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Posted: 14 years ago
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Precap-That's when she knew......the meaning of these emotions filling in her heart......the diffrence between her previous behaviour and her current one......she knew what it was.
Chapter-6 The hidden face
Geet sat there,thinking about the way her life have gone upside down in a matter of a day........
The day which spelled her doom.
The day which mercilessly broke her out of the dream she was living.
The day which made her realise what a blind-folded fool she was.
Only in a matter of a say which made her face the reality.....the real face of her love,her husband....
FLASHBACK TO ONE WEEK
''You have every reason to smile Mrs khurana'' said the warm lady doctor smiling herself.
Geet couldn't beleive this......her Babaji has been so grateful to her.....she felt as if he has given her all the happiness she could've asked.
''Thank you Babaji'' she said looking up thanking her lord.
''You should be coming here for regular check-ups as it is necessary to do so and you should get the prescribed iron tablets from our chemist'' the doc continued.
* * * * * * * *
''Congrats Mrs khurana'' quipped her spitfire of a friend meera.
''Thanks and by the way since when did i become Mrs khurana for you?'' geet asked mocking anger.
''Ahhh forget it babes.....but you know what you kinda suprised me giving the news so lately....i mean seeing you guys before marriage i thought you both gonna have babies even before reaching the mandap!!'
''Shut up meera....you are just too much''
''I thought you know that by now''
''Okay forget it....now be a good friend and tell me some way to surprise him with this news''
'Oh come on yaar,for god sake you are married....it should be me asking you for suggestions...try something of your own like some romantic candle-light dinner or....''
''Ok ok i got it thank you sooooo much sweetie...you are the best'' geet said ending the conversation.
She got the idea.....candle-light dinner!
* * * * * * *
The whole day went with geet shouting over the servants and arranging things the way she wants to.
The absence of her in-laws was now affecting her as she wished she could have told this to them as well as her own family members......
She stopped thinking as the smile got wiped off her face and a tear slipped her eyes.
How she wished she could've conveyed this news to them.....her mother and tai ji might have started with their never ending lectures of how to take care of yourselves during these months etc etc.
But she knew it was not possible......she have accepted life without them...then why now.....
She stopped thinking and continued with her tasks.
* * * * * * *
It was past 8.....maan was nowhere to be seen and strangely he has set a busy message on his phone.....stupid services of stupid telecom companies.
She felt restless.She loved him too much to even think of punishing him for coming late or not picking her calls.
She knew she have to tell this to him anyhow.
Thats when she decided to track his number and reach him.
Staying with maan have teached her a lot of things.....this was one of them....though she never needed it before.....but today its special,very special.
* * * * * * *
She reached the place....it was strange,located out of nowhere.....geet's limited knowledge about Delhi made her think that how come places like these exist in a metropolitan city like this.
She have to hire a taxi as she send all the driver's home for she didn't see this coming.....thankfully the driver was a good old sardarji.
She paid the taxi driver but asked him to stay back.....may be this was the first time she used her brains.....she asked him to park the taxi somewhere behind.....something inside her told her.....something is not right.
She walked inside the creepy cottage-like place.....she flinched as she opened the door.....it made a sound similar to the sound the doors of the old havellis used to make in old hindi horror films.....she questioned her own height of silliness at thinking these stuff at this time.
As she entered she smelled a strong stench coming from inside as well as heard noises....actually voices.....voices she knew and recognized very well as it came from a partially closed door.
* * * * * * *
''Now that bas**** will know with whom he have messed''
''But bro we have to be careful next time if only you did'nt bribed those bodyguards at the right time he might have killed you or made you agree to his bloody demand''
''Relax dev i'm no fool not to understand what he meant when he called me on his private yacht for the price.....i knew he was upto no good''
''My deceiver's have to meet their end like this.....first the employee,now his employer.....both have paid the price of messing with maan singh khurana.....costing their lives''
* * * * * * *
Geet could'nt beleive her ears.....was she hearing it right ?
She felt as if someone have pulled the very ground where sh was standing.
In a shock she slowly took a few steps back and stopped as her feet hit something.
A hand, a human hand sticking out of a black quilt.
She gasped and then screamed.
The men inside became alarmed hearing the not-so-faint noise of a
woman.
That's when she made a mad dash towards the exit and ran towards the place she asked the taxi driver to park.
Precap-this means she was the one.
Love shreya
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
CONTINUE SOON PLEASE

WANNA KNOW MORE. ITS BECOMING MORE INTERESTING...................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
So she was pregnant den where's d baby now......... Nd maan killed somebdy dat y she hates him....... I m getting more curious
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

awesome update

loved it

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
so Maan think Geet is the deceiver & she still pregnant but Maan doesnt knowshe is caring his child interesting awesome update pls cont soon thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Shreya 🤗.....wow.....another interesting twist......love the way u keep us hooked to this FF......already waiting for the next update.....thank u for the PM.....TC 😊






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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
Ouch...she went to give him a surprise and what a nasty surprise she received in return!! Your story is getting really interesting...wondering what happens next...please continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hiiiiii
awesome update
loved it
intresting concept
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WAITING FOR AN UPDATE DEAR....................
.Lilith. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Recap-The men inside became alarmed hearing the not-so-faint noise of a
woman.
That's when she made a mad dash towards the exit and ran towards the place she asked the taxi driver to park.


Chapter-7 The hidden face (part 2)

FLASHBACK CONTD

Meera couldn't get what has happened to her friend all of a sudden.

What is she doing at her place at this time of the night in this condition?

Why is she shaking and trembling as if she has seen a ghost?

She thought her husband might be going mad searching for her or has she told him and come......hey wait.....isn't she suppose to surprise her spouse with the news of her pregnancy?

Then what on earth is she doing here.....has she fought with him....but why.....and even if she has done something like that then she should be angry.....why scared?

Too many questions.....but geet was nowhere near answering them.

* * * * * * * *

''Meera please do me a favor let me stay here for this night,get my passport from the black bag from my room which is on the wardrobe...go to the khurana mansion anyhow,make some excuse and get my passport.....i'm not staying here any more....please do this last thing for me...'' geet finally managed to speak between sobs.

Meera closes her eyes an take a deep breath,she can never deny her.....but she cannot guess what went wrong between them....there must be something really big otherwise geet talking of leaving was impossible in every way.

But she knew she cannot ask her trembling friend for now.

''All right i'll do it,for the time being you can stay at my aunt's place as it will take time to make your visa,he wont find you there,and if you are thinking of leaving India,you can come with me to London as i have a flat there'' stated meera in a calm voice.

FLASHBACK ENDS

PRESENT

Maan was restless.....he kept pacing up and down the hall.

What was geet talking about?

Who the hell have poisoned her mind against him?

No.....that's not possible.He knew very well that even if god came down to her and told her that he is wrong,she wouldn't believe him.

Then what.......how come she came to know about all this?

She has been missing since last week......wait last week?

The same day when he heard a cry of a woman on that place.....this means she was the one!!!

Oh no.....how come he didn't realize then....all those decorations,candles everything....she might have planned a surprise for him and she was missing receiving a rude shock.

No way....she cannot hate him NO.

He was definitely not going to see hatred in those eyes where he has always seen love.

Life have been unfair enough,he just cannot let go of her....not this easily.

She likes it or not....i am not going to leave her or let her leave me....

Precap- She felt as if those words were like thorns hitting her....''please help me with this beta''

Love shreya

Ok sorry 4 the short update.....longer one coming up.Do comment and hit the like button.

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