~*Sujal & Kashish*~ Unfinshed - Page 2

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Part 1-

It is a beautiful morning in the city of Beverly Hills. It€™s located in the central of Los Angeles so it provides a great location for the leisure and business traveler. There are as usual some tourist traveling on the classic Beverly Hills Trolley which operates seasonally from the corner of Dayton Way and Rodeo Drive. Most of the people are driving in their limousines or latest cars. The camera shows some fabulous parks such as Beverly Gardens Park, Coldwater Canyon Park and Grey stone Mansion. Then it shows a glimpse of the famous boutiques on Rodeo Drive for fashion. Then it focuses toward the residence area where all the famous mansions are located€

The camera zooms into this huge mansion€called the €œSinha Mansion €œ

It is 3 stories€has 11 bedrooms€A huge black colored gate surrounds the mansion€the door opens and there is a pathway made of brown bricked like material on the side there are marbles in the middle€ on both sides.. there is jade colored grass with beautiful flowers€then when you walk further down the pathway it grows wider€then there is a beautiful fountain€with water coming out of it€when you pass it€.you see the main house€which is astonishing€its white in color with beautiful windows€on the top a semi-circle shaped porch comes out which looks beautiful€the door to the house is tall and has a brownish color.. €.when you open the door you enter the lobby area€next to that is a seating area€with leather couches€ for people to sit when they wait to meet someone€.then on the right side there is a hallway which leads to the living area€which is beautifully decorated€.it has sliding glass doors€.on the left side of the waiting area is the dining area€then on the back of that is another hallway which reaches to the kitchen€in the middle of the backside is a door which lead to the TV theatre€the waiting area backside has stairs on both sides€which leads to the second floor€the right stairs lead to the game room€.while the left stairs leads to the master bedroom€the third floor has a gym€and next to it is huge room€

It is decorated with the latest furniture from Milan€there was this huge bed in the middle€we can see someone lying on the bed but is covered wid their comforter€in a few seconds a buzzing sound emerges and the alarm rings€a hand pops from beneath the comforter and closes the alarm€then the girl sits up we can see it is none other than our Kashish€who is wearing cute p.j€she takes a tiny yawn and stretches her hand in the air€ she gets up and turns the radio on and the song Hey Baby by No Doubt comes on€ and says €œI love this song€

[I'm the kind of girl that hangs with the guys
Like a fly on the wall with my secret eyes
Takin it in, try to be feminin
With my makeup bag watchin all the sin
Misfit, I sit
Lit up, wicked
Everybody else surrounded by the girls
With the tank tops and the flirty words

I'm just sippin on chamomile
Watching boys and girls and their sex appeal
With a stranger in my face who says he knows my mom
And went to my high school

All the boys say
Hey baby, hey baby, hey
Girls say, girls say
Hey baby, hey baby, hey
Hey baby, baby
Hey baby, hey baby, hey
Boys say, boys say
Hey baby, hey baby, hey

All the boys get the girls in the back, back, back
I'm the one they feed upon
Give a bit a star is born
And if your hot enough you'll get the pass
So you can tell your friends how you made it back
No matter what they say I'm still the same
Somehow everybody knows my name
And all the girls wanna get with the boys
And the boys really like it

All the boys say
Hey baby, hey baby, hey
Girls say, girls say
Hey baby, hey baby, hey
Hey baby, baby
Hey baby, hey baby, hey
Boys say, boys say
Hey baby, hey baby, hey
All the boys get the girls in the back

Check it out, it's Bounty Killer, No Doubt
Jump on the stage cause we goin crazy
Afterwards myself and one of them gorgeous ladies
There is no need to be actin shady
C'mon baby, hey hey baby
Jump on the stage cause we goin crazy
Afterwards myself and one of them gorgeous ladies
There is no need to be actin shady
C'mon baby, hey hey baby

When you rock your hips you know that - it amaze me
Caught me off the hook and nothing else don't phase me
Try to be my one and only sunshine baby
If no maybe, Hey Baby
I'm just sippin on chamomile
Watching boys and girls and their sex appeal
With a stranger in my face who says he knows my mom
And went to my high school

All the boys say
Hey baby, hey baby, hey
Girls say, girls say
Hey baby, hey baby, hey
Hey baby, baby
Hey baby, hey baby, hey
Boys say, boys say
Hey baby, hey baby, hey
Try to be my one and only sunshine baby
Hey baby, hey baby, hey
Girls say, girls say
Hey baby, hey baby, hey

When you rock your hips you know that - it amaze me
Hey baby, baby
Boys say, boys say
Hey baby, hey baby, hey
All the boys get the girls in the back]

She starts dancing to it then she goes in the bathroom€then after a while she comes out in a bathrobe€she opens her closet and starts getting clothes€she puts them on her and then just throws them on her bed€trying to find the perfect outfit€she finally gets a beautiful turquoise colored halter top wid a little bit of rhinestone work on it€she wears black jeans€she leaves her straight jet black hair opened which hangs a little bit below her shoulder€she is also wearing long silver earrings€she puts on a little eye shadow, mascara, and pink lip-gloss€grabs her bag and takes her cell€she goes running down the stairs€when she is almost abt to fall but she doesn€™t€

Then you hear a woman voice saying €œKashish€where are you going?€

Kashish turns around€you see this middle aged woman in this light green saree€with lots of jewelry€she is none other than Tulsi from Kynki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahun Thi€

Kashish: Mom€I€™m going to meet Sanjana.

Smriti Irani As Tulsi Sinha- She is the mother of Kashish€she is the typical mom who loves her child a lot€since she only has one daughter she tends to be a little overprotective€she is house wife but doesn€™t accept that fact€she thinks organizing parties, attending them and planning events is work€she spends most of her time going to parties or to the salon to get her make-up done€overall she is a sweet, caring mother

Tulsi: But your engagement is tonight beta€

Kashish: mom€please€I€™ll be back soon€

Tulsi: ok€beta

Kashish gives her mom a quick hug and a kiss on her cheek€

She is abt to leave€

When you hear a guys voice saying: Kashish€you can€™t go anywhere

Kashish turns to see her dad meaning Mihir Sinha (played by Ronit Roy) standing there€.

Mihir Virani- He is a businessman€he has a huge business€he is always busy wid his work but the little amount he has€ he spends it wid his family€he loves his daughter and gives her everything she wants€he can never say no to her€basically he€™s a gr8 dad but he€™s always busy wid his work€


Kashish in a whiny tone: I have to go it is really important€

Mihir: you didn€™t hear the whole thing€I was going to say you can€™t go without meeting me€

Kashish smiles and hugs him then says: dad€

Mihir: go now or you€™re gonna be late€

Kashish: I love you a lot€I€™ll be back soon€

Kashish goes outside and sits in her silver Mercedes convertible€she sits down and turns on the radio and the song Angel Eyes by Raghav comes on€she looks in the rearview mirror and says: looking hot Kashish€then she drives off and stops in front of a caf€she parks her car€she gets out and goes inside€

The caf is filled wid people€there are many people just sitting on the couches€some our drinking coffee or eating something and others are just busy chitchatting€then you see a table where a beautiful girl is sitting€she is wearing a lilac colored strapless top with a black miniskirt€she has long brown hair and long dangly earrings€she looks cute as ever€she looks at her watch and wonders where the hell is Kashish€

Kashish hurries over to that table€

Kashish: I am so sorry Sanjana€I€™m late I know but it was my alarm€

Sanjana: Ur alarm?

Kashish: well€it didn€™t ring€

Sanjana: fine€wht abt the fact I called you so many times and you didn€™t even return one of them€

Kashish hiding her cell: I lost my cell€

Sanjana: really?

Kashish: yes

When kashsih€™s cell starts to ring wid the ring tone of €œIshq Hain Jhoota€ comes on and Sanjana€™s name appears on the screen€

Kashish: shit€

Sanjana: so you€™re caught€

Kashish: let€™s forget abt it€now tell me why did u call me here?

Sanjana: first order something€

A waitress comes up to them and Kashish orders a latte€which comes in a while€.

Kashish takes a sip of her drink and puts it down€

Kashish: are you gonna tell me now?

Sanjana: I called you hear to put some brains in you€

Kashish: what do you mean?

Sanjana: You are getting married to Sujal Garewal€the Sujal who you have hated since the first day of college€the one who you can€™t even stand for a second€you are spending your whole life with€

Kashish: not for my whole life€

Sanjana: what do you have planned now?

Kashish with an evil smirk: nothing€absolutely nothing @ all€

Kashish thinking Sujal Garewal beware of Kashish Sinha€

Meanwhile on the other side of Beverly Hills€we see another huge mansion€


Then we go to this gym where we see this guy lifting weights but we don€™t see his face€the song Bas Main Hoon from Kyon Hogaya Na comes on€

[Tum Idhar Ek Nazar Dekho

Nahi Toh Pachtaaoge Kahin Bhi Koi Bhi Mere Jaisa Tum Nahin Paoge Yahan Wahan, Jaao Jahan Yahan Wahan, Chahein Jaao Jahan Mere Jaisa Hoga Kahan Jisme Yahan Saari Khoobiyan Hai Woh Bas Main Hoon, Bas Main Hoon...(2) Koi Doosara Nahin...(3) Main Kya Hoon Tum Bhi Dekho Na Main Hoon, Bas Main Hoon, Bas Main Hoon Koi Doosara Nahin...(2) Main Kya Hoon Tum Hi Dekhona, Dekho Dekho Dekho Na Tum Kya Ho Kaise Ho Chodoo Mujhe Kya Samjhaaoge Kahin Bhi Dekho Toh Apne Jaise Hazaroon Paaoge Tumse Jawan Ghume Lakho Yahan Woh Bechare Woh Bezabaan Unko Kahan Aisi Galat Fhemiyan Ke Main Hoon Bas Main...Doosara Nahin,...(2) Main Hoon, Bas Main...Doosara Nahin,...(2) In Baaton Se Baaz Aao Na Jaao Jaao Jaao Na Jo Main Kahon, Raat Mein Ho Din Din Mein Raat Ho Kyun Main Sunu Aisi Jo Be Sar Per Ki Baat Ho Tum Yeh Sun Lo, Tum Yeh Samjho Tyum Yeh Jaano Jisme Saari Khoobiya Hai Main Hoon, Bas Main...Doosara Nahin,...(2) Jaao Jaao Jaao Na Kya Jaane Kyun Dil Ye Chahe Tum Jo Kaho Main Maan Loon Hairaan Hoon Tumne Kya Samjha Kya Jaana Main Kaun Hoon Maine Samjha Maine Jaana Maine Maana Jismein Saari Khoobiya Hain Tum Ho Bas Tum Ho Ba5 Tum Ho.... Koi Doosara Nahin...(3) Bas Yeh Hi Kehti Jaao Na Jaao Jaao Jaao Na]

Then he takes his water bottle and drinks the water but
we only see the bottom part of his face€his
cell rings and he picks it up€
on the screen name the name Rishi comes up€


The guy: hey Rishi

Rishi: Man€where are you? I have been waiting at the caf for 30 minutes€

Guy: I€™m sorry€.I€™ll be there soon€

Next Scene-

We see this guy wearing a black shirt wid blue faded jeans go to this black Ferrari€he gets in and looks at the rearview mirror€and looks at him €We finally see his face now€he looks hot as usual and his brown eyes has this amazing sparkle€he wears his sunglasses and says: €œYou€™re the best Sujal Garewal€€ and drives off€

He reaches the same caf that Kashish was in€he gets in and sees this guy wearing blue jeans wid a red shirt and a white jacket€he looks really cute€

Sujal goes to the table and sits€

Sujal: so why did u call me here?

Rishi: I called you here because I need to tell you something important€

Sujal: what is it?

Rishi: well€I need to talk to you abt Kashish?

Sujal: you called me here to talk abt that B****€I€™m leaving I don€™t wanna waste my time even thinking abt her€

Rishi: listen€you€™re getting married to her€

Sujal: so?

Rishi: if you don€™t like her than why are you going through with this marriage?

Sujal: two reasons...

Rishi: what are they?

Sujal: 1st my parents said if I don€™t marry her they are gonna kick me out and are not gonna give me anything from their property€2nd I hate her€I hate her guts and now I can make her life hell€

Rishi: what are you gonna do?

Sujal: you€™ll find out soon€

Sujal thinking she€™ll have to pay back for what she did€

This is it for now€

Preview-The reason why there is so much hatred b/w Sujal & Kashish...

Hope you guys like it€I€™ll try to post the next part tomorrow€

Plz read it and do COMMENT€😊


Edited by taniya_22 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12

Hey Taniyaaa,,

Its lovely I loved the starting and I am waiting for the next part.. Infact I am waiting desperately to see more characters in the next episode....

Keepp up the good work and ohhhhhh myyy I am so anxious to find out more about the reason of their hatred..


Good Luckkk👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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For everyone who replied and liked the first part...
thanks alot...I forgot to put some Background Info so I'm posting it now...I'll try to post the next part today...and if not today then surely by tomorrow...

Background Info-

The Sinha€™s and Garewal€™s have been business rivals for a really long time. Every year they compete with each other to be the top company of the year. Every year the title keeps alternating b/w these two. They knew if they merged together then they both wouldn€™t have any threat from anyone else. So to make sure none of them was gonna cheat they both decided to get their kids married to each other.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 2

Rishi: I still don€™t know what you have against her yaar€

Sujal: Don€™t you remember what she has done to me? Anyway I€™ll tell you€

Meanwhile Rishi thinking what I have gotten myself into€

At the same time-

Sanjana: I have known you for so long I still don€™t get it how come you hate him so much€

Kashish: How can you forget? I€™ll tell you€

~Flashback~

Sujal and Kashish have hated each other due to their parent€™s rivalry since they were kids. Kashish was entering college and she was going to attend UCLA like her family has done in the past. The Garewal family also attends this college meaning Sujal does to.

You see UCLA:


It is like any typical college€it is famous for getting real good results and for sports€it is a huge college made out of bricks€there kids playing basketball€girls walking€guys whistling at them€girls giving them the look€guys smoking€u know the typical college scene€there are lots of gangs there€then you see this one group of guys€they are all wearing this black leather jacket with Eagles on the back€.they are all sitting on their motorcycles€when this cute guy comes running up to them€he stops in front of them and is trying to catch his breath€

Sujal (he€™s wearing blue jeans wid his jacket€btw he€™s the leader of €œEagles€): what happened Akshat€are you feeling fine?

Akshat (played by Chaitanya Choudhry): You won€™t believe who I saw€


Rishi: I think he saw a ghost€

Akshat: something similar€

Sujal: will you tell us or not?

Akshat: I just saw Kashish Sinha€she is attending our college and it€™s her first day today€

Sujal: really€that is nice€ (Thinking Kashish Sinha let€™s have fun wid you)

Then you see Kashish (wearing a cute pink top with blue jeans)€she is walking quickly towards her first class with Sanjana (She is wearing blue top wid white pants) €

Kashish: we€™re definitely gonna be late€

Sanjana: well it€™s your fault€you woke up late€

Kashish: now let€™s not fight on whose fault it is€

Sanjana: I just realized I forget to turn these papers in to the registration place€I€™ll go do it€

Kashish: fine€you do that€I€™ll go to class€

Sanjana leaves€

Kashish is walking all alone when the Eagles gangs come and surrounds her and start teasing her and then Sujal comes up to her€Kashish doesn€™t recognize him at first but then realizes he€™s none other than Sujal Garewal her enemy€

Sujal: so Miss Kashish Sinha...you decided to join this college

Kashish: so Mr. Sujal Garewal you still haven€™t changed your disgusting habits

Sujal: what do you mean?

Kashish: trying to hurt beautiful girls like me

Sujal: you beautiful€yeah right€I won€™t even spend a second wid you€

Kashish: then will you move€

Sujal coming closer: what if I don€™t

Kashish: then I€™ll leave myself€ (She tries to go when Sujal holds her hand)

Kashish turns and says: leave my hand€you jerk

He leaves it and says: you called me a jerk€you B****

Kashish: well you are total freak€

They start arguing and start hitting each other€Sujal is abt to slap her when unfortunately a teacher sees that and she takes them both to the principal office€

Kashish starts crying and tells the principal that he was trying to sexually harass her€the principal then suspends Sujal for a week€

Couple Days later-

There college€™s radio is on and Sujal€™s friend is the announcer and he makes this announcement abt Kashish:

He says that Kashish got a nose job done and he post this picture of Kashish with a bad nose and the pictures saying before and after on their website€

Kashish hears that and looks at Sujal who makes an evil smile @ her€then Kashish makes this slideshow of Sujal pictures in women€™s clothing and makeup and shows it during one of their classes and also makes flyers and sends them across college€both of them keep on doing something or another to insult each other€

After a few months-

It is evening time and Kashish is driving her car and when it stops suddenly and doesn€™t work€so she gets out to check it€since she doesn€™t know anything abt cars she doesn€™t know what to do€she tries to call from her cell but the battery is dead€she waits for an hour and there is no sign of a car€she walks a little further then this car comes and stops€the guy rolls don the window€Kashish looks at the guy and is Sujal€

Sujal: you€™re stranded here all alone€I could help you but I like to see you suffer€

After saying that he leaves€Kashish walks a little more than her sandals breaks and now she is barefoot with no way to go home€she had to stay there for 2 more hours when another car comes and she gets a lift home€Kashish is extremely pist off at Sujal so she decides she has to do something and something big€ She knew there was nothing more important to him than his car so she pays this guy to wreck his car€in the morning when Sujal wakes up and sees his red beauty totally broken up and he knew it was Kashsih€™s doing€

Almost a week later-

Sujal spreads this rumour that she's a theif and steals people's stuff...so now most of the people stay away from her...

In revenge Kashish sees Sujal go in the locker room to take a shower and change so she goes in and gets his clothes so he won€™t have anything to wear€so poor Sujal has to come outside in a towel and Kashish takes a picture of him and almost the whole college sees that picture€

Sujal knew Kashish was having this crush on one of this guy so he sends her a letter from that guy€ (That guy is played by Zayed Khan)€so when Kashish goes up to him€

Kashish nervously: Hey€

Zayed: Hi

Kashish: I didn€™t know you felt the same as me€

Zayed with a confused look€

Kashish: so when do you want go out?

Zayed: what do you mean?

Kashish: you send me this letter (She gets it out) didn€™t you?

Zayed: I€™m sorry but I didn€™t€I don€™t even know who you are€I think someone played a prank on you€

Kashish: I know who did this€ (Thinking abt Sujal)€

She couldn€™t believe it she fell for it€she saw Sujal standing there and laughing and he caught that whole scene on his cell€She knew she had to do something but what€

She calls up some people and spreads this rumor that Sujal used to wet his bed till he was 10 and that he used to have tea parties€she also takes his pictures with Barbie€so it looked like he played with them€and posted them on their website€

Now they both decided to ruin each other€™s relationships in anyway possible€the entire member€™s of the Eagle gang except Sujal were after Kashish€and most of kashsih€™s friends had a crush on Sujal€this was intolerable for both of them€There insulting each other led on until Sujal graduated and Kashish was in the last year of college€They both hated each other so much now and only they knew how much hatred was filled in them€

~Now~

Kashish waving her hand in front of Sanjana€™s face and saying: are you here Sanjana?

Sanjana: yeah€are you done?

Kashish: yeah€listen I got to go€bye€

Sanjana: bye

Same time-

Sujal: I need to go now€bye

Rishi: wait€

Sujal: I really gotta go€

Both Kashish and Sujal reach for the door at the same time€They are abt to say sorry when they look at each other€they both move their hand€they give each other an evil glare€then they both go outside€Kashish goes to her car while Sujal€™s goes to his€

Caf-

Now Sanjana is sitting next to Rishi€Rishi is holding her hands-

Sanjana: so did you tell him?

Rishi: no€did you tell her?

Sanjana: I didn€™t get to

Rishi: what are we going to do if they find out abt us?

Sanjana: I don€™t know€let€™s hope for the best€

Preview- Engagement!!!

Hope you like this part€Plz lemme know if there is something if you guy€™s don€™t like€I need to know what you guys think€Plz read it and COMMENT€😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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i'am sorry , i'am commenting late.....😊
but ur story is coolllllllll............. 👏
pl continue soon................ 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Tanya gr8 story!!!!
Keep it up!!!
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gr8888888 story continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
Good going,, I am lovin it..!!! 😉😉😉

I am w8n to see how it turns out to be in the next part

keep it up!!! We need writers like you...👏
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ur story is awesome...... 👏 ..........good going........
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AWSOME....👏

cont...soon😛

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