Abhay-Piya FF: Unlocking the Past Ch. 8/Pg. 27

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natashu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

@Suvi & Nomi

Guys, I understand that it's confusing. But I just couldn't give it away so quick! LOL

So, now you both can think a bit about it ..=D

Although I came up w/ Siddhran's character, I can't help but love him. Ahh!

LMAO.

Thank you for your comments!🤗

Edited by natashu - 14 years ago

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

and they swirl and vanish!
are they magicians?

just kiddingggggggg

oye balle balle shava shava her 500 words of story are up whohoooooooooo

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natashu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

@Aish

That's 800 words -_-

LMAO.

As for them being magicians, you'll know soon enough.. ;)

Thanks anyways! (:

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hershii

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

LOVE ITTT!!!

again i told u already how i feel about this part lmao!! but i shall say it again...it is awesomeee!!!

ur an amazing writer! and ur ff is a hit! WOOHOOO!!!

this sidhran dude sounds cute ;)

im waiting for piya to pop into the story...so make that happen soon!!

love ya!!!

hershi

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monika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Awesome , well done , perfect written dear thank u for pm

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Apoorva

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

I love it. I love it.

Its so confusing. I didnt understand anything. But I still love it. Ahahaha !

This Sid guy, seems to be nice. I love FFs which show Abhay having a guy-friend. He needs it. And who is Garima?

Cannot wait for Piya to come in !

Cool update ! Make it longer though next time.

You are awesome, as always.

Appy

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Hey Tashu!

Okay, i am still getting a hang of it and how this is going to work. But genetic memory intrigues me, especially the arguments that it is a thread that goes to past life as well through past life regression. I do feel that memories , like traits and features can be encoded in our DNA. Goosebump-ish.

I likes how you have started off and it looks like a Victorian novel in laces , especially the prologue. Please update soon because i want to know who Sid is and where is Piya!