhuaan Jaisa Hai Idhar Ka Nazaara Vaisa Hi Udhar Ka Samaa Dil Mein Kaisi Kasak Si Jagi Dono jaanib Barabar Lagi Dekho To Idhar Se Dekho To Idhar Se Udhar Chupke Chupke Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain Magar Chupke Chupke Sabko Ho Rahi Hai Haan Sabko Ho Rahi Hai Khabar Chupke Chupke Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain Magar Chupke Chupke Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo Magar Chupke Chupke Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo Magar Chupke Chupke Ha Haan Chupke Chupke] Both of them are looking at each other lost in each other eyes…
for a moment they both forget they hate each other…
Sujal's eyes were stuck on Kashish and Kashsih's were on him…
it was like time had stopped especially for them…

Preview- Wedding Night!!!

I know this wasn't a good part but I wasn't feeling good...
anyway I'll try to post a better part tomorrow...
Hope you still like it...Please read and COMMENT...😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Before I forget thank you all for reading
and commenting...I'll try to bring Gauri soon
in this story...I don't really know abt indian wedding customs and stuff so I just wrote wht I knew...If I wrote something wrong...I'm sorry...
Luv Taniya
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
it was a great part thanks 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ooo absolutely brilliant.. 👏 .wedding night instead of some fighting please give some romantic moment too between sujal and kashsih...please 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey taniya nice part but plz on wed night dnt make them fight plzzzz.... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: KulBin

hey taniya nice part but plz on wed night dnt make them fight plzzzz.... 😊



I'll try not to but if some fighting occurs then it's not my fault...😆


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Posted: 19 years ago
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GR8 Tanya!!!!!!
KulBin and Harpy ki baat maan lo.......plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Edited by easygold - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
nice part....plz post da nxt one soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PPart 6-

Part 6-

Then suddenly the Jazz band which was playing made an announcement that a special guest had arrived...Kashish and Sujal stop dancing…everyone's attention diverts to the entrance and Salman Khan enters…Kashish goes up to him and hugs him…

Kashish: Salman how come you're so late?

Salman: I was busy shooting but at least I came

Kashish: yeah that is the important part

Salman: so who's the lucky guy?

Kashish blushes…while Sujal comes…

Sujal: Hi…I'm Sujal Garewal…kashsih's husband

Salman: Hi…I'm Salman…I think you know me…

Sujal: who doesn't know you…I love your movies…

The night goes on and now it's time for the newly married couple to head home…

Sujal's family was standing outside while the newlyweds were standing outside the door…Sujal's mom did the aarti and then Kashish does the rice thing and puts her feet in the thing and walks ahead…Now they were sitting and they had to do the rasam in which they find the ring…Kashish and Sujal puts their hand in the thing to find the ring and both of them get it out at the same time…

Kkusum: it's so cute they both got it at the same time…

Kripa: I think they're going to be equal…

Now its time to take Kashish into the room…

Sujal's room-
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Sujal's room is decorated beautifully with all the flowers and stuff…Kashsih's friends make her sit down on the bed and they start talking about how their wedding night is going to be special and fun…they leave her alone…Sujal comes in and doesn't see Kashish in the room then he realizes she's in the bathroom…after a few minutes she comes out in her pajamas…

Sujal: so you already changed?

Sujal coming toward her…

Kashish: stop… don't move forward …for the world we might be husband and wife but we know how much we hate each other and what kind of relationship we have…I don't want you to touch me ever…

Sujal: Like I will touch you…saying that he goes to the bathroom…

Sujal comes outside and sees her covered with the blanket…he thinks now I can just go to the party without arguing with her and head downstairs…

Downstairs-

Kashish wearing a cute black dress is about to go to the main door when she hears a voice…she turns around and finds her mother in law standing there…

Daksha: Arra ra ra Kashish what are you doing here?

When Mr. Garewal comes too...

Mr. Garewal: What is happening here?

Kashish all nervous….

Sujal sees Kashish and screams her name…

Now all of them are looking at each other totally shocked…

Daksha: what are you both doing here?

Sujal and Kashish don't know what to say…

Kashish: mom I came here to get milk for Sujal…you know for his health…

Daksha: that is a good thing…but what are you doing here?

Sujal: just making sure she gets it…

Garewal: we should go now…

They both leave...

Sujal: how come you're here I thought you were sleeping

Kashish laughing: I can't believe you fell for it…

Sujal: what do you mean?

Kashish: I was going to the Club and put pillows under the blanket…

Sujal: whatever…

Kashish: btw where are you going?

Sujal: to the club…

Kashish: can you drop me there?

Sujal: no way

Kashish: if you don't then I'll them you're leaving me alone on our wedding night…

Sujal: fine…

They both head to the club…

Club-

Both Kashish and Sujal are dancing with their friends…when Sujal starts dancing really close to some girls… Kashish is sitting at the bar when one of her friends come to her…

Amna: so you don't mind your husband is dancing with another girl?

Kashish: not at all

Amna: so you don't care what your husband does?

Kashish: as long as he doesn't interfere in my life…I don't care…

Then this guy comes up to her…

G: do you wanna dance?

Kashish was abt to say no but then when she saw Sujal so close with another girl she had this sudden urge to break them apart so she said yes…

Guy: btw I'm Sahil Khan…

Sahil: I'm Kashish (abt to say Garewal) then says Kashish Sinha…

Kashish and the guy start dancing….while the song Naughty Girl by Beyonce comes on…

[I love to love you baby
I love to love you baby.

I'm feelin' sexy
I wanna hear you say my name boy
If you can reach me
You can feel my burning flame

I'm feelin kind of n-a-s-t-y
I just might take you home with me
Baby the minute i feel your energy
Your vibe's just taken over me
Start feelin so crazy babe
Lately, I feel the funk coming over me
I don't know what's gotten into me
The rhythm's got me feelin so crazy babe

Tonight i'll be your naughty girl
I'm callin all my girls
We're gonna turn this party out
I know you want my body
Tonight i'll be your naughty girl
I'm callin all my girls
I see you look me up and down
And i came to party

You're so sexy, tonight i am all yours boy
The way your body moves across the floor
You got me feelin n-a-s-t-y
I just might take you home with me

Baby the minute i feel your energy
The vibe's just taken over me
Start feelin so crazy babe
Lately, I feel the funk coming over me
I don't know what's gotten into me
The rhythm's got me feelin so crazy babe

Tonight i'll be your naughty girl
I'm callin all my girls
We're gonna turn this party out
I know you want my body
Tonight i'll be your naughty girl
I'm callin all my girls
I see you look me up and down
And i came to party

I love to love you baby
I love to love you baby
I love to love you baby
I love to love you baby

Tonight i'll be your naughty girl
I'm callin all my girls
We're gonna turn this party out
I know you want my body
Tonight i'll be your naughty girl
I'm callin all my girls
I see you look me up and down
And i came to party]

Seeing Sujal so close to the girl…Kashish gets closer to that guy…Both of them are trying to make each other jealous…when Sahil tries to get way too close to Kashish…

Kashish: hey stay in your limits

Sahil: what if I don't

Kashish: leave me

Sahil: I won't

Kashish tries to leave but Sahil's grip is too strong for her…when Sujal comes in to safe her wife like a macho man…Sujal and Sahil start fighting while Kashish is just watching them…finally Sujal wins and Sujal holds her hand and take her to the parking lot…

Kashish: Sujal why did you hit him?

Sujal: to help you…

Kashish: I don't need any help and especially yours…

Sujal: yes you do…

Kashish: no I don't

Sujal: fine…I'll be leaving…

He gets into the car…

Kashish: I'm not going with you

Sujal: fine and he drives off…

Kashish is standing all alone in the parking a lot…

Next Day-Morning time…

The sun shines through the window of Sujal Garewal…he puts his pillow on his head when his alarm rings really loudly…he gets up on his bed…he sees Kashsih's stuff in his room and realizes they got married and realizes what happened last night…he thinks shit where is Kashish…He takes a quick shower and changes and goes downstairs…Meanwhile Mr. Garewal, Daksha, Kkusum, & Abhay are sitting and eating…
Dinnig room:


Mr. Garewal: so you're up Sujal?

Sujal: yes dad…

He looks around for Kashish and doesn't see her…

Daksha: beta… sit down and eat breakfast…

Sujal sits down still wondering where Kashish is…

Everyone is eating and talking…

Kkusum: Sujal where is Kashish?

Sujal: umm…

Kkusum: is she still sleeping…I'll go wake her up…

Sujal: ok

Kkusum gets up…

Sujal: wait…I'll get her

Kkusum: its ok I'll get her…you eat your breakfast…

Sujal gets up and says: I'll go

Daksha: let him go…

Sujal goes in his room and sits on his bed thinking what I am gonna do...he sits down on the couch and hears a scream…a really grouchy Kashish wakes up…

Kashish: what the hell did you do that for?

Sujal looks at Kashish and gets all happy and gives her sweet kiss on her cheek…

Kashish screams again and gets up…now she's angry…

Kashish: how dare you touch me?

Sujal: because I wanted too…

Kashish: first you sit at me…you weigh so much you should exercise and then you kiss me…I had already warned you not to touch me…

Sujal: whatever…get ready and come downstairs

Kashish putting her hands on her hips: what if I don't

Sujal coming towards her…

Sujal: then I'll do what I did again

Kashish scared: fine I'll go and she goes to the bathroom to take a shower…

After a while-

Kashish: Sujal are you there?

Sujal: yeah

Kashish: could you leave and close the door?

Sujal: no I'm not leaving…

Kashish: fine…at least lock the door…

Sujal closes the door and turns to see a Kashish in a towel…Sujal looks at her and thinks she's so beautiful…

Kashish: why are you looking at me like that?

Sujal doesn't reply and comes toward her…

Kashish: I told you not to come near me…

Sujal is now right in front of her…For a while they both are just lost on each other…

Sujal: move

Kashish: what?

Sujal: MOVE…I need to go to the bathroom…

Kashish is left shocked…

After a few mins:

Kashish wearing her jeans with a pink top is making her hair…when Sujal comes outside…Sujal comes behind her and looks at her and smiles…

Kashish: why are you smiling?

Sujal: ----

Kashish: I asked you something?

Sujal: I know…

Kashish: so answer me

Sujal: I don't feel like…

Kashish: fine…and starts to leave when Sujal grabs her hand…

Sujal: you're forgetting something

Kashish: huh

Sujal gives her the mangalsutar…Kashish takes it and puts it on…Kashish starts to leave when he again holds her hand…

Kashish: now what?

Sujal: you're forgetting something again…he gets the sindoor and she was about to put it…

Sujal: let me put it…(he puts it on)

Kashish looks in the mirror and asks: Is everything done now?

Sujal: yes…

They both head downstairs…By now everyone is done eating…Mr. Garewal and Abhay have left for the office…Kkusum and Daksha are in their rooms…

Kashish was about to eat when a angry Kripa comes in with Angad behind him…

Angad: I said I was sorry…

Kripa: I'm not talking to you…

Kripa sits on the couch when Angad sees Kashish and gets lost into her again…

Kripa: Angad…

Angad: huh

Kripa goes to Sujal and says: look at him bhai…

Kashish: Hey Angad

Angad: hi

Kashish: so how have you been?

Angad: great

They both start talking to each other and are laughing loudly…while Kripa and Sujal are both burning with jealousy…

Sujal: Kashish

Kashish: what?

Sujal: come here

Kashish: I'm coming…

Sujal: why were you flirting with him?

Kashish: why do you care if I flirt with anyone?

Sujal: I don't but if you flirt with my sister's boyfriend…then I do

Kashish: whatever…when her cell rings…

Kashish: hey…

Kashish: I'm sorry I forgot

Kashish: I'll come soon…

Kashish starts to leave…

Sujal: where are you going?

Kashish: none of your business and leaves…

Caf-

We see Kashish sitting next to Pratham…we can see Pratham looks very tensed…

Kashish sipping her coffee…

Pratham: I really need to talk to you

Kashish: what do you want to talk abt?

Pratham: Kashish I don't think our relationship can continue any further

Kashish: you are kidding me na

Pratham: I mean you're a married woman now and I can't see you wearing someone else's sindoor in your mang…

Kashish: you know this mean nothing to me…

Pratham: I'm sorry but I don't think anything can happen between us but I would like it if we could be friends…I'll be leaving now…

Kashish is confused…she doesn't know how to feel…then she realizes her relationship ended because of Sujal…Kashish thinks I won't leave him…

Sorry I couldn't cont. because I was too busy but now I did...I hope you liked it...Plz read and COMMENT...😊

Edited by taniya_22 - 19 years ago
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it was awsummmmmmmmm.........jus 2 gud....i m addicted 2 ur story.....so ven will u b postin da nxt part....will b eagerly waitin 4 it...

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