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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hie guys im Spandana….a silent reader..this is my first ff….plzz do comment 😊

Mayank :- A very handsome and intelligent boy.Lives with his mother.Not serious types….takes lyf as it comes.Madly in love with nupur…and by hook or crook want to make her fall in love.

Nupur:-A beautiful and intelligent girl . Lives with gunjan . Shez is a little serious compared to her character in the serial . Considers Mayank just as a friend.

Other characters:

Samrat: Same as in the serial . Already commited with gunjan.

Gunjan:Younger sister of Nupur.Already commited with samrat.

Diya,uday,benji : same as in the serial.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting concept Spandana!
would love to read more
do continue soon
nd plz add me to ur pm list 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART – 1

It is one of those days when mayank was desperately waiting to propose nupur . Nupur was not so expert in the area of love and such feelings so she couldn't understand the little gestures gave by mayank.

Mayank was waiting for nupur in an empty class room where he asked her to come fast….. when nupur asked the reason he told that he wanted to clarify a doubt in a subject…..as the exams were fast approaching she coudnt deny his urgency…

Mayank saw her….she was wearng a white dress and hair tied as a ponytail and waking towards him….she was completely looking like an angel….he was becoming nervous…all the courage he built earlier was crashing….but some how he determined to express his feelings to her as they are in the their final year and nupur was planning her higher studies in abroad…and he didn't want to loose her.

Nupur : (tapped him on his shoulder) aise khade khade kya dekh rahe ho…

Mayank : ummm…kuch nahin….cha…aalo ander chal kar bath karthe hain…

N : Teek hain…

They enter inside and make themselves comfortable….nupur starts opening her books

N : mayank bathao na tumhe doubt kis topic me hain

M : voh…actually mujhe tumse kuch kehna hain…

N : (she gets worried ) kya bath hai mayank sab kuch teek hai na…aunty ko…

M : (cuts her in between)nahi nahi…sabh kuch teek hain…darasal mein yeh kehna chahta hoo ki..

(closing his eyes he says )

Mein tumse bahut pyaar karta hu nupur aur tumhar saath apna zindagi guzarna chahta hu…mujhe pata nahi hein ki tum mere bare me aise sochte ho ya nahi…phir bhi apne appko yeh kehne se rokh nahin paaya…

He slowly opens his eyes and finds nupur shocked…

N : Mayank yeh tumne kyaa keh diya….per mai tumse……


plzz do comment...😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept and great update dear........................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#5
nice start
interesting concept😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb update Spandana!
so mayank expressed his feeling 😃
u stopped at such a crucial point..............what a cliffhanger 😆
waiting eagerly for the next part
plzzzzzzzz continue ASAP
nd thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi dear
fantastic start
loved it
plz do cont and pm me
take care

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept yaar......plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey, it wz fantastic......loved it. Plz add me in ur pm list :-)

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