FF(M&G)'Two broken hearts fall in love' ~THREAD 1~

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Posted: 14 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: shah10
great update.

but precap looks kind od scary.

plz..update soon.

thx.

Thx. I am glad you liked it. I know the precap is kind of scary but you will soon realize the truth behind maan's actions.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: maanmishti
FAB UPDATE.........LOVED IT TO CORE.......UPDATE SOON😉

THANK YOU SOOO MUCH! glad u liked it.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#413

Originally posted by: sharmake11
oh god not fair zeynab yu left us with cliff hanger & the precap sounds scary but love Maaneet dance
& vicky & dadima

so cute playing

cupid between

Maaneet super

maverlous update

pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnn

srrry....i know the suspense must be killing you but thats one element which adds to the enjoyment and makes a person so attached to a story. but i am glad u loved it. will update soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: PLKG90
As vicky, OH........ MY..............GOOD.......HEAVEN!
You completely killed us from this update! Such a marvelous one! HAT OFF YAAR... you are the bomb,, Loved it!
"Maan: Why do you always try to run away from me?

Geet: stop it maan everybody is looking'

Maan: so what I don't care what people think'.

Maan than entwines his hands with geet's hands. Geet is starting to breath faster with every inch that maan takes towards her. Soon geet could even feel his breath on her shoulders and that is when maan whispers in her ears' " Do you really want to run away from me" which just sends shudders down geet's spine.

"Maan let go of me'please" Geet whispers.

Maan: It is your fault you look completely stunning in this white sari that I chose for you!

And that is when he makes his move and kisses geet right at the second that the song finsihes. Geet was so overwhelmed with her emotions at that moment that she didn't even protest and allowed maan to invade her mouth." This part was superb! Mind-blowing!
Can't wait anymore!!!!!! oh! until Friday!!!! PLZ YAAR UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!! pm me!!!!!!
Waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THANK YOU SO MUCH! It means a lot. i am glad u liked that part. i promise to update as soon as i can.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: muskanp

thank you so much! luved ur animated comment. its really nice!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy
OMG
Jaan Lewa Update🤢😍
Fabulous....Awesomeeeee part
Loved it
First of all...A bigg muah to Vicky..just love him
Yayy he made maan to wear the necklace instead😳
Haye looking totally Dashing MSK
Lolz..Love the tuth and dare part hehe
Hayeee and entry of Geet
Maan all lost...Geet in white saree😍
And omggg
Kurban hua?...love that seq
Love how maan was asking Q's to geet abt being away hayee😳😳
And the Best part
The Kiss
Dreamyyyyy hayeee..he kissed her..mar jawaa..and then she too.........😳
Loved the update a lott
Ohh noo..maan run..and explain geet
Scary precap
Hehe..Continue soon plz..Cant wait till Friday
Thankz a lot

Thank you so much for your luvly comment! I am glad you like Vicky.He is also one of my favorites too and i have a lot of fun when i am writing his dialogues.

Yea maan and geet were in their own world! they say something but act the complete opposite😆.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#417

Originally posted by: namitasin
Omg a kiss n a dance what else we need. Kudos to dadi n vicky. But what about precap. Update soon

Thx for your comment. i am glad u liked it. Yea daadi and Vicky are awesome. for the precap you will just have to wait and find out. i will update soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: sweet coco
OMFG!! This was so good....brings back good memories...absolutely loved it!!! And I love the pre-cap...super exciting! Nicely done!!!

Thx. I am glad i was able to bring you back good memories. I also miss them too!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: zahra15
absolutely amazing part.....thnk gog vicky put that dare in front of maan.......at least he was able 2 express wat he felt even though he neva wants 2 admit..........nw just hope that maan goes after geet 2 seek 4giveness or xplain himself........

....zahra....

Thx. glad u liked the update. Vicky is very naughty, but wants his brother to move on...which is why he places that dare. Maan will most likely have to do something except when i ended the update he was so shocked with himself. He could not believe what he had just done. He may tell himself he did that because of the dare...but we all know that that is not the only reason😆.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#420

Originally posted by: esha143
Nice update....he completed the dare,good for him....and I think the precap comes when he realizes the truth that he loves Geet....and is not able to accept his feelings like always....will be waiting for ur next update....😊

thx. Glad u liked it. Well i do not want to spoil it for u and tell u if your right, but that is a good possibility. You will just have to wait and find out.😊

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