MG FF Innocence...LOST note@145 n Link to thread 2 - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
such a small part
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow so she is missing for week oh pls update soon awesome cont soon thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiiiii
awesome update
loved it
sooooo intresting
cant wait 4 more clues of what happened
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 14 years ago
here's a sneak peak or spoiler (watever u like 2 call it) 4 the next part-

the story will take turn to the events what happened in the past-how they got married,what happened with geet's family etc.

''she can just love him all her her life without expecting him to love her back.....even if it means seeing him go into someone else's arms.....may be she will never accept it from her heart but will still try and stick to her decision.....anyway she dosent even know what he feels for her.......just then her thoughts got disrupted as she heard the door bang open with a dangerously angry maan coming towards her shutting the door behind him.''

i hope that helps 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
please continue soon. i really loved this story but it only comes once a week..................
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi loved ur ff................i love maan too much that i cant hate him so want geet also to understand his situation............i hope its just a mu she shud know the whole truth.................

can u pl add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the promo
cant wait fr the update
so plzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome promo cant wait to read next part pls cont soonnnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Precap-Life have been unfair enough,he just cannot let go of her....not this easily.

She likes it or not....i am not going to leave her or let her leave me....
Chapter-8 Miles to go,promises to keep.
PAST
Geet didnt felt like going to office toda......she could no more face him or be near him.....not any more.
All those silly dreams,thoughts and infatuations which were taking place in her mind has taken a hit.....she was thrown back to reality once she got that phone call from her mother......
* * * * * * * *
''Hello geet beta''?
''Yeah mum....i'm so sorry i didn't get time to call you amidst all this workload''
''Its ok beta i understand.....by the way don't forget that you have to come here within a week....you remember na''
''Yeah...but mum whats the hurry''
''Beta don't be silly.....u know rajinder is coming with his family within a week.....once you come here,we will get you both engaged and then fix a good date for your marriage''
Geet froze.
''Listen take good care of yourself and please behave a bit more maturely in front of them....after all they are your to be in-laws na''
Geet couldn't listen to the whole conversation and hanged up abruptly.
How could she forget her promise she gave to her family and rajinder.
How could she be so silly to fall for her own boss without even realizing that she will go from here one day and have to keep her promise.
* * * * * * * *
Dil kya kare jab kisise kisiko pyaar ho jaaye
jaane kahaan kab kisiko kisise pyaar ho jaaye
unchi unchi deewaron si is duniya ki rasmein
naa kuchh tere bas mein julie na kuchh mere bas mein.
Dil kya kare jab kisise kisiko pyaar ho jaaye
jaane kahaan kab kisiko kisise pyaar ho jaaye
She heard a faint ring of a phone ringing somewhere far.......she somehow dragged herself to the source of the ring and picked it up....
Jaise parvat pe ghata jhukti hain
jaise saagar pe lehar uthti hain
aise kisi chehre pe nigaah rukti hain
Jaise parvat pe ghata jhukti hain
jaise saagar pe lehar uthti hain
aise kisi chehre pe nigaah rukti hain
hooooooo....rok nahin sakti nazron ko duniya bhar ki rasmein
naa kuchh tere bas mein julie,naa kuchh mere bas mein
Dil kya kare jab kisise kisiko pyaar ho jaaye
jaane kahaan kab kisiko kisise pyaar ho jaaye
''Geet where are you,don't you remember we have a meeting today hurry up babes'' meera finished her sentence in one breath.
''I'm not coming today....i'm not well'' geet stated.
Haan mein teri yaadon mein sabko bhula doon
duniya ko teri tasveer bana doon
mera bas chalen to dil cheer ke dikha doon
Haan mein teri yaadon mein sabko bhula doon
duniya ko teri tasveer bana doon
mera bas chalen to dil cheer ke dikha doon
Hoooo....daur raha hain saath lahu ke pyaar tera nas nas mein
na kuchh tere bas mein julie,na kuchh mere bas mein
Dil kya kare jab kisise kisiko pyaar ho jaaye
jaane kahaan kab kisiko kisise pyaar ho jaaye
unchi unchi deewaron si is duniya ki rasmein
naa kuchh tere bas mein julie na kuchh mere bas mein.
Dil kya kare jab kisise kisiko pyaar ho jaaye
jaane kahaan kab kisiko kisise pyaar ho jaaye.
* * * * * * * * * *
''Geet beta can you please do me favor''
''Why are you even asking dadima,just order''
''You know my grandson right,he never listens to anyone in the world but himself''
''I'm in hospital now......i dont know mabe some day i have to bid my final goodbye to you all''
''Dadima please stop talking about this nonsence''
''Listen to me beta....hopefully this is a good chance to soften maan a bit and make him grant my request for which i'm asking you a favor''
''What is it dadima?''
''Please beta help me find a girl for my maan'' she pleaded holding her hands.
Geet couldn't speak.
She felt as if those words were like thorns hitting her.....''please help with this beta''.
''Ji dadima'' she somehow managed to blurt out.
* * * * * * * *
She sat at her home wearing a white salwar kameez unlike her usual jeans or capri with her hair open.
She looked at those photos of the girls,wrinkling her nose at all of them,managing to find one or the other fault in all of them.
She felt like laughing at her own stupidity,why would it matter to maan sir if i approve them or not.....at the end of the day it would be his decision.
Tears were building up her eyes.....even the thought of seeing him with someone else was killing her inside.
Fine any way i'm going to leave within a few days so i will never be able to see him ever.
''she can just love him all her her life without expecting him to love her back.....even if it means seeing him go into someone else's arms.....may be she will never accept it from her heart but will still try and stick to her decision.....anyway she dosent even know what he feels for her.......just then her thoughts got disrupted as she heard the door bang open with a dangerously angry maan coming towards her shutting the door behind him.''
Precap-Before she could say something or protest,he grabbed her her head and slammed his lips on her.
Love shreya

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