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Posted: 14 years ago
pls update soon..... can't wait for the nxt!...Awesome update


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Posted: 14 years ago
plzzzzzz update soon......😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
i knew that geet was innocent.............found ur ff today only and read all parts @ one go.................poor geet lost the trust from her family and most importantly her maan but when now they know the truth i dont think so she can forget maan's distrust.............

it wud b better for her to leave them for some time now...............since in pecap u hv said it as leap i am expecting that geet wud hv moved to her maasi's place and still she wudnt hv spoke to maan abt it.............pl cont soon................wanna know wat happens next with her life................hope now geet's attire has also changed from ugly to presentable.............
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HI HERE IS MY NEXT UPDATE.........

PART-9

WEEKS HAVE PASSED BUT GEET NEVER FEEL TO STAY AT HOME BECAUSE OF HER FAMILY BECAUSE THEY DONT BELIEVE HER...
BUT EVERY DAY PREM AND GEET USE TO MEET AT THE COFFEE SHOP WHICH IS SO RELAXING ....
THAT COFFEE SHOP IS OF PREM'S UNCLE .....SO THEY CAN STUDY AS WELL AS HAVE SOME FUN TOO...
ONE DAY AFTER SEEING GEET FROM NEAR PREM DECIDED TO ASK GEET WHY SHE USE TO BE UGLY THOUGH SHE BELONG TO VERY RICH FAMILY....
PREM: GEET CAN I ASK ONE QUESTION TO YOU IF YOU ARE OK WITH THAT?
GEET: ASK....
PREM: WHY YOU ARE UG..I MEAN TO SAY YOU BELONG TO RICH FAMILY THEN WHY ARE YOU LIKE THIS?
GEET: BECAUSE MAAN USE TO LOVE ME EVERY WAY SO WHATS THE MATTER IF I AM UGLY....
TEARS FELL FROM GEETS EYES WHEN SHE SAID THAT....SHE KNOW THAT MAAN TOO IS NOT WELL BEING AWAY FROM HER...


MAAN LEFT THE COLLEGE ...HE DONT WANT TO BE MORE IN THAT COLLEGE WHERE HE INSULTED HIS GEET....
NOW HE JOIN THE KC AFTER WRITING HIS EXAMS PRIVATE..
ONE DAY WHEN ACCIDENTILY MAAN'S EYES MET RAHUL.....RAHUL IN FEAR RAN AWAY FROM THERE ....BUT MAAN WAS TOO QUICK HE CATCH HIM AND BET LIKE AN ANIMAL..AS KHURANAS ARE THE TRUSTY OF THE COLLEGE MAAN MAKES SURE THAT HE RUIN RAHULS CARRIER TOTALLY.....

AFTER 2 MONTHS :
MRS.HANDA WENT TO GEETS ROOM SHE THOUGHT THAT GEET MAY WENT TO THE COFFEE SHOP BUT WHILE LEAVING SHE FOUND A LETTER ON THE GEET BED ....
SHE BREAKS DOWN TOTALLY ....SCREAMING IN FEAR....
WHEN ALL CAME TO GEET ROOM THEY FOUND THAT GEET WENT TO HER MASI HOUSE ALONE..
MR AND MRS .HANDA IS WORRIED BECAUSE GEET DIDNT FACE THE OUTER WORLD YET AND HOW CAN SHE LEAVE ALONE LIKE THIS .........
MR. HANDA WAS GOING WILD WITH ANGER.......

WHEN MAAN HEAR THIS NEWS FROM ANNI ......
HE QUICKLY RUSHED TO HANDA HAWELI.......AND AFTER REACHING THERE MRS.HANDA INFORM HIM THAT GEET IS ALRIGHT AND JUST NOW SHE WAS ON PHONE ....
MAAN WAS NOT SURE WHETHER TO TRUST THAT GEET LEFT HIM OR THINK THAT MAY BE SHE IS PLAYING HIDE AND SEEK WITH HIM....
...ONE MONTH HAD PASSED BUT MAAN ANGER INCREASING DAY BY DAY BECAUSE GEET LEFT HIM HOW CAN SHE? SHE GONE MAD?.....
MAAN LOVES HER SO MUCH THAT HIS WHOLE ROOM IS FULL WITH GEETS PHOTOS (UGLY SANA LAUGHING)....
EVERY DAY MAAN WAKES UP AND SEE GEETS PHOTO AFTER OPENING HIS EYES ...HE WISHES HER GOOD MORNING AND TALK WITH HER EVERY DAY ABOUT HOW HE IS GOING WITH KC....AND HOW HE IS LEAVING WITHOUT HER....EVERY DAY HE LIVES IN HELL WITHOUT HER....BUT TAKING BREATH ONLY TO MEET HER ONCE ...WANT TO SEE HER...WANT TO FEEL HER...WANT TO ASK HER WHY SHE HAD DONE TO HIM......
HE KEEPS HIS CHEEKS IN FRONT OF GEETS LIPS TO FEEL HER TOUCH AND THAT TIME ALSO HE BLUSHES .....

THERE GEET EVERY DAY CRIES FOR MAAN BUT THEN SHE REALIZE THAT SHE IS HERE BECAUSE HE HAD NOT TRUSTED HER ....HOW CAN HE?
I ONLY TALK TO HIM THEN ALSO HE THINKS THAT CHEAP ABOUT ME.
WHY??????????

5 YEARS LATER:
MAAN CANT CONTROL HIMSELF WHEN ANNI INFORM HIM ON CALL THAT GEET IS BACK .........HE IS DRIVING IN HIGH SPEED FROM MUMBAI TO DELHI......HE WAS IN MUMBAI FOR SOME BUSINESS ......
BUT NO BADY MET GEET ....GEET REFUSES ALL

MAAN REACHES HANDA HAWELI ...HE RUSHES TO GEET ROOM BUT FOUND IT EMPTY....
MRS.HANDA: ARE MAAN BETA KYA HUA ? TUM ITNE PARESHAN KYUN HO?
MAAN: WHERE IS GEET ? IS SHE ALRIGHT? DID SHE SLEPT FOR SOME HOURS MAY BE SHE S TIED....? DID SHE EAT PROPERLY? .HE ASK IN ONE GO...
BUT HE NEVER ASK DID SHE CHANGES A BIT OR NOT?
MRS .HANDA : SHE SMILES AND THINK TO GIVE HIM A SURPRISE ...SO SHE DIDNT SAID ANY THINK ABOUT GEETS LOOK....
BUT AT THE SAME TIME FELT SAD THAT GEET NOT ONLY CHANGES FROM LOOK BUT IN BEHAVIOUR ALSO...
SHE DONT WANT TO MEET ANY OF HER FRIENDS AND TO THE FAMILY ALSO SHE TALK RARELY...
MRS.HAND: MAAN BETA GEET WENT TO MEET PREM......

MAAN DEFO DONT LIKE THAT...HOW GEET CANT MEET HIM FIRST BUT THAT PREM ..........
I HATE PREM....BUT I CAN UNDERSTAND HIM HE IS NOT MY FRIEND OR ANYTHING BUT GEET IS MINE THEN WHY SHE IS DOING THIS WITH ME ...
SHE KNOW I CANT LIVE WITHOUT HER...........

MAAN WENT TO HOME LOOKING DULL NOT IN A MOOD TO TAKE BREATH ALSO.................ANNI SAW HER BROTHER LIKE THIS AND DECIDED THAT NOT TO SAY THAT GEET REFUSES TO RECOGNIZE HER FRIEND AND ANNI ALSO.....

ANNI: HEY BRO DID YOU MET GEET ?
SHE WANT TO MAKE SURE DID MAAN GOT TO KNOW THAT GEET IS NOT LIKE HIS GEET...
MAAN: HMM .EEEE NO]
ANNI: SHE LAUGHS SADLY....SO NOTHING BRO...WE ALL CAN MEET GEET TODAY...BEACUSE ITS SAMEERA'S BIRTHDAY...SHE INVITED TO PREM AND GEET ALSO....AND GUESS WHAT THEY ARE COMING SO CHEER UP BRO.....
MAAN FEEL DELIGHTED AFTER HEARING THIS ...............BUT THAT PREM...
MAAN JUST FORGET IT...HE TOLD HIMSELF THAT NOT TO THINK ABOUT THAT PREM ....AND THINK THAT WHAT I WILL DO OR TELL GEET WHEN SHE IS IN FRONT OF ME............

ANNI FEELS GOOD THAT AFTER 5 YEARS HER BRO IS SMILING ONLY BY THE NAME OF GEET ....THINK WHEN GEET AND MAAN BRO MEETS IS WHAT STATE BRO WILL BE?

(SORRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYY ALL MY READERS I AM GOING SOME NAUGHTY NAUGHTY )

IN THE BED ROOM :
ON THE SAMEERA AND PREM BOTH ARE HALF NAKED......
PREM IS GOING WILD ON HER ..........KISSING ROUGHLY ON HER BREASTS ,BITING ,LICKING ,STROKING.....
TODAY IS SPECIAL FOR THEM ...BECAUSE SAMEERAS BIRTHDAY TODAY...THEY ARE IN LOVE AND IN RELATIONSHIP FROM 3 YEARS BUT NOBADY KNOWS IT....
BOTH ARE BREATHING HEAVLY...
SAMEERA: DO IT OR LEAVE.....
PREM: NO JAAN ...THIS WILL CARRY ON UNTILL WE ARE MARRIED AND SETTLES IN LIFE...
SAMEERA: WHAT EVER CANT HOLD ANY MORE .....
SHE WENT ON TOP OF PREM KISSING HIS CHEST AND BITING MAKING HER TEETH MARKS ...PREM MOANS BUT HE LIKES WHAT EVER SHE DO...
JAANNNNNN NOOOO HE OPENS HIS EYES WHEN SAMEERA TRAVELS TO HIS PANT AND OPENING THE ZIP TO FEEL HIM....
SAM NO JAAN PLEASE ...I TOO WANT THIS BUT JUST WAIT FOR SOME MONTHS ....
BUT ITS MY BIRTHDAY AND I WANT MY GIFT....SHE SMILES NAUGHTILY .....SHE TOOK PREMS HAND AND KEPT ON HER BREASTS ......
KISS IT...SAMEERA DEMANDED..
I ALWAYS DO IT...SO.
HE AGAIN WENT ON TOP OF HER AND CUB HER BREASTS ..
PREM: DO YOU KNOW WHAT WHEN I AM AWAY FROM YOU I ONLY THINKS ABOUT OUR........
SAMEERA: OUR?
PREM: OUR SR..
HE IS CRAVING MORE FOR HER NOW AS SAMEERA CUBBING HIS BUTTS LOVINGLY .....FIRST TIME SHE WENT WILD THIS MUCH ...BUT CAN SHE DO IF EVEY TIME HE COMES AND FILL HER DESIRES LIKE THIS...........

IN EVENING AT 7:00PM:
SAMEERA SLEEPING PEACEFULLY UNDER PREM HER HANDS AND HIS BUTTS ...AND PREM ON TOP OF HER ....HIS MOUTH OPEN ON HER BREASTS HIS SALIVA ALL OVER HER BODY....

SAMEERA WAKES UP AND SMILES SEEING PREM THAT HE ALWAYS SLEEP IN THE SAME POSITION...ON HER .
SHE STROKES HIS HAIR .... AND CALLED HIM.

PRECAP: GEET AND MAAN MEETING.......

PLEASE READERS HIT THE LIKE BUTTON AND LEAVE SOME MORE COMMENTS .............AND LONG COMMENTS I LOVE READING THEM........THANK YOU...TC.
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Posted: 14 years ago

dear

too many things in one part
too fast
5yr leap OMG
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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PLEASE HIT THE LIKE BUTTON................
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PLEASE HIT THE LIKE BUTTON😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting for maneet moments and wanna see those naughty scenes bt them continue soon yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
But wonder if Geet is going 2 4giv Maan
Awww and Maan luvs Geet 2 bits dat he drove from Mumbai 2 Delhi jus 2 c her
Cnt w8 4 der meeting---will Maan recognise Geet
Cont soon Xx...
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Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
so prem and sam r in love
waiting 4 maaneet meet

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