[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134)

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Nirjhor105

@Nirjhor105

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Posted: 14 years ago

#811

am I the first one?

Edit:
I can't believe I am actually the first one. I was just reading comments and suddenly I see a new update.... what a pleasant surprise............It seems today is a good day or rather night for me.

the update is great. so steamy...I am really curious to know what's exactly is going on inside the girls' head. I am curious about evryone, because each of them are on different phase of relationship, so the reaction will be different....poor boys😆

Edited by Nirjhor105 - 14 years ago

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bhakbhartifan

@bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#812

Ok... I am officially hooked to this thread that I am reading the same update again and again.. 😆😆😆
Tell me this new girl is Senna???😉 Devi, are you going to update more today by any chance?? 😛

Fantastic Update!!!⭐️

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-Aicha-

@-Aicha-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#813

Devi!!

The updates have been fantastic! I'm so sorry I haven't commented in such a long time :/ been busy with work and everything!! But AHHH Is the new girl Senna? ;) hehe

Amazing updates! =)

PS - I had a dream about this FF and SG the other day! It was funny and veryy weird because Gauri was teaching this *idiot* (there is another word I would LOVE to use, but its not appropriate (: ) from my school a lesson and it was so funny to watch that I think i was laughing in my sleep xD Shiv had a smirk on his face LOL. AND I dreamt that this part was a part of the update xD (Yes, this was all in my dream, and I don't know how that happened!) Something is wrong with my brain...haha

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

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Posted: 14 years ago

#814

oh man I LOVE MAAN! lol! AWESOME update!!! i felt like while i was reading it i was in some kind of fog!

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

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Posted: 14 years ago

#815

my!

I didnt know if i should read on or stopped... that was too hot. they did nothing yet i felt everrything!! cant wait for him to actually get his hands on her... and i want HER LEGS!

lol whose gonna torture who now???

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wilddevil2010

@wilddevil2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#816

My jaw has started hurting from grinning continously.

Barbie! Gosh Gauri has managed 2 drive Shiv completely nuts. Unlike Maan he is still sitting their wondering as to wat is happening. He is going 2 lose his position of sex god.

Rathan is a lucky man. Hotties surrounding him.
D ice cube bit was hot.

Pls continue soon
P.S. Thanx for d quick update

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Sigma

@Sigma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#817

Shiv still couldn't figure it out despite tracing an ice cube up her leg 😲 I'm soo disappointed in him even his best mate recognised those legs before he did 😆

Maan didn't let me down tho, mr reliable 😆

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#818

To clarify - When Shiv was doing the ice cube bit - he was not aware that the woman was Gauri???

If so, what was he thinking.....n I wonder how Gauri is going to take that!

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wilddevil2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#819

''The
slit parted completely as her leg
was bent as his gaze traveled up
their gorgeous length … it was the
same one that has tortured his
feverish dreams since he turned
eighteen.''

If I'm not wrong these lines indicate that Shiv had recognised Gauri atleast subconsciously.