FF MILEY JAB HUM TUM MN,SG,SK part 7 on pg 23 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
tht was niceeeeee CS and samrat is elder then gunjan you made samrat age 22 and gunjan 19
Edited by Shafoo - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
thanks 4 considering our views ...............😃
pls start the ff dear cant wait 4 it...........
n its ur ff so what u want to write write it.............😃n then we will post our views on it......
n 4 the title pls b it be RBO or Mjht.........
thanks 4 PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey............love ur cs.
it sound nice.
update soon.
plz add me in ur pm list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey everyone plz check the cs once again bcoz i've putted the pics with the cs
thank u all for liking my ff alot


PART 1

it is late night n the clock strike to 12.00
suddenly two man goes in the dark black room
( it is our khanak's room bcoz its her birthday )

yes it is non another than khanak's room
mayank n samrat goes to her room n says
HAPPY BIRTHDAY KHANAK

she gets up n is very happy both mayank n samrat sings the song while sam bring the cake in front of khanak actually chocolate cake its her fav cake she became more happy n the backgroun music is ( dheem ta na dheem ta na dheem)(actually this backgroung music is of rbo)

khanak blows the the candles n then she is confused whom to give the cake first she sees both mayank n samrat
mayank n samrat says khanak
arre khanak har saal ki tarah is saal bhi apne dono komal or pyaare pyaare haathon se hum dono ko cake khilao she smiles n then mayank says acha batao tumhe pehle kisne wish kiya samrat opens his little mouth bhaiya mayank winks at him n then khanak says hmm bhaiya well har saal ki tarah is saal bhi mein yahi kahungi k aap dono ne mujhe ek saath hi birthday wish kiya hai n then sam says arre mayank bhaiya ye humne kya kar diya
m. kya kiya sam
s. winks at him n says arre bhaiya humne hamari khanak ko hamare shaan jeeju se pehle kese wish kar liya arre mana k aaj hi ke din excel college mein wo dono mile the uhu uhu
m. haan bhai hamari ladli ko koi esa mila tha jiske saath aj se theek 1 hafte baad uski sagai hone wali hai
khanak is just n says kya bhaiya aap bhi na n then gets up from the bed stands near the window
m. arre sam to kya huwa or wese bhi wo ek saal pehle hi to malaysia se aya hai or wo to hamare school ka bohut acha dost tha
s. haan or uski dono behnon se bhi to hamari khanak ki bachpan se hi bohut achi dosti hai to kya huwa k wo hamara hone wale jijju se excel college mein mili
khanak slowly smile
mayank sees this n is very happy
then samrat takes her phone n sees 1 msg sharp at 12.00
n says arre wese hamare jijju bhi bohut hoshyar hain k wo jaante hain k do bhai behno ko oops i mean teen behen bhaaiyo k beech nahi ana chahiye i mean k phone nahi kiya par sharp 12 par jese hi bara baje usne oops i mean unhone khanak ko msg kardiya
m. haan aur hamari khanak bhi bohut samajhdaar hai k wo jaanti hai k pehle har saal ki tarah hum pehle hi usse wish karengein
then suddenly samrat ka mood off hojata hai
n says par agle saal mayank consoles him
n khanak feels very sad n the tear comes into her eyes n then she runs to her brothers n hugs them n says nahi bhaiya aap esa mat kahiye mene msg isiliye nahi parha kyunk mein hamesha ki tarah yahi chahti thi k mere dono bhai hi mujhe pehle birthday wish karein
s.par bhai agle saal se to
mayank gives him an signal not to say more bcoz they love their sister alot
sam nods his head in yes
n then khanak says nahi bhaiya mein agle saal kya mein to har saal apne birthday k ek din pehle aap dono ke paas aajaungi mayank says arre pagli 1 saal baad to tu humme bhool hi jayegi kyunke teri zindagi mein koi esa insaan hoga jo tumse itna pyaar karega k tu to hume bhool hi jayegi
k. nahi bhaiya esa mat kahiye mein..
m. bas chup koi apne birthday k din rota hai kya haina sam
s. or nai to kya
m. khanak dekh agar kabhi bhi tere dil mein esi koi baat ho jo tum humme batana chaho tum zara bhi hichkichana mat kyun k pehle hum tumhare dost hain phir tumhare parents or phir hum tumhare bhai hain hmm
she nods in yes
s. acha bhaiya ab mujhe lagta hai k humme khanak or hamare jeeju k sms ko akela chor dena chahiye
khanak smiles a little
m. hmm bilkul sahi kaha chotte acha khanak tu sms parh kar so jana haan
khanak nods in yes
both of them goes
n khanak opens the sms n smiles n feels very shy n it is written HAPPY BIRTHDAY KHANAK jab tumhare bhai chale jaayein tab tum mujhe bolna taake mein tumhe uhum uhum call kar sakoon


precap : mayur sweet nok jhok
shanak meeting in night on her birthday
sajan meeting

hey friends plz tell me did u all liked the first part or not your comments are very precious to me n ya dont forget to give ur ideas i mean plz pm me some of the new ideas i mean for this ff for the next part ok

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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
Superb yaar
loving all teh three sharmas already
They are cute and rocking cant wait for the next part and Introduction with photos was freakingly good thanx for ur pm
U rock girl !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!precap rocks too!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
wow... yaar.. it was very nice.... waiting for all the pairs to meet up....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
awsme waitng 4 shanaks scene......cont soon...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18

hi dear
wonderful start
loved sayank and khanak convo
loved their bonding
awwwwww they were so sweet and cute.


now i m waiting for mayur scene

good update dear
keep updating


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Posted: 14 years ago
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AISHU...(im calling u tht! 😆)...
its awesome yaar......
waitin for shanak meet as well as mayur scene!...
thnx for the PM!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
ncie one!
interstiiiingg
updt soonn
add me in ur pm listt

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