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Posted: 14 years ago


me agen!😊

aww prt 3 iz so shocking nt only 4 nikki bt 4 us!

awww i cn understand hw she must hav felt meeting him once agen!
shez such a darling bt life iz alwaz so harsh towrz her1
Abhiz sudden appearance n that to after assuring 4m sonia that he left the tennis instructr post, must b vry shocking 4 her!
n her first fear must b wat if he wil get to knw abt their daughter1!!!😔
actually itz jus b'ful thing bt nikki iz in such situatn that she cant evn b happy n cant evn mak him happy by telling th truth!
Feelin so pitty of her bt still som or otha day that has to haapen so we can hope may b ths iz the day!!

nikki iz soo determind person bt when it comz to abhi she alwaz becomz weak n out of her senses!
she evn 4getz hez bad doingz (cnt sey bad doingz bt misundrstandinz in betwn th two😳) to her! n forgetz all her resolution !!..
now itz really gona b hard tim 4 her to hide her tru emotnz 4m him!
bt wateva may she doz her tru lov the same one she had yearz back 4 him ,alwaz refclectz 4m her eyez , her trembling,voice, her face ,hw she reactz to hez speaking n to hiz touch n by her every small action!😊😊😳

soo truuuuee-His eyes, voice, touch and essence evident in her every nerve and breathe but still hadn't have the courage to face him in real!!!!!

oww poor gal now ths iz gona mak thingz evn mor difficlt 4 her!
She wanted to deny to him and to herself, the internal upheaval that had beset her. Her peripheral awareness took in blue shirt
sleeves rolled over to above his elbow, neck open more than necessary, faded denim jeans and bare arms, body all evenly toned and infinitely masculine.☺️☺️☺️☺️

actuallyy itz not lik abhi iz lukin mor handsom he iz luking hot bt az he waz,bt by her sight hez alwaz luk mor handsom nd keep on day by day☺️
n thing iz shez watchng him aftr so long that hez appearing evn mor hot to her!😳😳😳😳😳😳
(by th way abhi iz alwaz HOT n handsom saduu☺️) bt 2day aftr so long lukin evn mor hot to her!!😉😳😳


aww hez so bad! y to trubl poor soule i knw she must b unable to think much coz of this- hez neck open more than necessary😉😳😳!!!

bt she too iz chaloo i mean she drive him to hez knees!😳😳😳😳 bt i lov ths thing of abhi that he alwaz appreciate n acceptz the affect she haz on him!😳
n he neva failz to praiz her inspite of the situatn- "You've grown even more beautiful than I remembered you being,"

nikki onlythinkz in mind bt he expresses1 bt not alwaz haan somtimez..😉😳
( somtimz hez saduu😉😳)

n ths iz iz the thing i dnt lik abt him 😉..
that he alwaz confusus othrzz specially her
his eyes flashes the hint of anger despite of compliment they offered. She got confused of his reaction, what she believed his words or his expression. 😕
From past five years of doing for herself alone found his offer offending. She was strong minded person who capable of doing her
own work without any help specially from him
thaz gud thing that she haz becom independent bt bad part iz the situation in which she bacame lik that1so painfull!

then their genuin talk bt havin so much nervousness wz quite good
i had neva imagind nikki wil start talkin to him evn if vry bittrly bt so soonn! ofcrse itz abhiz effect which brok her 😳stubbornness1! she cnt b angryy on him 4 long!!😊😊😊😊😊
nikki lovz him in such extent that evn if abhi wud hav done som mistak she wuld hav forgivn vry easily ! bt here it waz somthing
regarding a gal wid him! n no women can bear to c ny othr girl wid her own man!😡😡
so her anger iz so considerabl n so valid! bt i hope he wil mak her undrstand n wil b succesfull to prov hiz innocens n hav her back in hez life
sooon!!!
i soo hate him 4 ths😡😉poor gal!!!
A wicked grin overspread on his lips "Last room in the passage".
hw dare he to crack such a joke that too in ths situatn! 😲😉😆hez such a dumb yaa!😳😳
ma sadu doznt knw how n when to crackz jokzz1 bt i lov himmm😳😳
"you look pale, Nikki" and pass smirk "Are you that disappointed we not sharing the same room?"

ths tim m wid nikki! nyone wuld hav reacted th same way lik her....
koi kitna sahegaa yaar1 first of all thoz thing happnd wid her n now he iz in joking mood!😡
i mean he too iznt at fault az he too must b unaware of y she left that day widout in4ming nyone not evn him n left him too!
we hav to think 4m hez side too! god knowz wat he must hav thinking !
hez intensionz must b to mak her smile bt waznt knowing wat had she gone thrugh coz of him

arhhh😡 agen situation iz bad n no one at fault bt both corrct on thr own way1!!

ohh then th momnt they shared aftr that waz too emotnl !! mor 4 nikki!
she dint wana do nything bt unknown to hrself she agen reacted lik previous nd most importantly the way he wanted!😳
abhiz iz sooo smart he compltlyy knowz he haz effect on her bt did that delibrately to c whethr her feelingz r same lik b4! n she
passd in hez test!!!!😉😳😳😳
bt hez such a devil to annonce abt her reactn vry loudly,to mak hr embarrss n to ruin ther momnt!😈
bt i lov ths part vryyyyyy much!⭐️👏👏👏

n hez smirk!! iz so evil1😡😈😳😳
"You still react to my touch. Don't you than what is wrong with you in hiding it?"
seriously when he wil get to knw cauz of her pain he wil surely gt hurt the same way lik her!

(n then he wil lov her care 4 hr evn morr......!!!!!!! i hop ths day wil cum soon1😳😃😃😃)
how long shez gona mak him or herself a fool !!"Nothing wrong with me and I am not hiding anything. You have a problem in your
eyes".
bt ya thatz not a rite tim to giv up so easily in 4nt of him1
aftrall shez hurt that too sooo badllly!!
aww m seriously not liking her tearz nymore1😭

plzz mak everything perfect jeannie shale! coz u r th only jeannie regarding ths ff !!😳😃😃😃😃
aww n the flasback i mean wat waz happening ya!
u scared me this time
if that gal only ,waz seying thos thingz to him thn it waz kay bt y he replied the same way lik her??😭
plz unfold ths mystry soon m restless1
i thot nikki misundrstood n directly jumpd on conclusionz lik alwaz bt ths tim abhi havnt missdd ny chance to hurt her! n to mak her beleive that he cheatd on her!
bt wat ya hw cn he sey lik that?😡 watz goin on yaar?? i hate it!
Tears were unstoppable in Nikita eyes and Abhi words broken her heart and trust completely "I love you too sweetheart" and got
peck on his cheek from girl.
*abhi mera n nikki ka trust mat todnaa plzz

m speechless by reading ths !!!!
itz not at all lik he waz in subconscious state or waz he? *raises eyebroz*
then watz goin on?😡😡
oww shale jaldi likho yaar1 itz killing meee!!!!!!
it waz too bad i knw hw she must hav felt or i thot i cnt imagin ma self in her state!
bt evn in that situatn she waz thinkin lik ths n consider him not at fault??😲
She packed her bag immediately in her room and thought while doing that it's not his fault, he never promised anything to her, he
never confessed any feelings to her

it really hurtz!! when she sed..he knows very well I'm virgin so he only used me to fulfil his physical need and I let him to do 😭😭😭😭😭

aftr wat had happnd i mean wat she saw shez completely correct by her side1
her anger iz so valid!
i toh think shez being so soft towrdz him coz nyone els would hav ... i dnt evn imagine1

bt somwhr in her hrt n (mine too ( may b she knwz or thinkz hez not at fault or she took that deceigen so abruptlly!
wat she did waz right bt atlst she haz to confront him!! or she thought thr waz nathing left to discuss abt!!
aww m damn confusd now! n so hurt too!
i dnt knw watz thr in ua mind n wat r u upto1
so u agen succesful to mak evryone restless by ths part! n engage us evn mor to ur ff!😊😊
i lov it bt m feeling erhh i dnt knw😕😕😕
i wana knw watz the truth!! ASAP..........😡
really well written n so damn confusing!u agen did it shale!!⭐️⭐️⭐️👏


az i sed earlier th first thing which gona mak nikki so worried abt hez returning iz hez n Alyaz meeting!😳😊
n shez right at her place atlest accrding to the situatn n half truth which she herd n saw by her own thta dayaww poor nikki!
n poor Alya dnt evn knw watz goin on arnd her n wat her mothr goin through
n evn if she il get to knw shez too small to undrstand!
aww life iz too harsh!!!
too painfull n emotnl scene⭐️👏
She kissed her forehead and hold her small hand in her, whispered "I am sorry baby, mommy have to listen your pleas to return back
home. Kids are angel of god and sometimes sensed the circumstances approaching in future before elder.
aww really wel writtn dear! lov it the way u hav written the scene!⭐️
nikki-sonia part waz quite good!😊
"For putting you up there with him?"
so sonia got to knw abtt it1 itz a good thing coz she iz th only prson ovr htr whoz soo trustworthy n undrstandz nikki!!! n somtimes she can evn advice her somthingz to mak her undrstand watz correct n hw to deal wid situatn
coz nikki tooo iz so young to go through all these thingz
n aww sonia nevr lied bt nikki dint listen complete thing!
bt m happy that nikki cut off her in betwn ,so she dint get to knw abt abhiz working ther n soo she came
othawise she wouldnt hav came n then thr misunderstandingz gona b ther 4eva
atleast now abhi wil get a chance to tel her th truth,when he wil get to knw the actual resn of her leaving him1😕
their life iz so complicatd yaa!!!!!
i lov their convo n sonia assurin her abt keepin her secret! n to face th truth n to b firm n work wid abhi!
n then tensin lowerd a lil when sonia startd to do tariif of the abhimanyu modi😉😉😃😃
n nikki seying "You sound like a matchmaker after all😆😆😆😆

n the last scene..i mean AN scene! 😳😳😳
ohh i dnt beleive m seying it aftr all that happnd bt lov it when he hit her back to wall 4 sm answerz 4m her!😳😕
now i hope she wil let out all the pain,anger hurt upon him she had supressd yerz ago! n so he wil get to knw actual thing!😊😊
(i dnt hav to mention az itz bt obvious that itz lik gym scene!)😳😳
truely well written shale madam jus lov it to th core!⭐️⭐️👏👏
seriously abhika wo rup dekhke koi b dar hi jayega man😳😆1
bt he alwaz doz ths to her..coz he wanzt answerz 4m her,he wanzt 2 answer her quest jus to hav her back n hav hez lost lov back to him!!😃😳😳😳😊😊
lov the scn to th core❤️ ! hatzz offfff👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️

couldnt help but quote ths
dnt worry not all the thing othwise i would hav quote complete part or ff😳😆
"The conversation between us was always left uncompleted. The things we needed to discuss were never being spoken". She weakly
plead "Leave me", he bring his face near to her to replied "Are you nervous?"

He was as attractively masculine as he stood just inches apart from her, the sweating of his forehead and neck from the workout he
just had, the heady scent of man and seeping into her thoughts. But his eyes that held her, so cold, grey and threatening that she
found herself captivated in his boundaries with no choice.
aww pooor her!😉😳 he izz the boss whethr in sanjevani az doc or may b here😉😆😆😆😆

She stands like lifeless body that had only aim to follow the order of her owner meekly without thinking much, felt like his
mistress whose only job to make her owner happy anyhow.


first thing m curious abt hw he gona prov hez innosence n wat exactly happnd at that day!
n second z if it iz so obvious to understand jus by luking Alya that there iz resmblence of abhi hw shez gona hide that truth 4m him....
n third watz abhiz reactn gona b when he wil get to knw abt hez daughter ??
he wil deffntly lash out all anger on nikki n then wil apologize😕😕
i hav calld nikki poor!
bt mor than her poor me!

ab muje chain nahi ayega untill i read ur next part😡😕😳
so plzz rehem khao n update soon1😳
n unfold th truth soooooooon!
ur damn gud at keeping mysteries dear!
plzz dnt mak us wait longer
n update soooooon!!!
thanx so much 4 ths lovly update !!!
tc!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey shale ur ff is going very inntresting but i m 😕that abhi is negative or positive and either i can like him or hate him 😆but story is brilliant 👏and awsomly written agin by u
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update Shale!!

Abhi is ready to confront her and like always Nikki is running and hiding Alya.....oh it won't be fun when Abhi finds out that Alya is his daughter.

I hope the gf isn't Jia...LOL!!

WOnderful work on the VM!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hapinezz13



I hope the gf isn't Jia...LOL!!

I think everyone hopes the same 😉 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

that gal iz not jiyah i think!!

coz abhi wil neva sey lov u to her😕😕
coz we dont n he himself doznt knw wat wil she do aftr hearing ths 4m him😕 shez a psycho😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
To relief all u three Honey,Khush and Chaitu that girl is not jiah at all. Jiah doesn't exist in my ff, so chill but this girl has different name which i'll tell u later on but she really loves him a lot. Her love for him should not be compare with Jiah😆
Edited by wow123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: wow123

To relief all u three Honey,Khush and Chaitu that girl is not jiah at all. Jiah doesn't exist in my ff, so chill but this girl has different name which i'll tell u later on but she really loves him a lot. Her love for him should not be compare with Jiah😆

actually it doznt mattr whethr that girl iz jiah or sm1 els
the thing iz shez the reson of AN z duriyaaan! n nikkiz life trans4mation!
so whoeva she izz or wateva her name iz i dnt lik her!!
n i dnt lik abhiz behaviour too!
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Posted: 14 years ago

add her pic also in intro column!😉😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chaitali_an

actually it doznt mattr whethr that girl iz jiah or sm1 els
the thing iz shez the reson of AN z duriyaaan! n nikkiz life trans4mation!
so whoeva she izz or wateva her name iz i dnt lik her!!
n i dnt lik abhiz behaviour too!

Maaro maaro...anyone who becomes kabaab mein haddi in AN's LS is the villain!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN

Maaro maaro...anyone who becomes kabaab mein haddi in AN's LS is the villain!



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