TeRi ZiNdAgI MeRI ZiNdAgI HaI#MaAnEeT#2#part 54 page 23

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: SimplyAparajita
hehe. I knew it.. Someone will point it out.. She is discharged and she ran out of sudden reflex.. Lollz.. Assume kar lo buddy.. :) :) :) .. Bhavnao ko samjho... Just imagine.. Or simply consider it as a blooper.. :) :) :) thanks for appreciating my work.. :) :) :)

No probs dear.... we have blunders in the show... this is a small blooper we can take it easily....

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@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

this part is too funny... awesome update

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Sabmeratu.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Hilarious update---Geet doin www wiv a spring roll---h8 anurag though--plz cont soon Xx

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annie03

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

superb part yaar...i ws laughing like crazy n my sis ws giving me those wierdo looks....

geet is hillerious.....war with the role hahaha..n to top it all one landed inside manns shirt while othr on aaravs face..-..cont soon...awesome...mindblowing...

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namitasin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Luved ur ff so cute geet n macho maan hmm. M nuts not read this befor. Culd u plz pm me.

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aarthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

yaar loved it... still im laughing

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Shamima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Its all good aparajita your an awsome writer and deserve it (reply back to the reply you gave to my previous comment lol 😃
Anyways back to this chapter awe that was so funny geet and maan having a food fight in their own style but ergh maans dad had to come and ruin the fun and hmm I think arav has done somethig inthe past to piss maan off and awe geet and he food war with the springroll was too cute she should have just had it in her own style instead of copying them but awe the poor girl is trying to fit in their lifestyle and awe maan trying to help her but getting in the way anyways great update and can't wait to see her win the fight or should I say eat the springroll 😊